Hi guys, I realise that it has been a while since I updated. I have a
number of excuses the main ones are that this year of school is the hardest
one I've had so far and I haven't had time to do much of anything but
school work. The second is that I had written up to chapter seven, but I
had boxed myself into a corner and I couldn't find a way out. I had a real
train crash, but it was taking forever to explain everything and it wasn't
making sense and was really boring. So I went back to chapter four and
started writing it again.
I have written out a plan of this fic, so I have some idea where I'm going (Silent Shells was really disorganised) and it should be much better. I haven't finished chapter five yet, but it has grown from a complete 3 page chapter to a nearly complete 15 page chapter. WOW, I didn't know I could write so much in a chapter.
What else did I have to say? Hmmmm, well I hope you like long chapters because the plan I have drawn up has extended my chapters by heaps.
You may have noticed that the summary has been changed. That's because I had a problem justifying an event planned for the third installment so I had to change my whole fic plan.
Choke to Breathe contains a couple more prophecies and I'm not sure whether to include them in the prologue or not. I would really appreciate some feedback on the subject.
Also, I'm feeling really sad at the lack of reviews Choke to Breathe is getting. ( I really appreciate the ones I have got.
Thank you so so so much:
blackened soul & little gin blossom
If anyone knows why no-one is reviewing could you let me know? I wasnt sure how to let ppl know that this one is up and that could be the problem. or my boring summary (embarrassed face). Yes, I am a whiny person if I don't get my own way (or in this case my own reviews).
I hope you like the next couple of chapters.
Ciao
I have written out a plan of this fic, so I have some idea where I'm going (Silent Shells was really disorganised) and it should be much better. I haven't finished chapter five yet, but it has grown from a complete 3 page chapter to a nearly complete 15 page chapter. WOW, I didn't know I could write so much in a chapter.
What else did I have to say? Hmmmm, well I hope you like long chapters because the plan I have drawn up has extended my chapters by heaps.
You may have noticed that the summary has been changed. That's because I had a problem justifying an event planned for the third installment so I had to change my whole fic plan.
Choke to Breathe contains a couple more prophecies and I'm not sure whether to include them in the prologue or not. I would really appreciate some feedback on the subject.
Also, I'm feeling really sad at the lack of reviews Choke to Breathe is getting. ( I really appreciate the ones I have got.
Thank you so so so much:
blackened soul & little gin blossom
If anyone knows why no-one is reviewing could you let me know? I wasnt sure how to let ppl know that this one is up and that could be the problem. or my boring summary (embarrassed face). Yes, I am a whiny person if I don't get my own way (or in this case my own reviews).
I hope you like the next couple of chapters.
Ciao
