Mary-Fricking-Sue 2: This Time It's Not Mary Fricking Sue 1!!!
A fairy changeling, Mary Sue, sister of Mary Sue, is in search of the truth regarding her sister's death. She has something Artemis wants. MAGGOTITE!
Hello! I am Ice Raider, also known as Venom, and I am writing this with my little bro, Horus, previously known as Raziel! This is a sequel to Mary Fricking Sue. In this story the Mary Sue and Artemis have one of those cutesy friend relationships!
You may notice that Mary Sue's name is now two names longer! This is because this is a different Mary Sue. Maybe you recognise my character's name in her name, and maybe you see your own character in her. If your character is similar to Mary Sue, rewrite your story. If your character's name is part of MS's name, you should definitely rewrite!
Don't ban us. If you write crap Mary Sues you need to learn to write.
Chapter One: In Which We Meet Today's Mary Sue Mary Sue Jada Claudette Tara Marina Aurora Evelyn Mara Alanna Melody (Insert Other Exotic Names Here) Longman sighed and flicked her black hair back from her dark eyes, set on a pretty Asian face.
She opened up her mailbox and pulled out a single letter. From Majestic 12. She cracked it open and read, tears pouring down her face like piss off a roof.
Mary Sue Jada Claudette Tara Marina Aurora Evelyn Mara Alanna Melody (Insert Other Exotic Names Here) Longman was the adopted sister of Mary Sue Jada Marina Aurora Evelyn Mara Alanna Melody (Insert Other Exotic Names Here) Longman.
She was adopted because she was a fairy changeling. She had an IQ the same as her sister's and was very beautiful! Her most prized possession was a blue amulet that let her summon the mystical creature:
MAGGOTITE!!! A giant maggot with the power to rot buildings to pieces! But Maggotite never used his powers, he just slept calmly, until Mary Sue summoned him.
Mary Sue stood up. She would find Artemis Fowl, and ask him for the truth. She had never trusted Majestic 12, using her super fairy powers she had mesmerised the Commander and he had told her everything, then he turned into a fish.
Eight Hours Later
Mary Sue landed in Dublin, Ireland. She smoothed down her dress over her slender frame and began to daintily tiptoe her way toward a taxi.
Artemis Fowl scowled moodily. He was dressed immaculately in a suit, and was back to his evil old self, driving down the road, in Dublin.
A car slammed into Mary Sue, throwing her tiny frame onto the road. "OH GOD!" Screamed Artemis, leaping out of his car, and rushing around in circles. Mary sue stood up shakily. "Oh, Artemis Fowl!"
Artemis gasped, a silly grin overtaking his features, then he noticed the amulet hanging around the girl's neck.
A fairy changeling, Mary Sue, sister of Mary Sue, is in search of the truth regarding her sister's death. She has something Artemis wants. MAGGOTITE!
Hello! I am Ice Raider, also known as Venom, and I am writing this with my little bro, Horus, previously known as Raziel! This is a sequel to Mary Fricking Sue. In this story the Mary Sue and Artemis have one of those cutesy friend relationships!
You may notice that Mary Sue's name is now two names longer! This is because this is a different Mary Sue. Maybe you recognise my character's name in her name, and maybe you see your own character in her. If your character is similar to Mary Sue, rewrite your story. If your character's name is part of MS's name, you should definitely rewrite!
Don't ban us. If you write crap Mary Sues you need to learn to write.
Chapter One: In Which We Meet Today's Mary Sue Mary Sue Jada Claudette Tara Marina Aurora Evelyn Mara Alanna Melody (Insert Other Exotic Names Here) Longman sighed and flicked her black hair back from her dark eyes, set on a pretty Asian face.
She opened up her mailbox and pulled out a single letter. From Majestic 12. She cracked it open and read, tears pouring down her face like piss off a roof.
Mary Sue Jada Claudette Tara Marina Aurora Evelyn Mara Alanna Melody (Insert Other Exotic Names Here) Longman was the adopted sister of Mary Sue Jada Marina Aurora Evelyn Mara Alanna Melody (Insert Other Exotic Names Here) Longman.
She was adopted because she was a fairy changeling. She had an IQ the same as her sister's and was very beautiful! Her most prized possession was a blue amulet that let her summon the mystical creature:
MAGGOTITE!!! A giant maggot with the power to rot buildings to pieces! But Maggotite never used his powers, he just slept calmly, until Mary Sue summoned him.
Mary Sue stood up. She would find Artemis Fowl, and ask him for the truth. She had never trusted Majestic 12, using her super fairy powers she had mesmerised the Commander and he had told her everything, then he turned into a fish.
Eight Hours Later
Mary Sue landed in Dublin, Ireland. She smoothed down her dress over her slender frame and began to daintily tiptoe her way toward a taxi.
Artemis Fowl scowled moodily. He was dressed immaculately in a suit, and was back to his evil old self, driving down the road, in Dublin.
A car slammed into Mary Sue, throwing her tiny frame onto the road. "OH GOD!" Screamed Artemis, leaping out of his car, and rushing around in circles. Mary sue stood up shakily. "Oh, Artemis Fowl!"
Artemis gasped, a silly grin overtaking his features, then he noticed the amulet hanging around the girl's neck.