A/N:ohhh damn...one more chapter, then the end..maybe an epilouge...
but im really thinking about the new story now... so its quite possible that ill write it...whould you want to read it?...i think it would probably be about jack and swords daughter...idea interests you?
well, it wont be as good as this i think, but thats cause i fell in love with writing this story so much...
now go read...hehe
and REVIEW!!!!
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The Black Pearl arrived back to Port au Prince, and they found the old traveler still in the cave.
"Hahn!" Sword yelled when she saw him.
Jack was surprised.He told her of what happened while he was rescuing her, but definitely not the old man's name.
Sword ran a little closer to him, and looked at him with familiarity.
"Yeh know this man?" Jack asked her.
"Aye!'E's the traveler Hajime Hahn" she said, to Jack, then turned back to the man."Yeh wantin' to kill me now, for that pile o gold in there? Locking me into that shadow world? Didn't seem to 'ate me so much when me parents gave yeh food to keep you alive, an' money to keep yeh goin' on yer way...no...yeh stayed for months, an' thought me anythin' I wanted to know.Fightin' like yeh, 'at Hungarian song, me mourning song...I looked up to yeh for knowing so much, about so many places..."
Hajime looked a little embarassed, but got over it really quickly."I've spent all my life looking for this treasure...I no give up because compassion for a little girl!"he said."Give me the rings, or I'll have to kill you both!"
Jack just noticed that Hahn wasn't defenseless anymore, when he pulled a long, thin sword unlike any Jack has seen before.Still, he was just an old man. Jack laughed a little, then became a little annoyed."Yeh can't excpect me to fight a weak old man, like yerself, mate."he said.
"Jack, 'e's old, but 'e's a good samurai.'At's what 'em eastern people call their swordsmen.I learned most of what I know from him." Sword warned Jack. "Can I fight him instead?"
Jack looked at her, and realized that her eyes were burning with anticipation. She wanted to fight him to know how much better she got, how much she improved.Also, to some degree, this man betrayed her also. Jack stepped aside, grinning at Sword, who drew her weapon and returned the grin.
At once, Hahn attacked, and it seemed as if they practiced every move of their fight previously.They flowed through movements Jack has never even thought of before.Jack found it amazing to watch them, and almost forgot his concern for Sword.
"Oww!" cried the girl, as a lightning fast blade cut into her side."Jack, throw me yer Sword!" she asked, and he did.
The girl caught it while never taking her eyes off Hahn, and kept on fighting, ignoring the deep cut she recieved.She used both of her swords now, defending with one, attacking with the other, but changing it whenever it was convenient.
Then, after minutes of tireless fighting, Jack almost didn't notice when Sword threw an attack out of her way with one blade, opening up Hahn's entire body, and stabbed the man in the heart, sinking her sword in the traveler's flesh as far as she could.
Hajime Hahn died quickly, and Jack surpressed a shiver and took off his hat as he heard Sword start her eerie song, and the cave echoed her.
"Fekete me'ly vizen, fehe'r szikla'k alatt
Halkan e's csendesen, kalo'z hajo' halad
A'rbo'ca meg torott, vitorla rongya lo'g
e's a fede'lzeten egy csomo' holt kalo'z
..."
but im really thinking about the new story now... so its quite possible that ill write it...whould you want to read it?...i think it would probably be about jack and swords daughter...idea interests you?
well, it wont be as good as this i think, but thats cause i fell in love with writing this story so much...
now go read...hehe
and REVIEW!!!!
___________________________________________
The Black Pearl arrived back to Port au Prince, and they found the old traveler still in the cave.
"Hahn!" Sword yelled when she saw him.
Jack was surprised.He told her of what happened while he was rescuing her, but definitely not the old man's name.
Sword ran a little closer to him, and looked at him with familiarity.
"Yeh know this man?" Jack asked her.
"Aye!'E's the traveler Hajime Hahn" she said, to Jack, then turned back to the man."Yeh wantin' to kill me now, for that pile o gold in there? Locking me into that shadow world? Didn't seem to 'ate me so much when me parents gave yeh food to keep you alive, an' money to keep yeh goin' on yer way...no...yeh stayed for months, an' thought me anythin' I wanted to know.Fightin' like yeh, 'at Hungarian song, me mourning song...I looked up to yeh for knowing so much, about so many places..."
Hajime looked a little embarassed, but got over it really quickly."I've spent all my life looking for this treasure...I no give up because compassion for a little girl!"he said."Give me the rings, or I'll have to kill you both!"
Jack just noticed that Hahn wasn't defenseless anymore, when he pulled a long, thin sword unlike any Jack has seen before.Still, he was just an old man. Jack laughed a little, then became a little annoyed."Yeh can't excpect me to fight a weak old man, like yerself, mate."he said.
"Jack, 'e's old, but 'e's a good samurai.'At's what 'em eastern people call their swordsmen.I learned most of what I know from him." Sword warned Jack. "Can I fight him instead?"
Jack looked at her, and realized that her eyes were burning with anticipation. She wanted to fight him to know how much better she got, how much she improved.Also, to some degree, this man betrayed her also. Jack stepped aside, grinning at Sword, who drew her weapon and returned the grin.
At once, Hahn attacked, and it seemed as if they practiced every move of their fight previously.They flowed through movements Jack has never even thought of before.Jack found it amazing to watch them, and almost forgot his concern for Sword.
"Oww!" cried the girl, as a lightning fast blade cut into her side."Jack, throw me yer Sword!" she asked, and he did.
The girl caught it while never taking her eyes off Hahn, and kept on fighting, ignoring the deep cut she recieved.She used both of her swords now, defending with one, attacking with the other, but changing it whenever it was convenient.
Then, after minutes of tireless fighting, Jack almost didn't notice when Sword threw an attack out of her way with one blade, opening up Hahn's entire body, and stabbed the man in the heart, sinking her sword in the traveler's flesh as far as she could.
Hajime Hahn died quickly, and Jack surpressed a shiver and took off his hat as he heard Sword start her eerie song, and the cave echoed her.
"Fekete me'ly vizen, fehe'r szikla'k alatt
Halkan e's csendesen, kalo'z hajo' halad
A'rbo'ca meg torott, vitorla rongya lo'g
e's a fede'lzeten egy csomo' holt kalo'z
..."