Chapter 14. I'm pretty sure that's what I'm on. lol anyway. this is gunna
be short butall disclaimers apply.
Thanks to
BURNIN' CHURCH GAL. you've only reviewed like every other chapter. I think its okie if you miss one. I understand about the computer problems.oh no not the jig again!!! I'm sorry I scared you. lol I agree that it was a good thing that you were at home. lol but thanks again for the great review and I'll email you back soon.
Crazy4nc128. thanks for another great review. never gunna stop. and update ur story when you get a chance!!!
Dream Angel. I figured I better update soon cuz I didn't want the hot sauce threat coming back. lol. thanks!!!
Ruth. I'm glad you keep reviewing. thanks!!!
Chase M. Dakota . thanks for complimenting both stories. thanks!!!
Aaliyah-Charity. yeah band rules!!! Thanks for the review!!!
Anonymous. it is amazing for me isn't it??? Lol
Someone . look I'm updating already . yay me. lol thanks!!!
ShadyLady. yes at least he's alive. for now.bwa haha. sorry I love having the power to control their destinies. anyway I don't know what's gunna happen yet but anyway thanks for the review!!!
Roxy. I'll be sure to tell the guys that's seeing as I know them personally and see them all the time. lol. how cool would that be. wow I'm sorry don't ask I'm strange today. anyway thanks for the review
Karlei Shaynner.ur great and you said I rock.cool . thanks so much!!!
The four guys all stood there because even though they wanted to see Pony they were scared at the same time. Finally they followed the doctor to Pony's room. "I'll give you some time with him." And with that the doctor left the room leaving the five guys alone in the room.
No body knew what to say. The only sound in the room was the steady beeping of the heart monitor. Pony was lying there completely still. He looked so young and peaceful. He was hooked up to a bunch of tubes and machines.
Finally Darry walked over to him. He had broken down in the helicopter but he knew he now had to be strong for Pony so he's make it through. He walked over and gently kissed him on the forehead and took his hand. "How ya doing baby???" He whispered but Soda heard.
"How do you think he's doing Darry??? Look at him!!!" Soda said with anger in his voice.
"I know Soda I can see. its just that they say sometimes people can hear you when they're in co-comas." His voice cracked on the last word. "And it supposedly helps if you talk to them."
Soda lost it. "Darry look at him!!! He can't hear you!!! And it's not gunna help!!! He's gunna die I know it!!!" Soda turned and ran out. Everyone was so surprised because usually Soda was the optimistic one. Steve walked out after him to go try and comfort him.
Darry sat in the chair next to Pony's bed. Two-bit followed his lead and took the other chair. "Dar, you know he didn't mean it. He's just upset. You know how crazy he is about the kid. It just was a shock. He wouldn't say anything like that otherwise. You dig right???"
Darry was kind of shocked that that came out of Two-bit. He was never that serious. His hand still holding Pony's lightly he answered. "Yeah I know."
They went back to silence after that, both of them watching Pony.
Steve caught Soda in one of the hallways and put his hand on his shoulder. Soda pulled away and continued walking. Steve jogged until he caught up with him again. When Soda refused to stop Steve jumped in front of him.
"Get outta the way Steve." Soda said.
"Come on Soda. Settle down. Lets just sit for a minute okay???"
"No Steve I don't wanna sit. Now move."
"I know its tough to see him like that but he needs you right now. And so does Darry. Hey, we all do." He placed his hand on Soda's shoulder again, but this time found he didn't shake it off. "Come on let's go sit over there." He walked kind of dragging Soda but got him there none the less. "You wanna talk about it???"
"No." Soda replied simply.
"That's okay. we can just sit."
They sat there for a while before Soda finally spoke up. "I didn't mean to snap at Darry ya know."
Steve looked at Soda. He had known he'd start talking eventually. "I know buddy. And so does Darry."
"Yeah, I hope so. I just couldn't take him like that. It just. I dunno. I just." Soda couldn't get anymore out. He just buried his head in his hands. Steve put his arm around his shoulder.
"It'll be okay Soda."
Soda lifted his head and looked at Steve with big eyes. "I hope so."
Theres chapter 14. not one of my favourites but at least I updated please review
Thanks to
BURNIN' CHURCH GAL. you've only reviewed like every other chapter. I think its okie if you miss one. I understand about the computer problems.oh no not the jig again!!! I'm sorry I scared you. lol I agree that it was a good thing that you were at home. lol but thanks again for the great review and I'll email you back soon.
Crazy4nc128. thanks for another great review. never gunna stop. and update ur story when you get a chance!!!
Dream Angel. I figured I better update soon cuz I didn't want the hot sauce threat coming back. lol. thanks!!!
Ruth. I'm glad you keep reviewing. thanks!!!
Chase M. Dakota . thanks for complimenting both stories. thanks!!!
Aaliyah-Charity. yeah band rules!!! Thanks for the review!!!
Anonymous. it is amazing for me isn't it??? Lol
Someone . look I'm updating already . yay me. lol thanks!!!
ShadyLady. yes at least he's alive. for now.bwa haha. sorry I love having the power to control their destinies. anyway I don't know what's gunna happen yet but anyway thanks for the review!!!
Roxy. I'll be sure to tell the guys that's seeing as I know them personally and see them all the time. lol. how cool would that be. wow I'm sorry don't ask I'm strange today. anyway thanks for the review
Karlei Shaynner.ur great and you said I rock.cool . thanks so much!!!
The four guys all stood there because even though they wanted to see Pony they were scared at the same time. Finally they followed the doctor to Pony's room. "I'll give you some time with him." And with that the doctor left the room leaving the five guys alone in the room.
No body knew what to say. The only sound in the room was the steady beeping of the heart monitor. Pony was lying there completely still. He looked so young and peaceful. He was hooked up to a bunch of tubes and machines.
Finally Darry walked over to him. He had broken down in the helicopter but he knew he now had to be strong for Pony so he's make it through. He walked over and gently kissed him on the forehead and took his hand. "How ya doing baby???" He whispered but Soda heard.
"How do you think he's doing Darry??? Look at him!!!" Soda said with anger in his voice.
"I know Soda I can see. its just that they say sometimes people can hear you when they're in co-comas." His voice cracked on the last word. "And it supposedly helps if you talk to them."
Soda lost it. "Darry look at him!!! He can't hear you!!! And it's not gunna help!!! He's gunna die I know it!!!" Soda turned and ran out. Everyone was so surprised because usually Soda was the optimistic one. Steve walked out after him to go try and comfort him.
Darry sat in the chair next to Pony's bed. Two-bit followed his lead and took the other chair. "Dar, you know he didn't mean it. He's just upset. You know how crazy he is about the kid. It just was a shock. He wouldn't say anything like that otherwise. You dig right???"
Darry was kind of shocked that that came out of Two-bit. He was never that serious. His hand still holding Pony's lightly he answered. "Yeah I know."
They went back to silence after that, both of them watching Pony.
Steve caught Soda in one of the hallways and put his hand on his shoulder. Soda pulled away and continued walking. Steve jogged until he caught up with him again. When Soda refused to stop Steve jumped in front of him.
"Get outta the way Steve." Soda said.
"Come on Soda. Settle down. Lets just sit for a minute okay???"
"No Steve I don't wanna sit. Now move."
"I know its tough to see him like that but he needs you right now. And so does Darry. Hey, we all do." He placed his hand on Soda's shoulder again, but this time found he didn't shake it off. "Come on let's go sit over there." He walked kind of dragging Soda but got him there none the less. "You wanna talk about it???"
"No." Soda replied simply.
"That's okay. we can just sit."
They sat there for a while before Soda finally spoke up. "I didn't mean to snap at Darry ya know."
Steve looked at Soda. He had known he'd start talking eventually. "I know buddy. And so does Darry."
"Yeah, I hope so. I just couldn't take him like that. It just. I dunno. I just." Soda couldn't get anymore out. He just buried his head in his hands. Steve put his arm around his shoulder.
"It'll be okay Soda."
Soda lifted his head and looked at Steve with big eyes. "I hope so."
Theres chapter 14. not one of my favourites but at least I updated please review