Okie. first of all I must apologize .it's been forever since I updated and
I'm sorry. I don't have an excuse this time. I'm already almost done March
break but I've still yet to update and I'm sorry. but um. if anyone is
actually reading this story still then please review. um I don't remember
the last thing that happened or where I was going next so its gunna be new
to us all. not sure if it's gunna be a good or bad thing. but now to those
who reviewed:
BuzzBuzz16-I'm sorry it wasn't really asap. but thank you for the review and I'm glad you liked it!
Lil Chaos Angel-yup he's awake!!! Yay!!! But I'm sorry it wasn't soon but thanks anyway!!! Hope you like it!
Usagibuffy-lol thanks again for a review. I'm glad ur excited. hope this u like this chap to!
Ruth-I'm glad to be back. thank you for another wonderful review as always!
crazy4nc128-still not breaking the chain. you really thought it was that good? Thanks much!
Karlei Shaynner-thanks for the 3 reviews. lol I'm glad you reviewed and I hope you like this chap!
virgil-t-stone-Me? Awesome? Me? Are you mistaken? Lol but The Jay Mountain fic was great!!! And I also noticed today that I'm on your favourites list (grins from ear to ear!)YAY! But thank you very much!
Burnin Church Gal-I know you didn't review this chap but that's okie cuz I can't leave you out cuz I'm sure you meant to (shakes fist angrily in air) no I'm just kidding. but I had to ask how the thing you were supposed to email me about went!!! Hurry I gotta know!!!
AND ALL DISCLAIMERS APPLY
Soda laughed-not a real laugh but a half hearted worried laugh. "Very funny Pon." Soda just stared at his little brother with big hopeful eyes. But Pony just looked back blankly.
Pony opened his mouth again. "Get away from me." He tried to squirm but found himself unable to.
Soda took a deep breath. "Come on Pon. It's me, Soda. You remember me." His eyes turned pleading.
Pony looked hard at the boy in front of him. He tried so hard but just couldn't put anything to the face. He felt sorry for the boy because he saw that he really cared.
By now Steve had gotten up and gone to get a doctor.
Soda still sat waiting. Finally Pony answered. "I'm sorry." He then looked away.
Soda placed his hand on top of his brothers. "Pon,-" He started but was interrupted by his brother.
"Get off of me! Don't touch me!" Pony continued to yell while he tried his best to kick and squirm but still found himself unable to control his own body.
Soda moved his hand off of Pony's and tried to calm his hysterical brother. He was unable to touch him so he just talked in a reassuring, soothing voice. "Come on Pon. Calm down it's okay. It's going to be fine." He wished it were as easy as throwing an arm around him to calm him down when he had a nightmare. But Soda knew it wasn't.
By now Steve came back with a doctor and nurses following him. The doctor walked over to the bed immediately. "Excuse me sir can you back up." He said referring to Soda. "Young man, please."
Steve practically dragged Soda into the hall. "Soda, buddy give them some room okay?"
Soda started pacing the floor. "Steve. I can't believe this!" Soda continued to pace until the doctor came out a few minutes later.
"We've managed to calm him down. We're going to need to examine him and do some things still. There is a problem though. As you may have noticed, he has completely lost his memory. Now there's been cases where its simply been a temporary side effect and things come right back to them. Other times it just takes one memory or smell, etc. to click the memory back in. Other cases are long term and sometimes never regain their full memory. But he was lucky. He was only in a coma for a short time so hopefully its short term. At least he woke up, for that you can be thankful."
Soda started to shake his head. "No, no! NO!" Steve put a hand on his shoulder but he shook it off. "NO, YOUR WRONG DOC! WE ARE NOT LUCKY! WE SHOULD BE THANKFUL THAT MY LITTLE BROTHER DOESN'T KNOW WHO I AM?" Soda shook his head some more. He then grabbed the front of the doctor's uniform. "YOU'RE GONNA GO BACK IN THAT ROOM AND FIX HIM YOU HEAR ME?"
A nurse walked out into the hall in a panic. "Doctor do you want me to call security?"
Steve pulled Soda off the doctor and held him back,
The doctor shook his head. "No, nurse it's alright. He's just a little worked up. Maybe they should go for a walk." And with that the doctor and nurse went back into Pony's room.
Steve pulled Soda down the hall. Once they were far enough Steve let go of Soda. "What are you doing, trying to get yourself arrested or kicked of the hospital?"
Soda just kept walking. "No, it's just he says we're lucky. I just don't see how any of this is lucky. What did we, especially Pony, do to deserve all of this. Mom and Dad, Windrixville, Johnny and Dally, the socs, the social workers, the accident, the coma and now this!" Soda ran his fingers through his hair. They came to a waiting room with couches and cushioned chairs and sat down.
Steve put his arm around Soda's shoulders and surprisingly this time he allowed it. This all seemed vaguely familiar to Steve-him trying to comfort Soda as they wandered the hospital hallway once Pony was in a coma. They had thought that was never gonna end but it did. So therefore this would too. That's the perspective he had to keep to keep Soda on track. "Listen. Nobody did anything to deserve all this, least of all Pony. Sure I have some problems with the kid from time to time but he's never done anything to deserve this. But it happened and we can't do anything about it now. But what we can do is try and help each other and Pony through this. This ain't gonna be easy but we're gonna get through this okay."
Steve gave Soda's shoulder a squeeze. Suddenly laughter could be heard behind them. In the reflection of a piece of glass Steve and Soda saw Two- bit and Darry stand behind them and Two-bit was laughing.
They pretended not to notice and Steve added. "Now maybe if it was Two-bit then I'd say it was deserved but-"
Two-bit continued to laugh. "Wait-hey! That's not very nice! And since when did you become Mr. Sensitivity?"
Two-bit and Darry came and sat down. Darry just whacked Two-bit. "Is everything okay? How's Pony?"
When nothing was said Steve finally asked. "Good news or bad news first?"
Darry stiffened at the words bad news. "Just tell me Steve."
Steve went on to tell Darry and Two-bit and they all walked up towards the room.
*kk. um poll . if you review please answer. I can either end this story soon or it can be quite a bit longer. I have ideas for both so please I wanna know what you people think! Thanks
~~~BlAtTy
BuzzBuzz16-I'm sorry it wasn't really asap. but thank you for the review and I'm glad you liked it!
Lil Chaos Angel-yup he's awake!!! Yay!!! But I'm sorry it wasn't soon but thanks anyway!!! Hope you like it!
Usagibuffy-lol thanks again for a review. I'm glad ur excited. hope this u like this chap to!
Ruth-I'm glad to be back. thank you for another wonderful review as always!
crazy4nc128-still not breaking the chain. you really thought it was that good? Thanks much!
Karlei Shaynner-thanks for the 3 reviews. lol I'm glad you reviewed and I hope you like this chap!
virgil-t-stone-Me? Awesome? Me? Are you mistaken? Lol but The Jay Mountain fic was great!!! And I also noticed today that I'm on your favourites list (grins from ear to ear!)YAY! But thank you very much!
Burnin Church Gal-I know you didn't review this chap but that's okie cuz I can't leave you out cuz I'm sure you meant to (shakes fist angrily in air) no I'm just kidding. but I had to ask how the thing you were supposed to email me about went!!! Hurry I gotta know!!!
AND ALL DISCLAIMERS APPLY
Soda laughed-not a real laugh but a half hearted worried laugh. "Very funny Pon." Soda just stared at his little brother with big hopeful eyes. But Pony just looked back blankly.
Pony opened his mouth again. "Get away from me." He tried to squirm but found himself unable to.
Soda took a deep breath. "Come on Pon. It's me, Soda. You remember me." His eyes turned pleading.
Pony looked hard at the boy in front of him. He tried so hard but just couldn't put anything to the face. He felt sorry for the boy because he saw that he really cared.
By now Steve had gotten up and gone to get a doctor.
Soda still sat waiting. Finally Pony answered. "I'm sorry." He then looked away.
Soda placed his hand on top of his brothers. "Pon,-" He started but was interrupted by his brother.
"Get off of me! Don't touch me!" Pony continued to yell while he tried his best to kick and squirm but still found himself unable to control his own body.
Soda moved his hand off of Pony's and tried to calm his hysterical brother. He was unable to touch him so he just talked in a reassuring, soothing voice. "Come on Pon. Calm down it's okay. It's going to be fine." He wished it were as easy as throwing an arm around him to calm him down when he had a nightmare. But Soda knew it wasn't.
By now Steve came back with a doctor and nurses following him. The doctor walked over to the bed immediately. "Excuse me sir can you back up." He said referring to Soda. "Young man, please."
Steve practically dragged Soda into the hall. "Soda, buddy give them some room okay?"
Soda started pacing the floor. "Steve. I can't believe this!" Soda continued to pace until the doctor came out a few minutes later.
"We've managed to calm him down. We're going to need to examine him and do some things still. There is a problem though. As you may have noticed, he has completely lost his memory. Now there's been cases where its simply been a temporary side effect and things come right back to them. Other times it just takes one memory or smell, etc. to click the memory back in. Other cases are long term and sometimes never regain their full memory. But he was lucky. He was only in a coma for a short time so hopefully its short term. At least he woke up, for that you can be thankful."
Soda started to shake his head. "No, no! NO!" Steve put a hand on his shoulder but he shook it off. "NO, YOUR WRONG DOC! WE ARE NOT LUCKY! WE SHOULD BE THANKFUL THAT MY LITTLE BROTHER DOESN'T KNOW WHO I AM?" Soda shook his head some more. He then grabbed the front of the doctor's uniform. "YOU'RE GONNA GO BACK IN THAT ROOM AND FIX HIM YOU HEAR ME?"
A nurse walked out into the hall in a panic. "Doctor do you want me to call security?"
Steve pulled Soda off the doctor and held him back,
The doctor shook his head. "No, nurse it's alright. He's just a little worked up. Maybe they should go for a walk." And with that the doctor and nurse went back into Pony's room.
Steve pulled Soda down the hall. Once they were far enough Steve let go of Soda. "What are you doing, trying to get yourself arrested or kicked of the hospital?"
Soda just kept walking. "No, it's just he says we're lucky. I just don't see how any of this is lucky. What did we, especially Pony, do to deserve all of this. Mom and Dad, Windrixville, Johnny and Dally, the socs, the social workers, the accident, the coma and now this!" Soda ran his fingers through his hair. They came to a waiting room with couches and cushioned chairs and sat down.
Steve put his arm around Soda's shoulders and surprisingly this time he allowed it. This all seemed vaguely familiar to Steve-him trying to comfort Soda as they wandered the hospital hallway once Pony was in a coma. They had thought that was never gonna end but it did. So therefore this would too. That's the perspective he had to keep to keep Soda on track. "Listen. Nobody did anything to deserve all this, least of all Pony. Sure I have some problems with the kid from time to time but he's never done anything to deserve this. But it happened and we can't do anything about it now. But what we can do is try and help each other and Pony through this. This ain't gonna be easy but we're gonna get through this okay."
Steve gave Soda's shoulder a squeeze. Suddenly laughter could be heard behind them. In the reflection of a piece of glass Steve and Soda saw Two- bit and Darry stand behind them and Two-bit was laughing.
They pretended not to notice and Steve added. "Now maybe if it was Two-bit then I'd say it was deserved but-"
Two-bit continued to laugh. "Wait-hey! That's not very nice! And since when did you become Mr. Sensitivity?"
Two-bit and Darry came and sat down. Darry just whacked Two-bit. "Is everything okay? How's Pony?"
When nothing was said Steve finally asked. "Good news or bad news first?"
Darry stiffened at the words bad news. "Just tell me Steve."
Steve went on to tell Darry and Two-bit and they all walked up towards the room.
*kk. um poll . if you review please answer. I can either end this story soon or it can be quite a bit longer. I have ideas for both so please I wanna know what you people think! Thanks
~~~BlAtTy