Chapter 1: Invasion Of China.
A long time ago, in ancient Asia, China and it's neighbouring people 'The Huns' were at constant war. To prevent 'The Huns' from ever invading China. The emperor had a wall build on the border of china to prevent anyone from invading his kingdom. The wall is about 6700 km long starting from Shanhaiguan, in the east, going to the west to Jaiyuguan in the provence Gansu and took centuries to build. It did his job well, but now and then an enemy would breach the wall and try to invade China with it's army.
Just like Lord Treize will try in our story but while evil exist so does good, whether it comes in the form of a boy or a girl, nothing matters as long as good prevails.
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It was a calm summer night and everything was really quiet. The soldiers who stood guard on the wall could see the full moon shining brightly on the land they were protecting. Keeping a watchful eye out, they walked back and forth.
Everything seemed to be peaceful when suddenly a falcon swooped over one of the soldiers helmets and knocked it off with a loud cry, which echoed in the night sky. The shocked soldier looked up to see the falcon sitting on one of the flagpoles in front of the full moon. Bending to retrieve his helmet he shot back up when he heard a metallic sound on the stone wall. Walking towards the edge of the wall he looks down and sees grappling hooks flying towards him.
Knowing what it means he started yelling: "We're under attack! Light the signal!" running towards the tower and up the ladder when suddenly a Hun with a bald head and one with long hair appeared to stop the guard. The bald Hun hacked with his sword on the ladder and it broke just as the guard reached the top. Quickly picking up a torch the guard lights the fire just as Lord Treize jumps over the wall and looked at him menacingly across the caldron.
Lord Treize looks behind the guard to see, fires being lid one by one, by the other soldiers guarding the wall and looks back to the guard when he spoke.
"Now, all of China knows you're here" said the guard sternly;
" Excellent! " said Lord Treize while picking up a Chinese flag, holding it over the fire and burning it.
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At The Royal Palace:
The Large doors which lead to the throne room opened to reveal General Odin, flanked by two of his best soldiers. He approached Emperor Howard; an old man with long grey hair and a goatee, he was dressed in a gold and red robe and was sitting on his throne awaiting news; bows and looks back up bringing bad news;
"Your Majesty, the Huns have crossed our Northern border."
"Impossible! No one can get through The Great Wall" interrupted Quinze, who was The Emperors right hand and advisor, he too had grey hair which came to his shoulders, but fell quiet when the emperor motioned for him to be silent.
"Lord Treize is leading them. We'll set up defences around your palace immediately." Continued General Odin like he never heard Quinze utter a word.
"No! Send your troops to protect my people! Quinze?" said the emperor forcefully and motioned for Quinze to come closer,
"Yes, your highness." Said Quinze obediently and came closer,
"Deliver conscription notices throughout all the provinces. Call up reserves and as many new recruits as possible." Ordered the emperor while Quinze wrote everything down nodding now and then,
"Forgive me your Majesty, but I believe my troops can stop him" interrupted General Odin trying to convince the Emperor,
"I wont take any chances, General. A single grain of rice can tip the scale. One man may be the difference between victory and defeat." Said the emperor wisely while Quinze wrote everything down. General Odin bowed and left the throne room to make preparations to the upcoming battle.
Meanwhile far away..
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So what does everyone think so far?
Good?
Bad?
Should I even continue?
Let me know when and if you review, please pretty please!!!
A long time ago, in ancient Asia, China and it's neighbouring people 'The Huns' were at constant war. To prevent 'The Huns' from ever invading China. The emperor had a wall build on the border of china to prevent anyone from invading his kingdom. The wall is about 6700 km long starting from Shanhaiguan, in the east, going to the west to Jaiyuguan in the provence Gansu and took centuries to build. It did his job well, but now and then an enemy would breach the wall and try to invade China with it's army.
Just like Lord Treize will try in our story but while evil exist so does good, whether it comes in the form of a boy or a girl, nothing matters as long as good prevails.
*********************************
It was a calm summer night and everything was really quiet. The soldiers who stood guard on the wall could see the full moon shining brightly on the land they were protecting. Keeping a watchful eye out, they walked back and forth.
Everything seemed to be peaceful when suddenly a falcon swooped over one of the soldiers helmets and knocked it off with a loud cry, which echoed in the night sky. The shocked soldier looked up to see the falcon sitting on one of the flagpoles in front of the full moon. Bending to retrieve his helmet he shot back up when he heard a metallic sound on the stone wall. Walking towards the edge of the wall he looks down and sees grappling hooks flying towards him.
Knowing what it means he started yelling: "We're under attack! Light the signal!" running towards the tower and up the ladder when suddenly a Hun with a bald head and one with long hair appeared to stop the guard. The bald Hun hacked with his sword on the ladder and it broke just as the guard reached the top. Quickly picking up a torch the guard lights the fire just as Lord Treize jumps over the wall and looked at him menacingly across the caldron.
Lord Treize looks behind the guard to see, fires being lid one by one, by the other soldiers guarding the wall and looks back to the guard when he spoke.
"Now, all of China knows you're here" said the guard sternly;
" Excellent! " said Lord Treize while picking up a Chinese flag, holding it over the fire and burning it.
*************************************
At The Royal Palace:
The Large doors which lead to the throne room opened to reveal General Odin, flanked by two of his best soldiers. He approached Emperor Howard; an old man with long grey hair and a goatee, he was dressed in a gold and red robe and was sitting on his throne awaiting news; bows and looks back up bringing bad news;
"Your Majesty, the Huns have crossed our Northern border."
"Impossible! No one can get through The Great Wall" interrupted Quinze, who was The Emperors right hand and advisor, he too had grey hair which came to his shoulders, but fell quiet when the emperor motioned for him to be silent.
"Lord Treize is leading them. We'll set up defences around your palace immediately." Continued General Odin like he never heard Quinze utter a word.
"No! Send your troops to protect my people! Quinze?" said the emperor forcefully and motioned for Quinze to come closer,
"Yes, your highness." Said Quinze obediently and came closer,
"Deliver conscription notices throughout all the provinces. Call up reserves and as many new recruits as possible." Ordered the emperor while Quinze wrote everything down nodding now and then,
"Forgive me your Majesty, but I believe my troops can stop him" interrupted General Odin trying to convince the Emperor,
"I wont take any chances, General. A single grain of rice can tip the scale. One man may be the difference between victory and defeat." Said the emperor wisely while Quinze wrote everything down. General Odin bowed and left the throne room to make preparations to the upcoming battle.
Meanwhile far away..
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So what does everyone think so far?
Good?
Bad?
Should I even continue?
Let me know when and if you review, please pretty please!!!