Author's Note:
Hello! How did you like the first chappie? It's very Mary-Sue-ish so far isn't it? Don't blame me if I can't write that well!!! *runs away screaming* *comes back as if nothing happened* Anyway, on with the fic! And when I was advertising my friend's story, her pen name is actually Marochre! Oh, and do keep in mind that it's VERY AU considering my VCR ain't working properly and I haven't seen any Beyblade lately. *runs away crying* NO BEYBLADE!!!
Enrique stared at the girl hugging him.
"Uh, CHOCKING!" he said to Mika.
"Oh," Mika said as she looked up into Enrique's blue eyes.
"I'm SO sorry!" she squealed.
Enrique's eyes turned to saucers.
A hand shot out from the classroom and grabbed Enrique's hand.
The hand pulled him to a desk.
Enrique looked up at the owner of the arm.
A girl with long blonde hair wiped her blonde bangs (AN: HA MAROCHRE! I SAID BANGS!!! (She hates it when people use that word()) away from her face.
The girl smiled.
"Needed that?" she asked.
"Huh?" Enrique managed to blubber out. (AN: Basically, he barely managed to say it.)
"You wanted to get away from her, right?" asked the blonde girl.
Enrique smiled.
"She squeals," he said.
"Ye!" the blonde girl laughed.
"Hey, what's your name?" she asked and smiled sweetly.
"Enrique," he managed to answer back.
"Hhhhmm," the blonde girl said and looked around the room as if deciding if she liked it or not.
"I like it!" she finally said and beamed.
Enrique swallowed.
Hard.
"My name's Lorelei, but you can call me Lorrie!" she beamed.
Author's Note:
*runs back as if nothing happened* So..? Is it really that bad? *starts to cry* Please r&r, but no flames. My ego couldn't take this early in the story. ^_^ Criticize if you must, just don't tell me about it!
( charmed-chick
Hello! How did you like the first chappie? It's very Mary-Sue-ish so far isn't it? Don't blame me if I can't write that well!!! *runs away screaming* *comes back as if nothing happened* Anyway, on with the fic! And when I was advertising my friend's story, her pen name is actually Marochre! Oh, and do keep in mind that it's VERY AU considering my VCR ain't working properly and I haven't seen any Beyblade lately. *runs away crying* NO BEYBLADE!!!
Enrique stared at the girl hugging him.
"Uh, CHOCKING!" he said to Mika.
"Oh," Mika said as she looked up into Enrique's blue eyes.
"I'm SO sorry!" she squealed.
Enrique's eyes turned to saucers.
A hand shot out from the classroom and grabbed Enrique's hand.
The hand pulled him to a desk.
Enrique looked up at the owner of the arm.
A girl with long blonde hair wiped her blonde bangs (AN: HA MAROCHRE! I SAID BANGS!!! (She hates it when people use that word()) away from her face.
The girl smiled.
"Needed that?" she asked.
"Huh?" Enrique managed to blubber out. (AN: Basically, he barely managed to say it.)
"You wanted to get away from her, right?" asked the blonde girl.
Enrique smiled.
"She squeals," he said.
"Ye!" the blonde girl laughed.
"Hey, what's your name?" she asked and smiled sweetly.
"Enrique," he managed to answer back.
"Hhhhmm," the blonde girl said and looked around the room as if deciding if she liked it or not.
"I like it!" she finally said and beamed.
Enrique swallowed.
Hard.
"My name's Lorelei, but you can call me Lorrie!" she beamed.
Author's Note:
*runs back as if nothing happened* So..? Is it really that bad? *starts to cry* Please r&r, but no flames. My ego couldn't take this early in the story. ^_^ Criticize if you must, just don't tell me about it!
( charmed-chick