disclaimer:still no
A/N:ok...two lovely reviews made me write more...though still, im not quite sure where to go with the story...
I might not get to update so much now, though, since i started a stupid romance fic in HP...but still...as long as school doesn't start...which wont be for a while, i go to a private one...you should still get enough of jack and sword fun....
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broken sword (chapter 16...yayness!!!)
Jack watched as the Silver Leaf started to make it's way out from among the rocks proudly.He saw the pride and happiness in Sword's eyes.
He watched her, and then, she wasn't there anymore.He blinked.Did he go blind?As the ship sailed out into the ocean, the crew suddenly disappeared. Sword was not at the helm, though Jack saw her there a second ago.
He quickly told to his crew to keep steering the Pearl, and called four of them with him, as he jumped into the ocean, and climb on the Leaf, to look for the missing captain, and the rest of his crew.They were nowhere to be found.
Was this a trick Sword was playing on him? It couldn't be.It was like they just evaporated...there was no trace of them anywhere.
"Well, this is interesting..."Jack muttered, trying to conceal how worried he was.He searched for a while, searched the ship over again, the water, before the idea hit him.
It was a trap.Rat, Crooks, and Stray, must have hid the ship there so even if Sword finds it, something will happen to her...this place...it must have been somewhere very special indeed.
Jack knew that curiosity killed the cat...and he knew he'd do well not to search around longer.Something happened to Sword and the rest of them, and until he knew what, he didn't dare follow them.
So, he did the only thing he could do.Left some of his crew on the Pearl, and he, took the Leaf to look for Rose.She knew where Crooks was, and Crooks knew what happened.He was the last remaining person who knew what was going on, so it will be hard to get him to talk, but Jack could be very persuasive if he wanted to be.
He remembered, that before Rose left, she told them that she'd be looking for a job at Port St.Frances, and headed there, after hiding the Silver Leaf near Isla de Muerta.
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It took him no time at all to find her, she was at the decks, arguing with an oficial looking man, as much as Jack heard, about how much money she'd get for taking care of incoming ships and boats, and helping out the people who came with them.He noticed that she kept her pirate brand well covered up, and waited until she spotted him, when she was done with the man, looking a bit down.
She rushed to him, looking surprised."Didn't think I'd see yeh 'gain." she stated.
"I need yeh to tell me where Crooks is."Jack said, trying not to show much emotion.
"Why? What's wrong?"she asked, looking a little anxious.Jack told her the whole thing, and she was very interested.
"How 'bout I go with yeh? I could just tell yeh where 'e is, but I would really like to 'elp yeh go look for 'er.I am 'er sister after all...though that never bothered me before, three days in 'er place made me rather fond o' 'er."she explained.
Jack thought a while, then nodded in agreement."As long as yeh don't get in the way."
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so you tell me...where should sword and co. be taken? to the future, some other kind of dimension, or just quite plainly killed, or somewhere else?
i need you to tell me, because i cant decide...
V tell me here V
A/N:ok...two lovely reviews made me write more...though still, im not quite sure where to go with the story...
I might not get to update so much now, though, since i started a stupid romance fic in HP...but still...as long as school doesn't start...which wont be for a while, i go to a private one...you should still get enough of jack and sword fun....
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broken sword (chapter 16...yayness!!!)
Jack watched as the Silver Leaf started to make it's way out from among the rocks proudly.He saw the pride and happiness in Sword's eyes.
He watched her, and then, she wasn't there anymore.He blinked.Did he go blind?As the ship sailed out into the ocean, the crew suddenly disappeared. Sword was not at the helm, though Jack saw her there a second ago.
He quickly told to his crew to keep steering the Pearl, and called four of them with him, as he jumped into the ocean, and climb on the Leaf, to look for the missing captain, and the rest of his crew.They were nowhere to be found.
Was this a trick Sword was playing on him? It couldn't be.It was like they just evaporated...there was no trace of them anywhere.
"Well, this is interesting..."Jack muttered, trying to conceal how worried he was.He searched for a while, searched the ship over again, the water, before the idea hit him.
It was a trap.Rat, Crooks, and Stray, must have hid the ship there so even if Sword finds it, something will happen to her...this place...it must have been somewhere very special indeed.
Jack knew that curiosity killed the cat...and he knew he'd do well not to search around longer.Something happened to Sword and the rest of them, and until he knew what, he didn't dare follow them.
So, he did the only thing he could do.Left some of his crew on the Pearl, and he, took the Leaf to look for Rose.She knew where Crooks was, and Crooks knew what happened.He was the last remaining person who knew what was going on, so it will be hard to get him to talk, but Jack could be very persuasive if he wanted to be.
He remembered, that before Rose left, she told them that she'd be looking for a job at Port St.Frances, and headed there, after hiding the Silver Leaf near Isla de Muerta.
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It took him no time at all to find her, she was at the decks, arguing with an oficial looking man, as much as Jack heard, about how much money she'd get for taking care of incoming ships and boats, and helping out the people who came with them.He noticed that she kept her pirate brand well covered up, and waited until she spotted him, when she was done with the man, looking a bit down.
She rushed to him, looking surprised."Didn't think I'd see yeh 'gain." she stated.
"I need yeh to tell me where Crooks is."Jack said, trying not to show much emotion.
"Why? What's wrong?"she asked, looking a little anxious.Jack told her the whole thing, and she was very interested.
"How 'bout I go with yeh? I could just tell yeh where 'e is, but I would really like to 'elp yeh go look for 'er.I am 'er sister after all...though that never bothered me before, three days in 'er place made me rather fond o' 'er."she explained.
Jack thought a while, then nodded in agreement."As long as yeh don't get in the way."
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so you tell me...where should sword and co. be taken? to the future, some other kind of dimension, or just quite plainly killed, or somewhere else?
i need you to tell me, because i cant decide...
V tell me here V