Oh good gosh it's been awhile, sorry about that everyone. You all know
what time it is. that's right its excuse time where I blabber on about why
I haven't updated. Many months ago when I first discovered fanfic,
actually prolly about a year ago, I was so into writing on here and reading
it was the coolest thing! And while I still love the fanfic, I just don't
seem to have the same interest to write as I used to, and I find it
terribly hard to write well when the interest isn't there. Like I coulda
still wrote but it woulda sucked. That didn't sound the way I wanted it to,
it didn't have anything really to do with fanfic. it was stuff I had to
deal with first in my own life that I just didn't have the interest to do
the things I used to. and so I focused more on expressing myself thru
poetry and I even wrote a book :D. but I think its getting better now so I
am back! I pity you all, lol! But anyway, I don't member where I was
heading with this so please excuse these next few chaps as I get back on
track. and as always I don't own anything, don't sue me please.
Pinkmoon- something to look forward to. :O!!! thanks so much!
. Angel02-thanks so much!!!! Keep reading!
Burnin Church gal- THANKS FOR BOTH GREAT REVIEWS! Ur crazy and I love it! haven't seen u on here lately, u still around? Well thanks for another great review!! How are those dreams coming man, its almost august!! Uh oh!! Get back to me if u read this please!! I'll ttyl!!
Hailei- I'm glad u love it!!
lilramona -don't cry!!
Bailyy -thanks I'll make it longer!! :D
Prisma -thanks for the great reviews!! :D hope u like
Karen - thanks!!! Keep reading
Ruth-thanks again for another great review!!
cc- thanks ur awesome, keep reading
crazy4nc128-yus the chain continues!! Hehe thanks man!
S.E. fan- thanks! Keep reading!
Eh, Man -lmao awesome review man that was great!!
Air- one of the best stories out there? *faints
. Chase M. Dakota -thanks for yet another great review. Keep em coming!!
The four guys made their way up to the room. Each of them was too deep in thought to say anything.
Darry couldn't believe what he had just been told. Pony had to remember. But what if he didn't. That's when Darry really thought about it. Maybe that would be a good thing. He wouldn't have to remember all that pain and guilt he felt. He wouldn't remember watching his friends die in front of him. And he'd forget how him and Darry used to fight and how this whole mess was Darry's fault.
Darry shook his head. What the hell was he thinking. Then Pony wouldn't remember him or Sodapop. And he'd forget all that stuff he used to know, man was he smart. And worst of all he wouldn't remember Dally or Johnny or Mom and Dad. No he had to remember. He just wouldn't be the same Pony if he didn't.
The rest of the guys were pretty much thinking the same thing, well the second half.
When they reached the room the doctor walked out into the hallway. "Oh hello. Good we need to talk."
Darry spoke up first. "Hey Doc do you have any news?"
The doctor nodded. "Well first off his injuries have mostly healed while he was in the coma and they should be fine soon. But as you know by now I'm sure, he does in fact have memory loss. But given all the circumstances and after reviewing the case I have no reason to believe that it is long term. You need to surround him with familiar things. Tell him stories, remind him of who you are, and soon you will be able to take him home so that should help, being in a familiar scenery. Ponyboy is a very strong young man. He pulled through a coma that many wouldn't have so I believe he'll be good as new in time."
Darry nodded. "Thanks doc." And the doctor walked down the hall.
Steve spoke up first. "He's right guys. Pony is strong. It's all going to work out."
Soda smiled. "I hope you're right Stevie."
There was a brief silence.
Then Two-bit spoke up. "I love a good touching moment as much as the next guy, but maybe we should go in?"
The rest nodded and then the four guys entered the room slowly.
And there was Pony laying there, staring blankly at them.
They all stood around looking at each other until finally Soda walked up to the bed and crouched next to it. "Hey Pony."
Ponyboy looked back confused. "Pony, that's my name?"
Soda replied with a bit of a smile. "Well, it's Ponyboy but we call you Pony."
The smile slipped from Soda's voice when Pony replied with a bit of disgust in his voice. "Oh."
Soda talked in a soft voice. "You like your name Pony, it's unique."
Pony just nodded. And when he didn't say anything else Soda continued. "I know you don't remember me but I'm Soda your brother."
Pony sat for a second almost trying to remember. The whole room watched in anticipation as Pony opened his mouth. If he were going to remember anyone it'd be Soda. Finally Pony just replied. "Were our parents crackheads?"
Everybody sighed. This obviously wasn't going to be easy.
R&r please!
Pinkmoon- something to look forward to. :O!!! thanks so much!
. Angel02-thanks so much!!!! Keep reading!
Burnin Church gal- THANKS FOR BOTH GREAT REVIEWS! Ur crazy and I love it! haven't seen u on here lately, u still around? Well thanks for another great review!! How are those dreams coming man, its almost august!! Uh oh!! Get back to me if u read this please!! I'll ttyl!!
Hailei- I'm glad u love it!!
lilramona -don't cry!!
Bailyy -thanks I'll make it longer!! :D
Prisma -thanks for the great reviews!! :D hope u like
Karen - thanks!!! Keep reading
Ruth-thanks again for another great review!!
cc- thanks ur awesome, keep reading
crazy4nc128-yus the chain continues!! Hehe thanks man!
S.E. fan- thanks! Keep reading!
Eh, Man -lmao awesome review man that was great!!
Air- one of the best stories out there? *faints
. Chase M. Dakota -thanks for yet another great review. Keep em coming!!
The four guys made their way up to the room. Each of them was too deep in thought to say anything.
Darry couldn't believe what he had just been told. Pony had to remember. But what if he didn't. That's when Darry really thought about it. Maybe that would be a good thing. He wouldn't have to remember all that pain and guilt he felt. He wouldn't remember watching his friends die in front of him. And he'd forget how him and Darry used to fight and how this whole mess was Darry's fault.
Darry shook his head. What the hell was he thinking. Then Pony wouldn't remember him or Sodapop. And he'd forget all that stuff he used to know, man was he smart. And worst of all he wouldn't remember Dally or Johnny or Mom and Dad. No he had to remember. He just wouldn't be the same Pony if he didn't.
The rest of the guys were pretty much thinking the same thing, well the second half.
When they reached the room the doctor walked out into the hallway. "Oh hello. Good we need to talk."
Darry spoke up first. "Hey Doc do you have any news?"
The doctor nodded. "Well first off his injuries have mostly healed while he was in the coma and they should be fine soon. But as you know by now I'm sure, he does in fact have memory loss. But given all the circumstances and after reviewing the case I have no reason to believe that it is long term. You need to surround him with familiar things. Tell him stories, remind him of who you are, and soon you will be able to take him home so that should help, being in a familiar scenery. Ponyboy is a very strong young man. He pulled through a coma that many wouldn't have so I believe he'll be good as new in time."
Darry nodded. "Thanks doc." And the doctor walked down the hall.
Steve spoke up first. "He's right guys. Pony is strong. It's all going to work out."
Soda smiled. "I hope you're right Stevie."
There was a brief silence.
Then Two-bit spoke up. "I love a good touching moment as much as the next guy, but maybe we should go in?"
The rest nodded and then the four guys entered the room slowly.
And there was Pony laying there, staring blankly at them.
They all stood around looking at each other until finally Soda walked up to the bed and crouched next to it. "Hey Pony."
Ponyboy looked back confused. "Pony, that's my name?"
Soda replied with a bit of a smile. "Well, it's Ponyboy but we call you Pony."
The smile slipped from Soda's voice when Pony replied with a bit of disgust in his voice. "Oh."
Soda talked in a soft voice. "You like your name Pony, it's unique."
Pony just nodded. And when he didn't say anything else Soda continued. "I know you don't remember me but I'm Soda your brother."
Pony sat for a second almost trying to remember. The whole room watched in anticipation as Pony opened his mouth. If he were going to remember anyone it'd be Soda. Finally Pony just replied. "Were our parents crackheads?"
Everybody sighed. This obviously wasn't going to be easy.
R&r please!