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Darry came out of the bathroom and Pony ran in and grabbed the shower. Darry was walking around all stiff and joints locked. The guys at the table started laughing hysterically. Two-bit was practically on the floor. He managed to talk in between laughs. "Darry---what in the world.You look like you need to be oiled." He couldn't get anymore out.
Darry plopped on the bed laying still. Only low moans could be heard. Soda and Steve had stopped laughing so hard but Two-bit was still in hysterics.
A while later Soda came over to Darry and stood over top of him. "You okay dar???"
Darry let out a low groan before managing to say, "Yeah, Pony just didn't stop today. And I roof houses for a living. You can imagine how hard he made me work.it was worth it for him to have some fun though."
Soda smiled. "Yeah I was starting to worry about that kid. Hey Darry we're gonna go with those three chicks we were talking to today to the party in the lodge that there is tonight. You know the one right.all the guests are going you wanna come."
"Thanks little buddy but I think I'm gonna go to bed soon. You guys have fun though." Darry replied.
Soda smiled. "Do you think Pony'd wanna come???" Steve rolled his eyes.
Darry shrugged. "I dunno. Ask him if you want."
By now Two-bit and Steve were at the door. They looked impatient. "One minute guys." Soda said. He went over to the bathroom door. He not hear the water of the shower running so he didn't have to yell very loud. "Pony." Soda said. "Pony we're going to a party you wanna come." Soda waited but heard no reply. He looked over at Darry. Darry sat up and returned Soda's questioning look.
Soda knocked again. "Pony, you okay???" When there was no answer Soda finally said. "Pony I'm coming in." He opened the door a crack and slid in. His laughter could be heard through the door. Darry got up and approached the door. Two-bit and Steve followed him. Soda opened the door, his face red from laughter.
The other guys immediately joined in when they saw Pony, dressed in pajamas. The lid was down on the toilet and he was sitting on it. His head was resting on the toilet paper roll and his toothbrush was in his mouth but he was fully asleep. Soda walked over to his little brother and pulled out the toothbrush. He gently shook Pony awake.
"Hmm??? What's going on???" The other three had left the room by now laughing too hard.
"Its okay, Pon."
"Soda???"
"Yeah.come on lets take you to bed."
Soda led Pony out and to the king sized bed. Normally Darry would have carried him but couldn't if he tried right now. Soda had tucked him in and thought he was already asleep when he heard Pony whisper. "Soda where are you going???"
"We're just going out for a little okay we'll be back soon. Darry's here." But Pony was asleep before he could reply.
Soda, Two-bit, and Steve left, leaving sleeping Darry and Pony in the room.
Darry's eyes popped open. Something had woken him up but what. It was black but it didn't feel like too much time had gone by.
He heard the ear-piercing scream and heavy breathing coming from the next bed. He managed to get up. He wasn't as sore as he thought. He walked over to the bed as his little brother continued to scream. It scared him something awful.
Darry went and sat on the bed and started to gently shake his brother who by now sounded like he was sobbing on top of everything. "Pony, come on wake up."
Pony grabbed the arm that was shaking him and dug his nails in.
"Shh.Pony its okay."
"Soda???" Pony said worriedly.
"No, Pon. Its Darry."
"Where's Soda??? What's going on???" Pony muffled out.
"He's still at the party with Steve and Two-bit I guess. Its okay you just had a nightmare."
"Darry.I want Soda!!!"
"I know baby.he'll be back soon though okay." Darry dug Pony's nails out of his arm and sat next to Pony on the bed. Darry gently stroked his hair as Pony lightly sobbed and shook.
After a few minutes Pony seemed to settle down a bit. "You okay???" Darry asked.
"Yeah, thanks Darry." Pony replied. Darry gently squeezed his arm and got up.
"Darry???"
"Yeah, Pon. I'm right here."
"Do you think you could lay with me for a while."
"Sure Pon."
Darry went to the other side and climbed under the blankets. He could still hear Pony's heavy breathing. He pulled Pony to his chest and threw his arm around him.
After a moment Pony relaxed in the safety of his brother's arms.
Okay stupid I know but please r&R and let me know if the dialogue was any better.
Darry came out of the bathroom and Pony ran in and grabbed the shower. Darry was walking around all stiff and joints locked. The guys at the table started laughing hysterically. Two-bit was practically on the floor. He managed to talk in between laughs. "Darry---what in the world.You look like you need to be oiled." He couldn't get anymore out.
Darry plopped on the bed laying still. Only low moans could be heard. Soda and Steve had stopped laughing so hard but Two-bit was still in hysterics.
A while later Soda came over to Darry and stood over top of him. "You okay dar???"
Darry let out a low groan before managing to say, "Yeah, Pony just didn't stop today. And I roof houses for a living. You can imagine how hard he made me work.it was worth it for him to have some fun though."
Soda smiled. "Yeah I was starting to worry about that kid. Hey Darry we're gonna go with those three chicks we were talking to today to the party in the lodge that there is tonight. You know the one right.all the guests are going you wanna come."
"Thanks little buddy but I think I'm gonna go to bed soon. You guys have fun though." Darry replied.
Soda smiled. "Do you think Pony'd wanna come???" Steve rolled his eyes.
Darry shrugged. "I dunno. Ask him if you want."
By now Two-bit and Steve were at the door. They looked impatient. "One minute guys." Soda said. He went over to the bathroom door. He not hear the water of the shower running so he didn't have to yell very loud. "Pony." Soda said. "Pony we're going to a party you wanna come." Soda waited but heard no reply. He looked over at Darry. Darry sat up and returned Soda's questioning look.
Soda knocked again. "Pony, you okay???" When there was no answer Soda finally said. "Pony I'm coming in." He opened the door a crack and slid in. His laughter could be heard through the door. Darry got up and approached the door. Two-bit and Steve followed him. Soda opened the door, his face red from laughter.
The other guys immediately joined in when they saw Pony, dressed in pajamas. The lid was down on the toilet and he was sitting on it. His head was resting on the toilet paper roll and his toothbrush was in his mouth but he was fully asleep. Soda walked over to his little brother and pulled out the toothbrush. He gently shook Pony awake.
"Hmm??? What's going on???" The other three had left the room by now laughing too hard.
"Its okay, Pon."
"Soda???"
"Yeah.come on lets take you to bed."
Soda led Pony out and to the king sized bed. Normally Darry would have carried him but couldn't if he tried right now. Soda had tucked him in and thought he was already asleep when he heard Pony whisper. "Soda where are you going???"
"We're just going out for a little okay we'll be back soon. Darry's here." But Pony was asleep before he could reply.
Soda, Two-bit, and Steve left, leaving sleeping Darry and Pony in the room.
Darry's eyes popped open. Something had woken him up but what. It was black but it didn't feel like too much time had gone by.
He heard the ear-piercing scream and heavy breathing coming from the next bed. He managed to get up. He wasn't as sore as he thought. He walked over to the bed as his little brother continued to scream. It scared him something awful.
Darry went and sat on the bed and started to gently shake his brother who by now sounded like he was sobbing on top of everything. "Pony, come on wake up."
Pony grabbed the arm that was shaking him and dug his nails in.
"Shh.Pony its okay."
"Soda???" Pony said worriedly.
"No, Pon. Its Darry."
"Where's Soda??? What's going on???" Pony muffled out.
"He's still at the party with Steve and Two-bit I guess. Its okay you just had a nightmare."
"Darry.I want Soda!!!"
"I know baby.he'll be back soon though okay." Darry dug Pony's nails out of his arm and sat next to Pony on the bed. Darry gently stroked his hair as Pony lightly sobbed and shook.
After a few minutes Pony seemed to settle down a bit. "You okay???" Darry asked.
"Yeah, thanks Darry." Pony replied. Darry gently squeezed his arm and got up.
"Darry???"
"Yeah, Pon. I'm right here."
"Do you think you could lay with me for a while."
"Sure Pon."
Darry went to the other side and climbed under the blankets. He could still hear Pony's heavy breathing. He pulled Pony to his chest and threw his arm around him.
After a moment Pony relaxed in the safety of his brother's arms.
Okay stupid I know but please r&R and let me know if the dialogue was any better.
