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ok, one or two more chapters, and it's over.
but i think i will make a sequel...or kind of...ill have to think about it...
plust by the time i get to it, ill already have school to deal with...
i dont know yet...yea, ill think about it...
no go read and review!!!!:)
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Jack struggled to hold on to his sanity in the swirling shadows.He forgot why he was there, and why he should leave.He felt like he was becoming one with the screaming figures around him, and they were sucking what little life he had due to the ring out of him.
How in the world did Sword bare this for days? As he thought about Sword, he remembered that he had to get back to the ship that she was waiting on...his precious Black Pearl, and his precious Sword.
He found with non-existing eyes the gate from which he has drifted quite far from, and made his way to it slowly, hovering in nothingness.Now that his mind focused on something, it was much easier to bare the chaos around him.
He reached the gate, and stumbled through it, feeling his body come back to reality, as it left the shadow world. He dropped straight to the ground, panting, feeling weaker than ever.
He opened his eyes to see Kaptafae's black, yet transparent feet, then looking up, the young boy's figure, watching him with bloodred eyes, a smile on her lips.She quickly changed into Sword's form, not the smoky shadow, but the solid one, like the first time she tried to lure him into the world of the dead.
"A stronger will than I thought you had...I suppose you deserve the life you regained now."she said, with an evil smirk that looked repulsive on Sword's loving face.
"Yeh didn't think I'd come back,love?" Jack smirked back, happy that he proved her wrong."Remember, I'm Captain Jack Sparrow, love...don't die so easily."
"If you didn't even have a will to come back out, you didn't deserve to, right?"she said, logically."I didn't send you in just to be mean...honest."she said, but her wicked chuckle made it seem otherwise.
"I don't feel any different."declared Jack after looking over himself.
"But if you take off both rings, you will still remain with a live body.Don't test it out here...in here, you will stay no matter what.Go on out, go to the girl.Ask her if she sees you fading when you take them off." Kaptafae said, in a strange way, as if she was happy for him, and also as if she wished he'd leave as soon as he can.
Jack didn't want to stay there any more than she wanted him to.He thanked her briefly, and went back to the living world.
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As soon as he boarded the Pearl, Sword swung herself on him. He was just as glad to see her, to have her back on board. She brings good luck to the ship, he though.
He picked her up, and sat her down on a barrel, and just looked into her eyes for a second, his hands cupping her face.The moonlight bounced off her in a horribly beautiful way, like the night he first understood his love for her.
Moonlight? When he went in through the Shadow Gate it was only early afternoon, and he didn't spend more than a twenty minutes there.
"'Ow long was I gone, love?"he asked indifferently, hiding his true concern.
"Three days.The crew was goin' to leave, certain 'at yeh were dead, but I stopped 'em.I knew yeh'd come back."she said, her eyes glittering with tears, which were turned into silver by the faint light of the moon.But she was happy.She threw her arms around him, and kissed him so eagerly as if she never thought she'd ever see him again.
Jack pulled away after a while,"I'm sorry I didn't come sooner, love.I thought I was only gone for less than an hour."he apologised, truly feeling sorry for making her cry.
"It's a'ight.It's the world o' the dead.Time is porobably not goin' to pass the same as here."she said, twirling his hair around her finger."I just didn't know 'ow long I'd 'ave to wait."She chuckled, "I'm not very patient when it comes to waiting for you..."
Gibbs interupted, and Jack and Sword fought the urge to jump in surprise.They had forgotten about the rest of the crew."Where we be goin', Captain?"he asked.
"Back to Port au Prince, mate!We're gettin' that treasure!" he declared, and that reminded him.He put his hands in Swords, and told her to take off the rings. She pulled them off carefully, and kissed him again, when he stayed, alive and real.Captain Jack Sparrow really came back to life.
ok, one or two more chapters, and it's over.
but i think i will make a sequel...or kind of...ill have to think about it...
plust by the time i get to it, ill already have school to deal with...
i dont know yet...yea, ill think about it...
no go read and review!!!!:)
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Jack struggled to hold on to his sanity in the swirling shadows.He forgot why he was there, and why he should leave.He felt like he was becoming one with the screaming figures around him, and they were sucking what little life he had due to the ring out of him.
How in the world did Sword bare this for days? As he thought about Sword, he remembered that he had to get back to the ship that she was waiting on...his precious Black Pearl, and his precious Sword.
He found with non-existing eyes the gate from which he has drifted quite far from, and made his way to it slowly, hovering in nothingness.Now that his mind focused on something, it was much easier to bare the chaos around him.
He reached the gate, and stumbled through it, feeling his body come back to reality, as it left the shadow world. He dropped straight to the ground, panting, feeling weaker than ever.
He opened his eyes to see Kaptafae's black, yet transparent feet, then looking up, the young boy's figure, watching him with bloodred eyes, a smile on her lips.She quickly changed into Sword's form, not the smoky shadow, but the solid one, like the first time she tried to lure him into the world of the dead.
"A stronger will than I thought you had...I suppose you deserve the life you regained now."she said, with an evil smirk that looked repulsive on Sword's loving face.
"Yeh didn't think I'd come back,love?" Jack smirked back, happy that he proved her wrong."Remember, I'm Captain Jack Sparrow, love...don't die so easily."
"If you didn't even have a will to come back out, you didn't deserve to, right?"she said, logically."I didn't send you in just to be mean...honest."she said, but her wicked chuckle made it seem otherwise.
"I don't feel any different."declared Jack after looking over himself.
"But if you take off both rings, you will still remain with a live body.Don't test it out here...in here, you will stay no matter what.Go on out, go to the girl.Ask her if she sees you fading when you take them off." Kaptafae said, in a strange way, as if she was happy for him, and also as if she wished he'd leave as soon as he can.
Jack didn't want to stay there any more than she wanted him to.He thanked her briefly, and went back to the living world.
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As soon as he boarded the Pearl, Sword swung herself on him. He was just as glad to see her, to have her back on board. She brings good luck to the ship, he though.
He picked her up, and sat her down on a barrel, and just looked into her eyes for a second, his hands cupping her face.The moonlight bounced off her in a horribly beautiful way, like the night he first understood his love for her.
Moonlight? When he went in through the Shadow Gate it was only early afternoon, and he didn't spend more than a twenty minutes there.
"'Ow long was I gone, love?"he asked indifferently, hiding his true concern.
"Three days.The crew was goin' to leave, certain 'at yeh were dead, but I stopped 'em.I knew yeh'd come back."she said, her eyes glittering with tears, which were turned into silver by the faint light of the moon.But she was happy.She threw her arms around him, and kissed him so eagerly as if she never thought she'd ever see him again.
Jack pulled away after a while,"I'm sorry I didn't come sooner, love.I thought I was only gone for less than an hour."he apologised, truly feeling sorry for making her cry.
"It's a'ight.It's the world o' the dead.Time is porobably not goin' to pass the same as here."she said, twirling his hair around her finger."I just didn't know 'ow long I'd 'ave to wait."She chuckled, "I'm not very patient when it comes to waiting for you..."
Gibbs interupted, and Jack and Sword fought the urge to jump in surprise.They had forgotten about the rest of the crew."Where we be goin', Captain?"he asked.
"Back to Port au Prince, mate!We're gettin' that treasure!" he declared, and that reminded him.He put his hands in Swords, and told her to take off the rings. She pulled them off carefully, and kissed him again, when he stayed, alive and real.Captain Jack Sparrow really came back to life.
