Yep. The first chapter wasn't the best but what can you expect. well anyway
here's chapter 2,. And the key and symbols for the characters are still all
the same. I hope I didn't make it too confusing.
Chapter 2 - Questioning.
/ Kurama hears the door open and shut again. The house was like a small cottage almost. As he heard footsteps, he thought, "Hiei's back". As the fire demon walked passes the living room to make it too the stairs, Kurama felt something was strange. There was a familiar scent in the air. He knew better than to ask Hiei where he had been, for he knew that the other like his privacy. But he had to confirm his thoughts. /
"What's wrong Hiei? You are rather, how may I say. sluggish today.
/ Indeed he was, for Hiei was only halfway past the living room entrance. Usually, his speed would carry him as a black blur into his room and he would just lie down on his bed. But it was different today; he seemed to be thinking about something. /
+ "Nothing is wrong Kurama "
"Does not seem that way." he said it calmly, not to offend the demon.
+ "It doesn't matter"
/ Hiei's image then blurred and the next thing you know he was at the top of the stairs. He walked into his room and lied down on his bed.
+ Nothing is wrong.
/ Back with Florinda. Walking back to the somewhat of a large cottage she rented for her break, she slowed down in front of it. She was expecting a new housemate today, since she had rented it by herself. AS she opened the door, the other girl ad just walked out of the other bedroom.
"Oh hi, you must be Florinda. I'm Buton. Nice to meet you."
~ "Yea." she replied, looking down at the outstretched hand.
"Umm. so what are you?"
~ "What do you mean?" she was used to questions, because she was half-demon and was considered and outcast many times.
"Like what kind of demon or creature are you?"
~ "Half-fox."
(Buton then cut in) "Half? The what's the other? Like fire-demon?"
~"Human."
"Wow I think that's pretty neat."
~"Really?" her eyes lit up a little. For once other people (well sort of) aren't looking at me in a weird way and avoiding me. A friend is worth having. The only thing that I wouldn't want is.
"Hey you want to come to the beach with me and my friends? We're here on a vacation from helping out a certain spirit detective."
~ This girl talks a little too much sometimes."So who are your friends? ."
"Oh you'll see them soon enough and I'll introduce you. By the way, do you have a boyfriend?" She nudged Florinda, wearing a sneaky smile. ". because both of my friends are male and single"
~ "No thanks."
"I'm sorry I didn't know that your were."
~ "I'm not. I just don't think it's the thing for me right now, to care for someone."
Wow. She sort of reminds me of a certain somebody. Except unlike him, she tries to be happier. But she looks like she's hurting deep inside for some reason.
/ Florinda then forced on a smile and said "lets go"
Chapter 2 - Questioning.
/ Kurama hears the door open and shut again. The house was like a small cottage almost. As he heard footsteps, he thought, "Hiei's back". As the fire demon walked passes the living room to make it too the stairs, Kurama felt something was strange. There was a familiar scent in the air. He knew better than to ask Hiei where he had been, for he knew that the other like his privacy. But he had to confirm his thoughts. /
"What's wrong Hiei? You are rather, how may I say. sluggish today.
/ Indeed he was, for Hiei was only halfway past the living room entrance. Usually, his speed would carry him as a black blur into his room and he would just lie down on his bed. But it was different today; he seemed to be thinking about something. /
+ "Nothing is wrong Kurama "
"Does not seem that way." he said it calmly, not to offend the demon.
+ "It doesn't matter"
/ Hiei's image then blurred and the next thing you know he was at the top of the stairs. He walked into his room and lied down on his bed.
+ Nothing is wrong.
/ Back with Florinda. Walking back to the somewhat of a large cottage she rented for her break, she slowed down in front of it. She was expecting a new housemate today, since she had rented it by herself. AS she opened the door, the other girl ad just walked out of the other bedroom.
"Oh hi, you must be Florinda. I'm Buton. Nice to meet you."
~ "Yea." she replied, looking down at the outstretched hand.
"Umm. so what are you?"
~ "What do you mean?" she was used to questions, because she was half-demon and was considered and outcast many times.
"Like what kind of demon or creature are you?"
~ "Half-fox."
(Buton then cut in) "Half? The what's the other? Like fire-demon?"
~"Human."
"Wow I think that's pretty neat."
~"Really?" her eyes lit up a little. For once other people (well sort of) aren't looking at me in a weird way and avoiding me. A friend is worth having. The only thing that I wouldn't want is.
"Hey you want to come to the beach with me and my friends? We're here on a vacation from helping out a certain spirit detective."
~ This girl talks a little too much sometimes."So who are your friends? ."
"Oh you'll see them soon enough and I'll introduce you. By the way, do you have a boyfriend?" She nudged Florinda, wearing a sneaky smile. ". because both of my friends are male and single"
~ "No thanks."
"I'm sorry I didn't know that your were."
~ "I'm not. I just don't think it's the thing for me right now, to care for someone."
Wow. She sort of reminds me of a certain somebody. Except unlike him, she tries to be happier. But she looks like she's hurting deep inside for some reason.
/ Florinda then forced on a smile and said "lets go"