disclaimer:don't own nothing...'cept Sword and Rat
A/N:well, this chapter was gonna be the last one...however, i gots an other review...a really good one again(SO HAPPY!!!!SO HAPPY!!!I jumped all around my room reading it...i love good reviews)from Pirate Wench, and she said this:
...I no jack is older but it would probably make an interesting romance story...
As i really didn't intend to make it romance, but would love to try...i thought this...in the next chapter, (and maybe from then on, if ill write more), there will be romancy stuff...so if youre against that, stop reading at the end of this chapter(the main plot is pretty much finished anyway)...if youre for that, then keep waiting for more...im sure itll come extremely quickly, seeing i really have nothing else to do.....AND PLEASE REVIEW!!!
this chapter seems too short to me, but writing it made me really tense for some reason...i just get into my stories way too much....
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Broken Sword(chapter 4)
Sword did not take her eyes off the young man for a moment.She did not even blink.She started moving slowly closer.Jack followed right behind her, looking confused, and maybe even a little worried.Suddenly she started humming...a sad, mournful melody, which gave an extremely eerie effect to her. Jack almost shivered when the thought occured to him that she looked like she was preparing for her death. But she got closer, so close that now the young man was in full view, (skinny, tall, dusty brown hair, pointed nose, small, black eyes.Jack understood why the man's name was Rat)and along with the melody, she sang a few words out, just as loud so the man could hear it, "he' fiu'k, hol van a Kapita'ny?", then she fell quiet, even though Jack was sure that wasn't the end of the song.
The man looked up extremely quickly, visibly surprised and horrified, as if the song was an old memory haunting him.Then he gathered himself together, and smirked wickedly. "Well, well, well, if it ain't a dead captain walkin'?Though I 'ave 'eard rumours that yer aboard the Black Pearl now...I just thought 'at yeh were so soft that hell itself spat yeh out, knowing yer useless..." He said, and laughed an almost forced laugh at his own humorless joke."Tried to tell 'em that yeh sunk with yer ship, but apparently yer too famous for anyone to believe it...They thought yeh'd survive a little thin' like that."
Jack understood at once.So not all of Sword's crew was dead.This was the man who comitted mutiny against Sword. This was the man who left her on an island with a corpse, sunk her ship and caused the death of the rest of crew, Jack knew he was...Instantly his own hatred came to surface. He wanted to hurt the man. He wanted to kill him.He just wanted to do something to wipe that smug smirk off his face.To vanish that look of insane hatred from Swords eyes. But of course he knew better. Revenge was sweet, he knew...revenge was the only medicine. He stood helpless at Sword's side, everything about Rat's being reminding him of his old betrayer.
"'Ow did *you* escape the island we left yeh on?"His eyes flickered at Jack, who tried to remain as impassive as possible, then went straight back to staring down Sword."Blew that bloody girl full o' air and floated off?"He paused to chuckle."I'd imagine she leaked somethin' terribly."
Jack looked to see Sword's reaction.She never did tell him how she escaped.He never pressed the matter, and knew he was right, after hearing that last comment.Swords eyes were glazed with tears again, but Jack knew that she'd never let them flow before seeing Rat's blood.
"Yer own damned fault fer bein' so bloody stupid...leavin' me on such a big island yeh didn't know 'bout.Just on the other side there was a town. Wasn't no difficulty."Sword said in a forcibly steadied voice.She drew her sword, and in response Rat drew his.Just in case, Jack drew his also, but backed off."yeh sunk me ship.Me Silver Leaf..."she whispered dangerously, slowly edging towards Rat.Again, it was strange to hear such a pure, young voice tainted with such sorrow and hatred.
Rat just stood there smiling,"Aye, *Captain* Starwind, I did."
Jack saw that Rat mistaked Sword's sorrow as a weakness, but he knew he was wrong.Rat attacked with all his strenght.The fight was riddiculously short.Sword took advantage of Rat leaning forward to attack, moved in so close that his blade couldn't touch her, and holding her sword upside down, she raised her hand, so that her blade ran along her arm, and cut a horribly deep gash in Rat's neck.
He fell to the ground,first coughing, then choking on blood, clutching his throat, finally giving a great shiver, and dying.
Jack slowly looked up from the corpse, to find that just as the blood was pouring from the dead rat's throat, so were the tears from Sword's pale eyes. And she was singing.That eerie melody, now with soft words in a language that Jack didn't understand.So she mourned this rat's death even when she first saw him.
For some reason, the tears on Swords cheek relaxed Jack.He sighed, "Well, me evenin' at the bar is shot..."He muttered, trying to convince himself that he was really disappointed.
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end of not romancy story, if you want romance, not just fatherly love, keep waiting for a new chapter or a few.
I dont want flames for those, so dont say i didnt warn you, savvy?
cuz as i read stories from this site more and more, i realize how sensitive some people are of jack related romance stories...
A/N:well, this chapter was gonna be the last one...however, i gots an other review...a really good one again(SO HAPPY!!!!SO HAPPY!!!I jumped all around my room reading it...i love good reviews)from Pirate Wench, and she said this:
...I no jack is older but it would probably make an interesting romance story...
As i really didn't intend to make it romance, but would love to try...i thought this...in the next chapter, (and maybe from then on, if ill write more), there will be romancy stuff...so if youre against that, stop reading at the end of this chapter(the main plot is pretty much finished anyway)...if youre for that, then keep waiting for more...im sure itll come extremely quickly, seeing i really have nothing else to do.....AND PLEASE REVIEW!!!
this chapter seems too short to me, but writing it made me really tense for some reason...i just get into my stories way too much....
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Broken Sword(chapter 4)
Sword did not take her eyes off the young man for a moment.She did not even blink.She started moving slowly closer.Jack followed right behind her, looking confused, and maybe even a little worried.Suddenly she started humming...a sad, mournful melody, which gave an extremely eerie effect to her. Jack almost shivered when the thought occured to him that she looked like she was preparing for her death. But she got closer, so close that now the young man was in full view, (skinny, tall, dusty brown hair, pointed nose, small, black eyes.Jack understood why the man's name was Rat)and along with the melody, she sang a few words out, just as loud so the man could hear it, "he' fiu'k, hol van a Kapita'ny?", then she fell quiet, even though Jack was sure that wasn't the end of the song.
The man looked up extremely quickly, visibly surprised and horrified, as if the song was an old memory haunting him.Then he gathered himself together, and smirked wickedly. "Well, well, well, if it ain't a dead captain walkin'?Though I 'ave 'eard rumours that yer aboard the Black Pearl now...I just thought 'at yeh were so soft that hell itself spat yeh out, knowing yer useless..." He said, and laughed an almost forced laugh at his own humorless joke."Tried to tell 'em that yeh sunk with yer ship, but apparently yer too famous for anyone to believe it...They thought yeh'd survive a little thin' like that."
Jack understood at once.So not all of Sword's crew was dead.This was the man who comitted mutiny against Sword. This was the man who left her on an island with a corpse, sunk her ship and caused the death of the rest of crew, Jack knew he was...Instantly his own hatred came to surface. He wanted to hurt the man. He wanted to kill him.He just wanted to do something to wipe that smug smirk off his face.To vanish that look of insane hatred from Swords eyes. But of course he knew better. Revenge was sweet, he knew...revenge was the only medicine. He stood helpless at Sword's side, everything about Rat's being reminding him of his old betrayer.
"'Ow did *you* escape the island we left yeh on?"His eyes flickered at Jack, who tried to remain as impassive as possible, then went straight back to staring down Sword."Blew that bloody girl full o' air and floated off?"He paused to chuckle."I'd imagine she leaked somethin' terribly."
Jack looked to see Sword's reaction.She never did tell him how she escaped.He never pressed the matter, and knew he was right, after hearing that last comment.Swords eyes were glazed with tears again, but Jack knew that she'd never let them flow before seeing Rat's blood.
"Yer own damned fault fer bein' so bloody stupid...leavin' me on such a big island yeh didn't know 'bout.Just on the other side there was a town. Wasn't no difficulty."Sword said in a forcibly steadied voice.She drew her sword, and in response Rat drew his.Just in case, Jack drew his also, but backed off."yeh sunk me ship.Me Silver Leaf..."she whispered dangerously, slowly edging towards Rat.Again, it was strange to hear such a pure, young voice tainted with such sorrow and hatred.
Rat just stood there smiling,"Aye, *Captain* Starwind, I did."
Jack saw that Rat mistaked Sword's sorrow as a weakness, but he knew he was wrong.Rat attacked with all his strenght.The fight was riddiculously short.Sword took advantage of Rat leaning forward to attack, moved in so close that his blade couldn't touch her, and holding her sword upside down, she raised her hand, so that her blade ran along her arm, and cut a horribly deep gash in Rat's neck.
He fell to the ground,first coughing, then choking on blood, clutching his throat, finally giving a great shiver, and dying.
Jack slowly looked up from the corpse, to find that just as the blood was pouring from the dead rat's throat, so were the tears from Sword's pale eyes. And she was singing.That eerie melody, now with soft words in a language that Jack didn't understand.So she mourned this rat's death even when she first saw him.
For some reason, the tears on Swords cheek relaxed Jack.He sighed, "Well, me evenin' at the bar is shot..."He muttered, trying to convince himself that he was really disappointed.
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end of not romancy story, if you want romance, not just fatherly love, keep waiting for a new chapter or a few.
I dont want flames for those, so dont say i didnt warn you, savvy?
cuz as i read stories from this site more and more, i realize how sensitive some people are of jack related romance stories...