Authors Note: Ok, um don't kill me………I am going on vacation so I will be gone a while and not able to update. [cowers in corner] PLEASE! Spare me!!!
Anyway here are the kind reviews I have gotten. [smiles and hugs them]
The following review has been submitted to: I'm Free Chapter: 4 From: Celebrindal () Things just can't be good for Glorfindel, can it? Poor little Elfie... update soon!
The following review has been submitted to: I'm Free Chapter: 2 From: ivorybrowneyes () A Glorfindel story! Surprising. I like your start very much. I've never actually read a story about him, and I'm still reading on his background so I know just who in the hell he is...about to read The Silmarillion...*braces self* Anyway, it's a great story so far. Do update soon!
The following review has been submitted to: I'm Free Chapter: 2 From: Celebrindal () Yeah! Glorfy's got a friend! Well, I'm really glad that things are looking up! I loved your description of Elf eyes. It was ...cool sounding. Keep writing!
The following review has been submitted to: I'm Free Chapter: 1 From: arwen-evenstar () O_O Whoa! This is really interesting! Please continue! I had never thought about how Glorfindel came back to Imaldris before! Oh glorfy torture! Hehe! rnLoved it!rnNow, Update!rnNamaarie,rn~ArwenrnakarnVanaondoiel
The following review has been submitted to: This is Where I Belong Chapter: 1 From: arwen-evenstar () oh I love this one! There are so few fics out there just about Glorfindel! Great song, and it tied in so well with the story!rnGreat job!rnNamaarie,rn~Arwen
The following review has been submitted to: Glorfindel Chapter: 1 From: Ista of the Dreamers () Hi there! I wanted to thank you for reviewing my I' Mal Lasse story. Feedback is always appreciated, and I wanted to read one of yours. You have so many wonderful stories to choose from! This poem is my favorite, I think. What's so cool about it is that you took a character not widely written about and made a lovely poem of him. You have a knack for rhyming and description! Keep on writing! Your stories are delicious. :)
The following review has been submitted to: Glorfindel Chapter: 1 From: Searra Lady Of Dragona() This is one of the best peoms I have ever read!rn (Clapps hand thunderesly!) rnrn Firniswin, keep up the good work!!rnrnrnrnrn Searra Lady of Dragona
Chapter 5
Glorfindel was brought back to consciousness a few moments after the guards had left him. He breathed harshly as pain flared through his right arm, he tightened his hands into fists and his knuckles began to turn a ghostly white. He hissed a breath as the new brand burned.
New tears spilled down the mighty elf's cheeks as all the past events came to mind.
'I have to get out of here!'
He braced himself and arched his powerful back trying to loosen the restraints. No good. They were made like belts and would not come done.
A gleam of silver light grasped his attention to the right and he turned his head as best he could without aggravating other injuries. And that is when he saw it, a knife. It shimmered in the firelight and made him grin. 'I have to get it.' he thought as he put his burned out mind to work.
About an hour later, he still had no ideas. He was tired, starving, and just out of hope. He closed his eyes in frustration and let his thoughts slip and slide when he heard a soft creak and little, barely audible feet come in.
"Edain are all slobs and pigs."
Glorfindel turned his tired head and opened his eyes to see little Adenen running around the room picking up papers and sweeping the floors.
"Adenen!" he hissed softly. The boy gave a small cry of fright and turned about, his eyes wide with terror.
"I'm sorry….I'm S-" he stopped when he saw no one was there, he turned his eyes on the elf on the table. "Glor?" he questioned cautiously approaching the table.
"Ye, avatyara nin." he answered back, sympathy in his deep eyes…he knew the boy could not understand him, but it was better than not saying anything, he felt bad for scaring the child so horribly and wanted to make it up to him.
Adenen smiled sheepishly and waved his hand. "Ala tenya ter."
The blonde elf got a quizzical look on his pained face. "massë nolya?" he asked his eyes lighting pleasantly as he discovered things about this child.
The boy beamed with excitement. " I am an elf." For the most part Glorfindel was shocked, his mouth hung open and he stared.
The boy was actually quite slim and lithe, his face was fair and so were his tresses. The only thing missing were the ears.
"Massë?" Glorfindel asked the child.
Adenen sighed and walked closer to the blonde elf, he lowered himself and pulled back his long Sienna colored hair. He delicately placed a finger behind his rounded ear and tipped the edge so Glorfindel could see.
There were the skin should be pale white, it was inflamed with red. It looked delicate and the older elf could tell that it pained Adenen to show him his once pointed ears. Now they were rounded, like a human's.
"Ala Ösaka." Glorfindel said softly, and with that the boy let go.
"Nentë sa!" The older eldar commanded looking over his shoulder at the glinting knife that lay on the floor.
" massë?" Adenen ran around the table looking for the weapon. He found it, and lightly picked it up. He then looked at the knife then at the belts. "You want me to cut them?"
" Ye, tancave!"
" What if I cut you?" Adenen asked beginning to climb on the table.
" na, ná." Glorfindel said carelessly, he sucked in a short breathe and readied himself.
"Ready?" The elven child asked, holding the blade in the air ready to plunge it down into the leather.
"YES!!!!"
He looked down at the elf, shock easy to see in his green sparkling eyes. " You spoke!" Glorfindel glared at the boy.
"Sorry."
And with that he plunged the knife down at the leather, it sank in a it hit the belt with great speed. Then stuck fast. Adenen pulled it down to try and move it. It hardly worked, but it did. Slowly it cut through the hard worn leather.
Finally the child had cut all the leather belt straps and was helping the elf up, Adenen noticed the mark and hissed softly.
It was now red and puffy, spots of removed skin could be seen and blood seeped through them.
The elven boy searched about the room for some sort of bandage, he found a cape and tore off a few strands then gently wrapped the older elf's branded arm.
"Hannad nin mellon." Glorfindel whispered softly to the boy.
"unotë .." he hesitated a moment , then smiled wide. "Nin mellon."
Firniswin- TBC……… Seeya all! [Again kicks Jessi and rides off at a gallop]