Disclaimer: I think you basically know what goes here. I don't own YYH etc.
This is my first fic EVER. I mean I have gotten ideas in the past but I
guess I was simply too lazy to make a fic. So this may not be the best
quality. So please read and review and leave criticism if you must! Thank
you! ~WindCharmer
KEY- when there are quotations, the character is speaking, if not, it is a thought
= Kurama = Buton ~ = Florinda (my original character) + = Hiei // = Narration
Chapter 1- Meeting//Believeing
~The rays of the sun were shining down on the warm spring-summer day. He sat on a branch near the top of the tree, in the shade. I look away. Sensing someone is watching.
+ I look down and I see her. She is resting in the shade of the large tree, on the ground. I sense she is a half-demon and the other part. human. The wind blows as the tree sways in its direction. Her hair seems like the wind, dancing in the air. I never cared to observe something even only part human. They seem such a weak race. Yet I observe her so diligently, she has an unexplainable warmth. But she does not see me, or so she tries not to. Beginning to feel awkward, I look away.
~ Hiei, how do I know his name? I turn and see that he is not looking at me anyway. He may seem cold and isolated to others. But for some strange reason I see something different. I am no closer to him than anybody else but yet I feel that I have known him all my life. He has this hidden warm aura and every time I see him, it draws me in. His dark appearance seems a disguise to me. Sitting on the tree branch with ease, watching the sun, setting at the horizon. The fire demon starts to take his headband off because of the warm weather, to reveal his jagan eye.
+ Someone is watching me. A somewhat warm presence, it feels strange and awkward. These emotions resulting in my mind, I can't control them. Could it be her? Florinda? How do I know her name? My jagan eye sensed she was watching me. But would I want that? She makes me feel lonesome. Like I actually want to be near others.
~+ I came hear to be alone.
+ But she was here. ~ But he was here.
/ The two close their eyes only to picture the other. Not knowing why this happened, both open their eyes in shock and look at the other. Doing this, only to find the other looking back. /
~+ I want nothing to do with him/her, because I've learned that love leads only to pain. Not that this feeling is love anyway.
/ Both soon get uncomfortable with the situation and leave. Hiei, using his godlike speed seemed to fly from tree to tree, going back to the place he shared with Kurama for the vacation. Florinda chose to walk along the path in the woods. The flowers and plants yielded a path for her. And with a blow of the wind, she was out of site.
So what do you think? I already wrote the next two chapters but I don't have time to type them up with school l and all. But I'll try. Hopefully in less than a week.
KEY- when there are quotations, the character is speaking, if not, it is a thought
= Kurama = Buton ~ = Florinda (my original character) + = Hiei // = Narration
Chapter 1- Meeting//Believeing
~The rays of the sun were shining down on the warm spring-summer day. He sat on a branch near the top of the tree, in the shade. I look away. Sensing someone is watching.
+ I look down and I see her. She is resting in the shade of the large tree, on the ground. I sense she is a half-demon and the other part. human. The wind blows as the tree sways in its direction. Her hair seems like the wind, dancing in the air. I never cared to observe something even only part human. They seem such a weak race. Yet I observe her so diligently, she has an unexplainable warmth. But she does not see me, or so she tries not to. Beginning to feel awkward, I look away.
~ Hiei, how do I know his name? I turn and see that he is not looking at me anyway. He may seem cold and isolated to others. But for some strange reason I see something different. I am no closer to him than anybody else but yet I feel that I have known him all my life. He has this hidden warm aura and every time I see him, it draws me in. His dark appearance seems a disguise to me. Sitting on the tree branch with ease, watching the sun, setting at the horizon. The fire demon starts to take his headband off because of the warm weather, to reveal his jagan eye.
+ Someone is watching me. A somewhat warm presence, it feels strange and awkward. These emotions resulting in my mind, I can't control them. Could it be her? Florinda? How do I know her name? My jagan eye sensed she was watching me. But would I want that? She makes me feel lonesome. Like I actually want to be near others.
~+ I came hear to be alone.
+ But she was here. ~ But he was here.
/ The two close their eyes only to picture the other. Not knowing why this happened, both open their eyes in shock and look at the other. Doing this, only to find the other looking back. /
~+ I want nothing to do with him/her, because I've learned that love leads only to pain. Not that this feeling is love anyway.
/ Both soon get uncomfortable with the situation and leave. Hiei, using his godlike speed seemed to fly from tree to tree, going back to the place he shared with Kurama for the vacation. Florinda chose to walk along the path in the woods. The flowers and plants yielded a path for her. And with a blow of the wind, she was out of site.
So what do you think? I already wrote the next two chapters but I don't have time to type them up with school l and all. But I'll try. Hopefully in less than a week.