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A/N:at bottom...very important, please read...
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Broken Sword (Chapter 15)
When they arrived in Tortuga, Jack gave the crew half of the day off, except for the watch.They all went their way.Jack followed Sword, who, as she walked in a set direction, randomly stopped near walls, and banged her head in.Her forehead was red, slightly bleeding, and she whispered at herself angrily.To think that she endangered Jack, and forgotten all her common sense...
Jack was grinning, but trying to sound concerned."Now, love, stop doin' 'at...Yeh'll 'urt yerself."He said.Really, it was horribly funny.Now that Jack wasn't between Sword and her ship, he thought it hilarious. He knew she wasn't really hurting herself.But he knew she was very angry at herself.
He put his arm around her waist, and when she saw a wall, and tried to go toward it, he pulled her back...she knew it was funny to him, and she smiled at him, a very embarassed smile.
"It's nothin'"Jack said honestly.He would have already forgotten about it, if Sword wasn't so intent on feeling guilty.She really was too good hearted, when it came to some things, Jack thought.But when her mind was set, she was be ruthless.He remembered the cold anger on her face as she watched Rat die.
Stray, that man who beat Rose.He wasn't a good fighter. Sword told Jack that he was never in her crew, and she has only seen him once.It wasn't a real mistake, forgetting about him.It would have been very strange if she did remember.Sword knew that she didn't even had to look for him.He'd just show up, if they kept on walking the streets for a while...after all, he was seeking revenge for his brother.
And he did come.He showed up out of the usual crowded chaos the streets of Tortuga were, and pulled his sword without a word.Even though it took Sword by surprise, it took her no time at all to get him on the ground, weaponless.
Again, Jack watched from the sidelines as Sword was working.He loved watching her.When she meant business, she was not a little girl anymore.Then he could see why she was one of the best pirates around.She was serious and cold.
"Where is my ship?" she demanded."Tell me where the Silver Leaf is, or I'll kill you."
The Stray's eyes were full of hate.Jack knew that he had the same thirst for revenge as both him and Sword had had before.
But Sword didn't care, Jack knew.That meant nothing to her.Rat deserved what he got, and it's Stray's mistake for not knowing that.
The man still whimpered when her blade made a small cut on his neck."I don't know" he lied.He was afraid.
"Wrong answer"Sword whispered, making the cut a little deeper.A drip of blood rolled down onto Stray's shirt.
"Oh, yeh'll really kill me if I don't tell yeh... 'en yeh should know it was just a trick...the ship sunk.It's a' the bottom o' the ocean."he whimpered.
"I really don't like 'at answer either." she said, her voice still cold as ice.
"It's the truth!"the man cried.He obviously thought that was the best answer...this way they can leave him alone, and be none the wiser, so he stuck with it.
"Well, that won't make me like it any better, now, will it?." she said, mocking him with a slight smile, and making the cut deeper.Jack knew she hated torturing people, and felt more sorry for her than the man.
"A'ight!!!I'll take yeh to it!"Stray shouted desperately, "Jus' don't kill me!"
Jack saw how glad Sword was that the man understood that she was going to kill him no matter what he said, unless he showed proof.
They went back to the Pearl, and followed the man's directions to a mass of rocks and caves somewhere out in the ocean.Hidden among them, was the Silver Leaf, a long, fairly thin ship, with gray sails.It was almost too good to be a pirate ship, it was such a masterpiece...but then again, Jack thought, Sword was almost too good to be a pirate.
Sword grinned happily, and Jack felt almost the same way.Finally...Her ship.
Stray looked relieved to see them happy, glad that he might get out of this alive, and was just about to say something, when Sword turned to him, and unexcpectedly silt his throat.
"It would have been his life's goal to kill me anyway..." Sword said, apologetically."Can't show mercy to my enemies."
"No mercy..." Jack whispered."I would have done the same."
Sword hopped down from the Black Pearl onto a rock, and went to her Silver Leaf.She climbed aboard, and grinned at Jack, happier than he has ever seen her."I'll need some 'elp gettin' 'er out o' 'ere."she shouted at them, and Jack sent half his crew to help her sail the Silver Leaf out.
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Now listen, and listen carefully....Sword got her ship, plot done, the next chapter would just tell of how they lived after, and then it would be the end...but if you want me...i suppose i could drag it on, or maybe make them have an other conflict later in their life...but wouldn't that be rather tiering?tell me what you think...seriously...if i should keep it going, or finish it...no matter who you are, or if you already reviewed, if you are reading this, tell me your opinion in a review...tell me if you think i should stop or go on...
I have a faint idea of how to continue it, but would need to think it out some , but only if you tell me to go on...
otherwise i'll just forget it and maybe start a new fic...I got an idea for one about jack leaving his kid for will to raise...or something...yea, id need to think about it...i dunno if it was done before or not...just a stupid idea...anyway, i cant write anything else while im writing this, cuz i try to update twice, or at least once a day, and it takes all my writingpower out...
so tell me, ill wait for a while...then, if i get any requests to stop or continue, then ill decide...mind you, it might not be as good as it was so far, but i dont yet really know........
oh, and to jezzika sparrow...hehe...I wouldnt kill jack, hes the best thing ever:)
(Unless it is essential to the plot...but really, id just make him act dead, while hiding him under my bed)
love all you people!
A/N:at bottom...very important, please read...
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Broken Sword (Chapter 15)
When they arrived in Tortuga, Jack gave the crew half of the day off, except for the watch.They all went their way.Jack followed Sword, who, as she walked in a set direction, randomly stopped near walls, and banged her head in.Her forehead was red, slightly bleeding, and she whispered at herself angrily.To think that she endangered Jack, and forgotten all her common sense...
Jack was grinning, but trying to sound concerned."Now, love, stop doin' 'at...Yeh'll 'urt yerself."He said.Really, it was horribly funny.Now that Jack wasn't between Sword and her ship, he thought it hilarious. He knew she wasn't really hurting herself.But he knew she was very angry at herself.
He put his arm around her waist, and when she saw a wall, and tried to go toward it, he pulled her back...she knew it was funny to him, and she smiled at him, a very embarassed smile.
"It's nothin'"Jack said honestly.He would have already forgotten about it, if Sword wasn't so intent on feeling guilty.She really was too good hearted, when it came to some things, Jack thought.But when her mind was set, she was be ruthless.He remembered the cold anger on her face as she watched Rat die.
Stray, that man who beat Rose.He wasn't a good fighter. Sword told Jack that he was never in her crew, and she has only seen him once.It wasn't a real mistake, forgetting about him.It would have been very strange if she did remember.Sword knew that she didn't even had to look for him.He'd just show up, if they kept on walking the streets for a while...after all, he was seeking revenge for his brother.
And he did come.He showed up out of the usual crowded chaos the streets of Tortuga were, and pulled his sword without a word.Even though it took Sword by surprise, it took her no time at all to get him on the ground, weaponless.
Again, Jack watched from the sidelines as Sword was working.He loved watching her.When she meant business, she was not a little girl anymore.Then he could see why she was one of the best pirates around.She was serious and cold.
"Where is my ship?" she demanded."Tell me where the Silver Leaf is, or I'll kill you."
The Stray's eyes were full of hate.Jack knew that he had the same thirst for revenge as both him and Sword had had before.
But Sword didn't care, Jack knew.That meant nothing to her.Rat deserved what he got, and it's Stray's mistake for not knowing that.
The man still whimpered when her blade made a small cut on his neck."I don't know" he lied.He was afraid.
"Wrong answer"Sword whispered, making the cut a little deeper.A drip of blood rolled down onto Stray's shirt.
"Oh, yeh'll really kill me if I don't tell yeh... 'en yeh should know it was just a trick...the ship sunk.It's a' the bottom o' the ocean."he whimpered.
"I really don't like 'at answer either." she said, her voice still cold as ice.
"It's the truth!"the man cried.He obviously thought that was the best answer...this way they can leave him alone, and be none the wiser, so he stuck with it.
"Well, that won't make me like it any better, now, will it?." she said, mocking him with a slight smile, and making the cut deeper.Jack knew she hated torturing people, and felt more sorry for her than the man.
"A'ight!!!I'll take yeh to it!"Stray shouted desperately, "Jus' don't kill me!"
Jack saw how glad Sword was that the man understood that she was going to kill him no matter what he said, unless he showed proof.
They went back to the Pearl, and followed the man's directions to a mass of rocks and caves somewhere out in the ocean.Hidden among them, was the Silver Leaf, a long, fairly thin ship, with gray sails.It was almost too good to be a pirate ship, it was such a masterpiece...but then again, Jack thought, Sword was almost too good to be a pirate.
Sword grinned happily, and Jack felt almost the same way.Finally...Her ship.
Stray looked relieved to see them happy, glad that he might get out of this alive, and was just about to say something, when Sword turned to him, and unexcpectedly silt his throat.
"It would have been his life's goal to kill me anyway..." Sword said, apologetically."Can't show mercy to my enemies."
"No mercy..." Jack whispered."I would have done the same."
Sword hopped down from the Black Pearl onto a rock, and went to her Silver Leaf.She climbed aboard, and grinned at Jack, happier than he has ever seen her."I'll need some 'elp gettin' 'er out o' 'ere."she shouted at them, and Jack sent half his crew to help her sail the Silver Leaf out.
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Now listen, and listen carefully....Sword got her ship, plot done, the next chapter would just tell of how they lived after, and then it would be the end...but if you want me...i suppose i could drag it on, or maybe make them have an other conflict later in their life...but wouldn't that be rather tiering?tell me what you think...seriously...if i should keep it going, or finish it...no matter who you are, or if you already reviewed, if you are reading this, tell me your opinion in a review...tell me if you think i should stop or go on...
I have a faint idea of how to continue it, but would need to think it out some , but only if you tell me to go on...
otherwise i'll just forget it and maybe start a new fic...I got an idea for one about jack leaving his kid for will to raise...or something...yea, id need to think about it...i dunno if it was done before or not...just a stupid idea...anyway, i cant write anything else while im writing this, cuz i try to update twice, or at least once a day, and it takes all my writingpower out...
so tell me, ill wait for a while...then, if i get any requests to stop or continue, then ill decide...mind you, it might not be as good as it was so far, but i dont yet really know........
oh, and to jezzika sparrow...hehe...I wouldnt kill jack, hes the best thing ever:)
(Unless it is essential to the plot...but really, id just make him act dead, while hiding him under my bed)
love all you people!