I tried the spacing thing and the details. This chapter is basically a big
flashback.
Saria was sound asleep with a tear stained face after all the crying she had done last night. Once in a while Loki could hear a sob or a whimper coming from her. He didn't want to see her like this, in pain and despair. He knew that a Kokiri could become a regular Hylian and lose their eternal childhood. It has been done before.
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In the hut that looked much like a tree house emerged a young Kokiri girl who could be no more than eight years old with a pink fairy following her. She had short brown hair that went down to her neck with crimson-brown eyes with a somewhat pale color skin. She seemed a little depressed because she awoken from a nightmare.
The nightmare was incredibly frightening to a child her age as she saw herself being brutally tortured and killed. It was the early morning and still quite dark outside. No other Kokiri was up except her. She climbed down her ladder and headed for the lost woods. She always enjoyed walking through those woods, exploring all around (a wonder that she hasn't found the Sacred Forest Meadow yet).
Though for the first time in her life, she got lost. It was too dark and she took a wrong turn somewhere leading her in an area of the forest she hasn't seen before. She panicked and broke down crying in fear.
"What's wrong?" the girl looked up and saw the figure of a child her age. But with no fairy.
The boy had almost a golden blond colored hair, with cerulean eyes. "I got lost" she sniffeled to the child her age. "Here, I'll help you get out" the boy said while giving his hand to the girl to get back up.
"Thanks" she said smiling and taking his hand. They wandered out into the forest again. "What's your name?" the boy asked curiously. "Imelda, and yours?" "Takeru"
"Where's your fairy" she asked still wondering why he had none. "Fairy? I don't have one"
As the light from the sun got brighter, she noticed that he didn't have the usual green tunic that all the males wore, but a yellow shirt. "You're not a Kokiri?" "What's a Kokiri?" The boy never heard of them in his life.
"Umm . . . actually, I'm not sure how you describe one. All I know is that all Kokiri have fairies" "Then I guess I'm not one of them" He said smiling. For some reason, when he did that, it made her feeling like fainting right there and then.
The sun was now out completely and Imelda remembered the rest of the way. "Wait, I remember where to go from now. Follow me!" She said enthousiasticly to her new friend while pulling him along.
They arrived in the Kokiri village where now, there were many Kokiri children running around outside playing. "Wow, cool!" the boy said. He was very amazed at the size of the village, and all the children running around.
"Where are all the grown-ups?" Takeru asked as he was used to seeing only adults running around outside working. "Grown-ups? What are those?" She wondered because she's never seen an adult before, actually she hasn't ever seen a teenager either for that matter.
"There really big, strong mean people who make fun of you because you're too small or too young" He explained. "Nope, none of those around here" "Neat!" Takeru said because he left on some rather bad terms with his parents, infact, he ran away from home.
She took him back to her little tree hut. "Wow. You have this place all to yourself?" He asked, amazed with the place, which looks pretty much like a dump to an adult. "Yup! So what were you doing in the forest anyways?" "I left my home because the people there were being really mean to me. So I somehow got into the forest"
"Hey! Why don't you live here with me!" She said happily. "Really!? Thanks!" He replies enthousiastically because for the past two days, he's been sleeping on the grass of the Lost Woods, which wasn't all that comfortable.
Takeru lived among the Kokiri for 5 years, he and Imelda grew, but she stopped growing at the age of 10 while he just kept growing. "Wow, you're really tall now. You nearly hit your head on the way out" She giggled at her best friend. "Haha. Very funny, listen. I'm going to be leaving the forest for a couple of days, alright?"
"You can't! Kokiri die when they leave the forest!" "But I'm not Kokiri, see ya!" She blushed slightly because of her lack of memory. "Alright, come back soon!" She said waving at her friend.
"Alace? Why does Takeru keep on growing?" She asked her pink fairy partner. "Because, Takeru is a Hylian, and Hylians unlike Kokiri don't have the gift of eternal childhood and eventually grow into adults" "But he'll still love me right?"
The fairy looks ar her companion awkwardly "He loves you?" Imelda blushed a lot "Well. Uh . . . no, but I do love him" "Well, if your question was actually "Will he ever be able to love me?" the answer is most definately no. The only way that would be possible would be if you could throw away your eternal childhood"
"Oh, okay. How do you do that" "Imelda, I'm very sorry but you can't!"
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'Wait a minute, she eventually found a way to become Hylian! Damn my corrupted memory!' Loki thought agrilly to himself as he tried to remember the story Imelda's fairy, Alace, told him.
Then he heard another sob from Saria's sleeping body. 'Was it some sort of spell? Or maybe a prayer? If so, there's probably some information about it in a book or a tome that should be able to be found somewhere in the village!'
Loki flew right of the house in search for any hint on how to help Saria.
Saria was sound asleep with a tear stained face after all the crying she had done last night. Once in a while Loki could hear a sob or a whimper coming from her. He didn't want to see her like this, in pain and despair. He knew that a Kokiri could become a regular Hylian and lose their eternal childhood. It has been done before.
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Flashback
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In the hut that looked much like a tree house emerged a young Kokiri girl who could be no more than eight years old with a pink fairy following her. She had short brown hair that went down to her neck with crimson-brown eyes with a somewhat pale color skin. She seemed a little depressed because she awoken from a nightmare.
The nightmare was incredibly frightening to a child her age as she saw herself being brutally tortured and killed. It was the early morning and still quite dark outside. No other Kokiri was up except her. She climbed down her ladder and headed for the lost woods. She always enjoyed walking through those woods, exploring all around (a wonder that she hasn't found the Sacred Forest Meadow yet).
Though for the first time in her life, she got lost. It was too dark and she took a wrong turn somewhere leading her in an area of the forest she hasn't seen before. She panicked and broke down crying in fear.
"What's wrong?" the girl looked up and saw the figure of a child her age. But with no fairy.
The boy had almost a golden blond colored hair, with cerulean eyes. "I got lost" she sniffeled to the child her age. "Here, I'll help you get out" the boy said while giving his hand to the girl to get back up.
"Thanks" she said smiling and taking his hand. They wandered out into the forest again. "What's your name?" the boy asked curiously. "Imelda, and yours?" "Takeru"
"Where's your fairy" she asked still wondering why he had none. "Fairy? I don't have one"
As the light from the sun got brighter, she noticed that he didn't have the usual green tunic that all the males wore, but a yellow shirt. "You're not a Kokiri?" "What's a Kokiri?" The boy never heard of them in his life.
"Umm . . . actually, I'm not sure how you describe one. All I know is that all Kokiri have fairies" "Then I guess I'm not one of them" He said smiling. For some reason, when he did that, it made her feeling like fainting right there and then.
The sun was now out completely and Imelda remembered the rest of the way. "Wait, I remember where to go from now. Follow me!" She said enthousiasticly to her new friend while pulling him along.
They arrived in the Kokiri village where now, there were many Kokiri children running around outside playing. "Wow, cool!" the boy said. He was very amazed at the size of the village, and all the children running around.
"Where are all the grown-ups?" Takeru asked as he was used to seeing only adults running around outside working. "Grown-ups? What are those?" She wondered because she's never seen an adult before, actually she hasn't ever seen a teenager either for that matter.
"There really big, strong mean people who make fun of you because you're too small or too young" He explained. "Nope, none of those around here" "Neat!" Takeru said because he left on some rather bad terms with his parents, infact, he ran away from home.
She took him back to her little tree hut. "Wow. You have this place all to yourself?" He asked, amazed with the place, which looks pretty much like a dump to an adult. "Yup! So what were you doing in the forest anyways?" "I left my home because the people there were being really mean to me. So I somehow got into the forest"
"Hey! Why don't you live here with me!" She said happily. "Really!? Thanks!" He replies enthousiastically because for the past two days, he's been sleeping on the grass of the Lost Woods, which wasn't all that comfortable.
Takeru lived among the Kokiri for 5 years, he and Imelda grew, but she stopped growing at the age of 10 while he just kept growing. "Wow, you're really tall now. You nearly hit your head on the way out" She giggled at her best friend. "Haha. Very funny, listen. I'm going to be leaving the forest for a couple of days, alright?"
"You can't! Kokiri die when they leave the forest!" "But I'm not Kokiri, see ya!" She blushed slightly because of her lack of memory. "Alright, come back soon!" She said waving at her friend.
"Alace? Why does Takeru keep on growing?" She asked her pink fairy partner. "Because, Takeru is a Hylian, and Hylians unlike Kokiri don't have the gift of eternal childhood and eventually grow into adults" "But he'll still love me right?"
The fairy looks ar her companion awkwardly "He loves you?" Imelda blushed a lot "Well. Uh . . . no, but I do love him" "Well, if your question was actually "Will he ever be able to love me?" the answer is most definately no. The only way that would be possible would be if you could throw away your eternal childhood"
"Oh, okay. How do you do that" "Imelda, I'm very sorry but you can't!"
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'Wait a minute, she eventually found a way to become Hylian! Damn my corrupted memory!' Loki thought agrilly to himself as he tried to remember the story Imelda's fairy, Alace, told him.
Then he heard another sob from Saria's sleeping body. 'Was it some sort of spell? Or maybe a prayer? If so, there's probably some information about it in a book or a tome that should be able to be found somewhere in the village!'
Loki flew right of the house in search for any hint on how to help Saria.