Hey everyone! How're you? Well, I'm alright, and just about to be typing/post chapter 11 of Visiting Hours! I hope you all enjoy!
NOTE:: This chapter is actually NOT from Duo's POV! Isn't that amazing?? (sorry about any OOCness of the characters…I try my best ^_^)
Disclaimer: I don't own anything but my b-day presents. ^_^
::To The Reviewers::
Anime the Fallen Angel:: When you read this chapter, you'll find that you left out an important mentioning in your last review. (And hopefully, that made sense ^_^)
Misanagi:: You know, I have no idea what that last language is…I wanna say, Hebrew or Arabic or something like that…*shrugs* *drools* And thanks for the present. *stares at mental image of Q dressed as Neo* Sorry about the short chapters. This one's kinda short as well, but exciting.
Silver Mirror:: Thank you very much! I hope you enjoy this chapter.
Neko:: Sorry about another cliffhanger! But almost all of them are like that. ^_^ Thanks for the review!
Ohtar:: Yay! Thank you! I hope that you love this chapter with all the rest!
::To Everyone::
Um, I dunno if you all noticed but Chapter 3 to Amnesia? Is up. ^_^ Go and read if you like! Oh! And review! *grins*
Onward!
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Visiting Hours
Chapter Eleven
Heero's POV (Not Duo for once)
Quatre felt extremely light in my arms as I carried him through the dim lit halls. Beside me, Trowa walked clutching his cut shoulder, wearing a worried glance on his face. Before I could even turn to check on the other two, Wufei's voice cut in.
"Where's Maxwell?" I heard a hint of worry in his voice as Trowa and I stopped walking and looked back at Wufei. Duo was nowhere to be found. Instantly, I handed a groaning Quatre to Wufei and retraced our steps back to the laundry room we had been recently occupying.
Nothing.
No traces of anything could be found. The room was entirely clear as if nothing had happened at all. The one appearance that assured me that I was in the right room was the few droplets of Quatre's blood that had dried on the floor. With one glance around, I found that there were no other exits beyond the door I had used to enter, not even a ventilation system. Realization struck me as I head and shot fired and Quatre's horrified wail ring through the halls.
I ran back, gun in hand, to where I had left Quatre, Trowa, and Wufei, but did not like what I found.
Blood stained the dull gray walls and Wufei lay on the ground with his eyes closed and face contorted with overwhelming pain, a bullet lodged in his chest. A crumpled up and weak looking Quatre was kneeled by his side and held Wufei's hand in his own as tears flowed down his face. I pointed the gun to Mitch who still held Duo in his grasp. [1]
Quickly, I aimed and pulled the trigger.
The bullet lodged itself into Mitch's leg as he cried out in pain and fell to the floor, taking Duo down with him. In anger, Mitch raised his gun at me and fired.
His aim was off but he still hit my shoulder. I winced slightly as Mitch was about to pull the trigger again.
Acting quickly, Trowa swiftly kicked the gun from Mitch's hand and sent if flying through the air. By now, Duo had gotten free and was helping Trowa to restrain Mitch.
I moved to Wufei and Quatre seeing a faint yellow glow connecting them. Quatre was using his empathy to keep Wufei alive but was slowly losing his own life energy.
"Quatre, no." I pulled their hands apart, breaking the energy flow. Quatre looked to me with tears staining his face. I shook my head at him. "You need your strength. You cannot prevent death. Wufei wouldn't live with himself knowing that you died to save him."
With one final look to Wufei, Quatre nodded and let death claim his brother. A silence fell over the pilots as they mourned but was interrupted by Mitch's deep and cutting voice.
"And the strongest falls," his voice oozed happiness as we all, excluding Quatre, turned on him.
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[1] - Ok, now you readers may be thinking, 'Well, if there was only one way out of the room then how come Heero didn't pass Mitch on the way in?' (or at least I questioned myself on this one). Well, I'm just lazy so I decided to just say that Quatre has a big mansion and that there are several halls leading to the hallway the door is on…so, basically, Mitch took another way to get back to the pilots while Heero just retraced their steps. Ok, can anyone tell me if that made sense at all??? *sighs* I hope it did, otherwise, just ignore what I just rambled about.
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Short, I know. But very exhilarating! Poor, poor Fei! *pouts* I did not want to kill him but that's the way the story goes I suppose. Well, I hope that you liked the chapter, and will review! Thanks!
(Note to Anime the Fallen Angel: What I said at the top about your last review, I meant the fact that you said don't let Tro, Q, or Duo die but you didn't mention Fei. That's all I meant by that. ^_^)
Please REVIEW!
Later!
NOTE:: This chapter is actually NOT from Duo's POV! Isn't that amazing?? (sorry about any OOCness of the characters…I try my best ^_^)
Disclaimer: I don't own anything but my b-day presents. ^_^
::To The Reviewers::
Anime the Fallen Angel:: When you read this chapter, you'll find that you left out an important mentioning in your last review. (And hopefully, that made sense ^_^)
Misanagi:: You know, I have no idea what that last language is…I wanna say, Hebrew or Arabic or something like that…*shrugs* *drools* And thanks for the present. *stares at mental image of Q dressed as Neo* Sorry about the short chapters. This one's kinda short as well, but exciting.
Silver Mirror:: Thank you very much! I hope you enjoy this chapter.
Neko:: Sorry about another cliffhanger! But almost all of them are like that. ^_^ Thanks for the review!
Ohtar:: Yay! Thank you! I hope that you love this chapter with all the rest!
::To Everyone::
Um, I dunno if you all noticed but Chapter 3 to Amnesia? Is up. ^_^ Go and read if you like! Oh! And review! *grins*
Onward!
*~*~*~*
Visiting Hours
Chapter Eleven
Heero's POV (Not Duo for once)
Quatre felt extremely light in my arms as I carried him through the dim lit halls. Beside me, Trowa walked clutching his cut shoulder, wearing a worried glance on his face. Before I could even turn to check on the other two, Wufei's voice cut in.
"Where's Maxwell?" I heard a hint of worry in his voice as Trowa and I stopped walking and looked back at Wufei. Duo was nowhere to be found. Instantly, I handed a groaning Quatre to Wufei and retraced our steps back to the laundry room we had been recently occupying.
Nothing.
No traces of anything could be found. The room was entirely clear as if nothing had happened at all. The one appearance that assured me that I was in the right room was the few droplets of Quatre's blood that had dried on the floor. With one glance around, I found that there were no other exits beyond the door I had used to enter, not even a ventilation system. Realization struck me as I head and shot fired and Quatre's horrified wail ring through the halls.
I ran back, gun in hand, to where I had left Quatre, Trowa, and Wufei, but did not like what I found.
Blood stained the dull gray walls and Wufei lay on the ground with his eyes closed and face contorted with overwhelming pain, a bullet lodged in his chest. A crumpled up and weak looking Quatre was kneeled by his side and held Wufei's hand in his own as tears flowed down his face. I pointed the gun to Mitch who still held Duo in his grasp. [1]
Quickly, I aimed and pulled the trigger.
The bullet lodged itself into Mitch's leg as he cried out in pain and fell to the floor, taking Duo down with him. In anger, Mitch raised his gun at me and fired.
His aim was off but he still hit my shoulder. I winced slightly as Mitch was about to pull the trigger again.
Acting quickly, Trowa swiftly kicked the gun from Mitch's hand and sent if flying through the air. By now, Duo had gotten free and was helping Trowa to restrain Mitch.
I moved to Wufei and Quatre seeing a faint yellow glow connecting them. Quatre was using his empathy to keep Wufei alive but was slowly losing his own life energy.
"Quatre, no." I pulled their hands apart, breaking the energy flow. Quatre looked to me with tears staining his face. I shook my head at him. "You need your strength. You cannot prevent death. Wufei wouldn't live with himself knowing that you died to save him."
With one final look to Wufei, Quatre nodded and let death claim his brother. A silence fell over the pilots as they mourned but was interrupted by Mitch's deep and cutting voice.
"And the strongest falls," his voice oozed happiness as we all, excluding Quatre, turned on him.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
[1] - Ok, now you readers may be thinking, 'Well, if there was only one way out of the room then how come Heero didn't pass Mitch on the way in?' (or at least I questioned myself on this one). Well, I'm just lazy so I decided to just say that Quatre has a big mansion and that there are several halls leading to the hallway the door is on…so, basically, Mitch took another way to get back to the pilots while Heero just retraced their steps. Ok, can anyone tell me if that made sense at all??? *sighs* I hope it did, otherwise, just ignore what I just rambled about.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Short, I know. But very exhilarating! Poor, poor Fei! *pouts* I did not want to kill him but that's the way the story goes I suppose. Well, I hope that you liked the chapter, and will review! Thanks!
(Note to Anime the Fallen Angel: What I said at the top about your last review, I meant the fact that you said don't let Tro, Q, or Duo die but you didn't mention Fei. That's all I meant by that. ^_^)
Please REVIEW!
Later!