//Author's Note\\ I had chapter 2 alll written out in my fan fiction
notebook, and it was actually quite long, but my notebook has gone missing.
Which sucks, because now I have to write it allll over again. Sorry about
the delay. I'll be quicker with updates, I promise.
And to my first Reviewer::
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"Mum! Mum!" George cried as he lifted Hermione's feeble body into his arms, carrying her as if she were an infant.
"Of course something's wrong with her, George. Honestly, after everything she's been through, what do you expect?" Mrs. Weasley called back knowingly.
"Mum! She collapsed!" he exclaimed, taking her into his room and laying her on his bed. (A/N wow.that sounds wrong)
The sound of feet rushing up the stairs was heard, and soon Harry, Ron, and Mrs. Weasley appeared in the doorway, looking worried.
"George, you get my wand, Ronald, get a bucket of cold water and a rag, and Harry, come here and help me get her underneath the covers." As George and Ron left the room, Mrs. Weasley said to Harry, in her motherly tone of voice, "Okay, dear, if you could just lift her up for me while I pull the sheets back, this should work."
Harry lifted his best friend up gingerly, looking down at her face, which looked tormented and sad, and totally different then how she had appeared a month ago. She had a worried look on her face, and her lips were parted slightly. Suddenly, she began to flail in Harry's arms.
"MUM!" she screamed, and Harry had to hold her tighter to make sure she didn't fall. "DAD! COME BACK! DON'T LEAVE ME HERE ALL ALONE! COME BACK! I NEED YOU!"
Ron and George ran into the room, looking frantic.
"Don't just stand there gaping! Help me, you stupid prats!" Harry yelled, in order to be heard over Hermione's cries.
"Put her on the bed!" Mrs. Weasley bellowed. "Oh Hermione, dear, I'm so sorry for what I'm about to do," she said apologetically before saying, "petrificus totalus."
Hermione's body went completely rigid, and her eyes were still closed.
"Just WHAT is going on in here," Percy asked furiously, walking into the room. "Honestly, I'm trying to do official ministry business, and you people are screaming like You-Know-Who were here. I suppose your making more Weasley's Wizard Wheezes or whatever the.bloody hell. What happened to her?"
"Took you long enough to notice, you stupid twat. She was having some sort of nightmare and it got so bad Mum had to petrificus totalus her," George fumed. "Honestly, all you ever talk about it 'official ministry business.' Hermione's more important than the thickness of cauldrons!"
"Enough of that, you two. Now everyone out while I wake her up."
Hermione opened up her eyes and looked at the burgundy walls groggily. Sitting up, she noticed that those walls were covered with memorabilia and posters of the Yugoslavian Gnomes quidditch team. The twin bed (A/N no pun intended lol) she was laying on was adorned with a Yugoslavian comforter, with miniature quidditch players zooming around on broomsticks on it. An identical twin bed (A/N stupid puns.) was located across the room, as was a bureau, which had a drawer open, revealing a pair of orange boxers. On the floor there were several cauldrons, some with content inside.
'Must be for Weasley's Wizard Wheezes,' Hermione thought. At the end of each bed were trunks, presumably for Hogwarts, for they were full of school supplies. A gasp of horror ran through Hermione's body. 'The new term starts in three days and I haven't even been to Diagon Alley!'
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Did you like it? I tried to make it longer, even though the original chapter two was even longer than this.sorry I had to break it off there but my evil older brother is making me get off the computer. The next chapter WILL be up quicker than this one was, I swear. Please review, like I said, flames are welcomed, and even encouraged. Don't be afraid to say what's on your mind.
And now, to comment on all 13 of chapter one's reviews (there were thirteen.woo!)
SAILORV-PRINCESS:: Thank you for the compliments, and yes, I do agree with you that the chapter was much too short. I, too, do not like short stories, I like them to be long and drawn out. And prat, from my understanding is like an idiot. I don't know what parping means.haha. Thank you for reviewing! I hope you like the rest of the fic.
Gliniel of Tirragen + Malfoy:: lol! Brilliant! They use that word a lot on "Changing Rooms" on the BBC lol. Thanks, and I'm updating righhhhht now lol.
Shenaux:: I'm continuing now.:-D.thanks for the review. I show promise! Yay!
Twilight's Mysteries:: Ohhh I can't tell you what's going to happppen. That would ruin the story for you lol. You'll have to keep reading to find out ::winks::
Wild:: I answered both of your questions in this chapter. ::smiles:: lol thanks for the review.
Yukito Forever:: Thank you for your review!! Keep reading! Lol
Becca:: thank you for your review and suggestions, I am taking them to heart, and trying to make my story better with them. Did I do a sufficient job at describing the twins' room in this chapter?
BookLover-210:: Thank you for your review!
Gwen Potter:: Thank you! You're one of my favorite authors on FF.net so your review means a lot! ::grins::
?:: this is not me yelling at you, this is just a friendly "sujestion." Why don't you read Hermione/Ginny fan fiction then? I like to read reviews of MY stories, with the ships I write about. Although I support slash, and whatnot, I'm not really into it. I'd rather you not review at all then write the nonsense you wrote. Your review insulted me.
Fred:: Thank you! Please continue reading!
Blue Eyed Angel:: Thank you for your review!
Big*Mean*Silver*Dragon:: Thank you! Keep on reading! Lol.
And to my first Reviewer::
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"Mum! Mum!" George cried as he lifted Hermione's feeble body into his arms, carrying her as if she were an infant.
"Of course something's wrong with her, George. Honestly, after everything she's been through, what do you expect?" Mrs. Weasley called back knowingly.
"Mum! She collapsed!" he exclaimed, taking her into his room and laying her on his bed. (A/N wow.that sounds wrong)
The sound of feet rushing up the stairs was heard, and soon Harry, Ron, and Mrs. Weasley appeared in the doorway, looking worried.
"George, you get my wand, Ronald, get a bucket of cold water and a rag, and Harry, come here and help me get her underneath the covers." As George and Ron left the room, Mrs. Weasley said to Harry, in her motherly tone of voice, "Okay, dear, if you could just lift her up for me while I pull the sheets back, this should work."
Harry lifted his best friend up gingerly, looking down at her face, which looked tormented and sad, and totally different then how she had appeared a month ago. She had a worried look on her face, and her lips were parted slightly. Suddenly, she began to flail in Harry's arms.
"MUM!" she screamed, and Harry had to hold her tighter to make sure she didn't fall. "DAD! COME BACK! DON'T LEAVE ME HERE ALL ALONE! COME BACK! I NEED YOU!"
Ron and George ran into the room, looking frantic.
"Don't just stand there gaping! Help me, you stupid prats!" Harry yelled, in order to be heard over Hermione's cries.
"Put her on the bed!" Mrs. Weasley bellowed. "Oh Hermione, dear, I'm so sorry for what I'm about to do," she said apologetically before saying, "petrificus totalus."
Hermione's body went completely rigid, and her eyes were still closed.
"Just WHAT is going on in here," Percy asked furiously, walking into the room. "Honestly, I'm trying to do official ministry business, and you people are screaming like You-Know-Who were here. I suppose your making more Weasley's Wizard Wheezes or whatever the.bloody hell. What happened to her?"
"Took you long enough to notice, you stupid twat. She was having some sort of nightmare and it got so bad Mum had to petrificus totalus her," George fumed. "Honestly, all you ever talk about it 'official ministry business.' Hermione's more important than the thickness of cauldrons!"
"Enough of that, you two. Now everyone out while I wake her up."
Hermione opened up her eyes and looked at the burgundy walls groggily. Sitting up, she noticed that those walls were covered with memorabilia and posters of the Yugoslavian Gnomes quidditch team. The twin bed (A/N no pun intended lol) she was laying on was adorned with a Yugoslavian comforter, with miniature quidditch players zooming around on broomsticks on it. An identical twin bed (A/N stupid puns.) was located across the room, as was a bureau, which had a drawer open, revealing a pair of orange boxers. On the floor there were several cauldrons, some with content inside.
'Must be for Weasley's Wizard Wheezes,' Hermione thought. At the end of each bed were trunks, presumably for Hogwarts, for they were full of school supplies. A gasp of horror ran through Hermione's body. 'The new term starts in three days and I haven't even been to Diagon Alley!'
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Did you like it? I tried to make it longer, even though the original chapter two was even longer than this.sorry I had to break it off there but my evil older brother is making me get off the computer. The next chapter WILL be up quicker than this one was, I swear. Please review, like I said, flames are welcomed, and even encouraged. Don't be afraid to say what's on your mind.
And now, to comment on all 13 of chapter one's reviews (there were thirteen.woo!)
SAILORV-PRINCESS:: Thank you for the compliments, and yes, I do agree with you that the chapter was much too short. I, too, do not like short stories, I like them to be long and drawn out. And prat, from my understanding is like an idiot. I don't know what parping means.haha. Thank you for reviewing! I hope you like the rest of the fic.
Gliniel of Tirragen + Malfoy:: lol! Brilliant! They use that word a lot on "Changing Rooms" on the BBC lol. Thanks, and I'm updating righhhhht now lol.
Shenaux:: I'm continuing now.:-D.thanks for the review. I show promise! Yay!
Twilight's Mysteries:: Ohhh I can't tell you what's going to happppen. That would ruin the story for you lol. You'll have to keep reading to find out ::winks::
Wild:: I answered both of your questions in this chapter. ::smiles:: lol thanks for the review.
Yukito Forever:: Thank you for your review!! Keep reading! Lol
Becca:: thank you for your review and suggestions, I am taking them to heart, and trying to make my story better with them. Did I do a sufficient job at describing the twins' room in this chapter?
BookLover-210:: Thank you for your review!
Gwen Potter:: Thank you! You're one of my favorite authors on FF.net so your review means a lot! ::grins::
?:: this is not me yelling at you, this is just a friendly "sujestion." Why don't you read Hermione/Ginny fan fiction then? I like to read reviews of MY stories, with the ships I write about. Although I support slash, and whatnot, I'm not really into it. I'd rather you not review at all then write the nonsense you wrote. Your review insulted me.
Fred:: Thank you! Please continue reading!
Blue Eyed Angel:: Thank you for your review!
Big*Mean*Silver*Dragon:: Thank you! Keep on reading! Lol.