Hello people. I am in a bad mood because I haven't been able to get in
fanfic forever which is why I haven't updated in so long. I still can't get
in it so if you reviewed I'm gunna mention you next chap because I can't
get into fanfiction.net and I've deleted the emails. stupid hotmail don't
even get me started. stupid storage limit. okie anyways I know I haven't
edited all my previous chapters yet like I was asked but I fixed 10 and 1-3
and ill get to the rest soon anyways. heres the next chap and all
disclaimers apply.
Two-bit came bursting into the lodge with a very serious expression on his face. Steve laughed, "What's a matter Two-bit??? Did you just find out that Mickey isn't a real mouse???" Steve and Soda were laughing pretty hard now. Two-bit walked right past them without a word.
Soda and Steve immediately stopped their laughter. They knew something was wrong when Two-bit Matthews didn't have a comeback. They followed him as he made his way quickly down a hall.
"What's wrong Two-bit???" Soda asked. Before he got an answer they had already arrived at the small office type room where Noah and Meghan handled all bookings and what not. Noah was alone in the room and immediately lifted his head. "Well howdy boys. What do I owe this visit???"
Two-bit immediately walked over to Noah. "I need you to call 911 and get a helicopter or get them to come out or something I dunno just anything please you have to do something right---" Two-bit rambled on without breathing but was interrupted by Noah.
"Two-bit, calm down what's the problem???"
Two-bit inhaled and quickly replied. "There was an accident. Somebody's hurt. They need help right away. I can't see them because they're on the other side of that wall fence thing but they're hurt real bad. You gotta call somebody." Steve and Soda quickly shot each other looks but didn't think too much of it at first. They figured it was someone they didn't know since Two-bit didn't mention who it was. But Two-bit only did this because he wanted to get help first because he knew Soda would flip.
Noah was immediately on the phone and a helicopter with paramedics was soon being sent. There was a doctor onsite that could take a look at him and try and help until the helicopter got there. He mostly dealt with fractures or sprains but was trained further than that.
Two-bit lead the way with the doctor, Noah, Soda, and Steve hot on his tail. Soda and Steve knew something was wrong by the way Two-bit was rushing and the look in his eyes.
Steve decided to inquire. "Two-bit what happened???"
Still keeping his eyes focused ahead of him he answered quickly. "Someone fell down the side of the mountain that's blocked off by the fences. They couldn't answer me and I couldn't see them but somebody else was with them." They exited the doors and were now making they're way up towards where Pony was.
Soda had known Two-bit for a long time. He could tell Two-bit was trying his best to hold it together which led him to one conclusion. "Which one of them is it???" Soda said expressionless. He knew where he, Steve and Two-bit were and that only left two people.
Two-bit answered. "I don't know what you're talking about." But his voice cracked and Soda knew it was definitely one of the two. Soda grabbed his shoulders and turned him. "Two-bit Matthews, if you know what's good for you, you'll tell me right this minute which one of my brothers it is!!!"
All eyes were suddenly on Two-bit. "Soda, its Pony." That's all he could get before he turned away. Soda was now running towards the wall. He felt like a robot not even aware of his actions. He was at the wall before he even realized it.
"Pon???" Soda's voice was pleading. He didn't expect an answer but was hoping with all his might for one.
On the other side of the wall Darry heard Soda's voice but didn't know what to answer. "Hey Soda."
It was an answer but not the one he'd been hoping for. "Darry is he okay???"
What was Darry supposed to say??? "I dunno Soda, is help on the way???"
"Yeah." Speak of the devil the group had made it to the wall and was attempting to get over the wall.
Noah stifled a small nervous laugh. "We wanted to make sure no one would be able to get over."
Using all the guys the doctor got over and climbed to wear he found Pony and Darry. "Oh dear." The doctor managed to get out seeing the puddle of blood and Pony.
"Ok, don't move, I don't want to cause further injuries." The doctor sat next to Darry and started looking over Pony boy just as Soda came crashing over the wall flat on his stomach with a thump. He had managed to get over thanks to the guys' help. Normally Darry would have laughed at Soda but couldn't if he tried right now.
Soda looked over at Pony and wanted to pass out. He heard the doctor speak up. "Okay, he's still alive but unconscious. He's got a severe head would and had lost a lot of blood. The professionals should be here soon."
Soda blocked everything out after that. He went into his own daze until Darry had came and put his hands on his shoulders as Soda was almost falling back down the hill. He didn't need two hurt brothers. The paramedics had already arrived and were loading Pony on a stretcher and Soda hadn't even been aware of this.
He saw Darry talking to him but had no idea what he was talking about. Darry shook Soda lightly until he snapped back into reality. "Come on. You're coming on the helicopter with me right???"
Soda just nodded and followed Darry into the helicopter after Darry shouted to the other side of the wall.
Darry saw Soda shaking as he watched the paramedics struggling to save him brother. He pulled Soda close to him and tried to comfort him but knew it was hopeless. As he sat there Soda wondered how he could have ever been so selfish and jealous.
A/N. guess what I changed my mind. I wrote that chap last night but this morning I was able to get into fanfic so I'll mention you now. Okie. Thank you to all of you who read and especially to those who reviewed: Jayme (I'm sorry I made you cry. thanks for another review) VanillaSky(Thank you once again for another great review and I'm not even sure what the end result is gunna be yet so I'm not gunna promise anything just incase ) Dream Angel (Thank you for the constructive criticism, I watched it this chapter and I hope its better and I'm fixing the old ones too) BURNIN' CHURCH GAL (I'm sorry I got you sobbing. and I'm glad my reviews are the highlight of your day because your reviews are THE HIGHTLIGHT OF MY DAY!!! Lol anyway thanks) Roxy (Sorry for stopping it right there. thanks again for the review) Ruth ( Thanks again for the review, you've stuck with this the whole way thro and just wanna say thanks) ShadyLady (Thank you for another amazing review, you're always so nice.) and someone (Thanks for the great review and compliments!!!)
Okie I also have a proposition for you all. okie I'm going thro a bunch of stuff right now and the best way I know to deal with it is to write. So basically I'm looking for a person that I can send the story to bit by bit prolly like a chapter a week or so and it prolly won't be too long. It has nothing to do with the outsiders tho. I just need someone to stay on me to keep writing cuz I don't feel like telling any of my friends or family this so the only other way I know is to tell someone thro writing and when I don't tell anybody I tend to let it all build up so therefore I write. anyway I just need someone to tell me how bad it is and to continue and what not. and the first people I thought of were you guys so if anyone is interested please let me know in a review or email me at terran_blatenzuk@hotmail.com and I'll send you the prologue part and you can see if you can stand the story . thanks!!! Toodles!!!
~~~BlAtTy
Two-bit came bursting into the lodge with a very serious expression on his face. Steve laughed, "What's a matter Two-bit??? Did you just find out that Mickey isn't a real mouse???" Steve and Soda were laughing pretty hard now. Two-bit walked right past them without a word.
Soda and Steve immediately stopped their laughter. They knew something was wrong when Two-bit Matthews didn't have a comeback. They followed him as he made his way quickly down a hall.
"What's wrong Two-bit???" Soda asked. Before he got an answer they had already arrived at the small office type room where Noah and Meghan handled all bookings and what not. Noah was alone in the room and immediately lifted his head. "Well howdy boys. What do I owe this visit???"
Two-bit immediately walked over to Noah. "I need you to call 911 and get a helicopter or get them to come out or something I dunno just anything please you have to do something right---" Two-bit rambled on without breathing but was interrupted by Noah.
"Two-bit, calm down what's the problem???"
Two-bit inhaled and quickly replied. "There was an accident. Somebody's hurt. They need help right away. I can't see them because they're on the other side of that wall fence thing but they're hurt real bad. You gotta call somebody." Steve and Soda quickly shot each other looks but didn't think too much of it at first. They figured it was someone they didn't know since Two-bit didn't mention who it was. But Two-bit only did this because he wanted to get help first because he knew Soda would flip.
Noah was immediately on the phone and a helicopter with paramedics was soon being sent. There was a doctor onsite that could take a look at him and try and help until the helicopter got there. He mostly dealt with fractures or sprains but was trained further than that.
Two-bit lead the way with the doctor, Noah, Soda, and Steve hot on his tail. Soda and Steve knew something was wrong by the way Two-bit was rushing and the look in his eyes.
Steve decided to inquire. "Two-bit what happened???"
Still keeping his eyes focused ahead of him he answered quickly. "Someone fell down the side of the mountain that's blocked off by the fences. They couldn't answer me and I couldn't see them but somebody else was with them." They exited the doors and were now making they're way up towards where Pony was.
Soda had known Two-bit for a long time. He could tell Two-bit was trying his best to hold it together which led him to one conclusion. "Which one of them is it???" Soda said expressionless. He knew where he, Steve and Two-bit were and that only left two people.
Two-bit answered. "I don't know what you're talking about." But his voice cracked and Soda knew it was definitely one of the two. Soda grabbed his shoulders and turned him. "Two-bit Matthews, if you know what's good for you, you'll tell me right this minute which one of my brothers it is!!!"
All eyes were suddenly on Two-bit. "Soda, its Pony." That's all he could get before he turned away. Soda was now running towards the wall. He felt like a robot not even aware of his actions. He was at the wall before he even realized it.
"Pon???" Soda's voice was pleading. He didn't expect an answer but was hoping with all his might for one.
On the other side of the wall Darry heard Soda's voice but didn't know what to answer. "Hey Soda."
It was an answer but not the one he'd been hoping for. "Darry is he okay???"
What was Darry supposed to say??? "I dunno Soda, is help on the way???"
"Yeah." Speak of the devil the group had made it to the wall and was attempting to get over the wall.
Noah stifled a small nervous laugh. "We wanted to make sure no one would be able to get over."
Using all the guys the doctor got over and climbed to wear he found Pony and Darry. "Oh dear." The doctor managed to get out seeing the puddle of blood and Pony.
"Ok, don't move, I don't want to cause further injuries." The doctor sat next to Darry and started looking over Pony boy just as Soda came crashing over the wall flat on his stomach with a thump. He had managed to get over thanks to the guys' help. Normally Darry would have laughed at Soda but couldn't if he tried right now.
Soda looked over at Pony and wanted to pass out. He heard the doctor speak up. "Okay, he's still alive but unconscious. He's got a severe head would and had lost a lot of blood. The professionals should be here soon."
Soda blocked everything out after that. He went into his own daze until Darry had came and put his hands on his shoulders as Soda was almost falling back down the hill. He didn't need two hurt brothers. The paramedics had already arrived and were loading Pony on a stretcher and Soda hadn't even been aware of this.
He saw Darry talking to him but had no idea what he was talking about. Darry shook Soda lightly until he snapped back into reality. "Come on. You're coming on the helicopter with me right???"
Soda just nodded and followed Darry into the helicopter after Darry shouted to the other side of the wall.
Darry saw Soda shaking as he watched the paramedics struggling to save him brother. He pulled Soda close to him and tried to comfort him but knew it was hopeless. As he sat there Soda wondered how he could have ever been so selfish and jealous.
A/N. guess what I changed my mind. I wrote that chap last night but this morning I was able to get into fanfic so I'll mention you now. Okie. Thank you to all of you who read and especially to those who reviewed: Jayme (I'm sorry I made you cry. thanks for another review) VanillaSky(Thank you once again for another great review and I'm not even sure what the end result is gunna be yet so I'm not gunna promise anything just incase ) Dream Angel (Thank you for the constructive criticism, I watched it this chapter and I hope its better and I'm fixing the old ones too) BURNIN' CHURCH GAL (I'm sorry I got you sobbing. and I'm glad my reviews are the highlight of your day because your reviews are THE HIGHTLIGHT OF MY DAY!!! Lol anyway thanks) Roxy (Sorry for stopping it right there. thanks again for the review) Ruth ( Thanks again for the review, you've stuck with this the whole way thro and just wanna say thanks) ShadyLady (Thank you for another amazing review, you're always so nice.) and someone (Thanks for the great review and compliments!!!)
Okie I also have a proposition for you all. okie I'm going thro a bunch of stuff right now and the best way I know to deal with it is to write. So basically I'm looking for a person that I can send the story to bit by bit prolly like a chapter a week or so and it prolly won't be too long. It has nothing to do with the outsiders tho. I just need someone to stay on me to keep writing cuz I don't feel like telling any of my friends or family this so the only other way I know is to tell someone thro writing and when I don't tell anybody I tend to let it all build up so therefore I write. anyway I just need someone to tell me how bad it is and to continue and what not. and the first people I thought of were you guys so if anyone is interested please let me know in a review or email me at terran_blatenzuk@hotmail.com and I'll send you the prologue part and you can see if you can stand the story . thanks!!! Toodles!!!
~~~BlAtTy