Burning Insides
By: ~Sakura Potato~
Rating: PG-13
Thank you's
Yu Yuan: OMG!! THANK YOU!!!! You have no idea how much your review meant to me! I was in a horrible mood my best friend who I do everything thing in left to travel for about a week and a half. I got your review and my mood was 10x better! Thank you!
Meilin Fan 4eva: Thank you so much for the name! I really needed it! I'm not sure if I'll use it. I'm trying to decide on a name still. I need a name for later on (wink*wink*) for Syaoran's..better not spoil it.
Mellisa: I'm sorry if I did not spell that right.but I want to say thank you! You are a GREAT friend! I'm so glad that we get to talk^_~ I'm saving my stamps! I have 2 right now! I will send you Marmalade Boy! Even if it takes a long time! Thank you so much though! We have so much in common its freaky.Thanks again!
Sakura-Star3: WOW! That's a long review! Thanks for it! I promise I will try to space things out more! Thanks so much for Yamazaki's name! You're so cool! It's no problem for the review! I'm going to read your story again right after I post this chapter! I like your name^_~. I will still dedicate this chapter to you and some other people^_^ one more thing. It was so nice of you to tell me that my story was good and to not put myself down.I do that sometimes. Thank you so much.
My notes:
Hey everyone! I'm back for round two! If you want to be e-mailed when I update please tell me in your review! IT WILL BE DONE^_^ also thanks to my reviewers.
Dedication: This chapter is dedicated to Yu Yuan, Meilin Fan 4eva, Mellisa, and Sakura-Star3. Without all your support this would not have happened.
Disclaimer: Last chapter I for got to say I do not own the song "I Must not chase the Boys" By Play. This chapter I wont forgot! I do not own the song "I wanna Be bad" By Willa Ford. Also I don't own CCS sadly.
"Talking" ~Thinking~ ~*Flashbacks ~* (a/n) *action *
Last Chapter:
With that Sakura and Meilin took off to the mall.
Meilin Pov
~I don't know if I should tell Sakura that her ex-Boyfriend is in the gang or not. Not even Syaoran knows that he's in it.~
~Sakura Pov~
I got off the bike when we got off at the mall. I took off my helmet letting my Auburn hair fall down my back. Catcalls could be heard.
"Immature, freaks, geeks..." My list of names went on as I mumbled them.
"Did you say something Sakura?" Meilin asked.
"Oh, no. Nothing." I lied.
Meilin shrugged.
"Let's get going into the mall" I said " Were meeting by my favorite music store."
"Cool, let's go"
When we got in the mall I could hear Meilin gasp.
~Geeze ya see one mall ya seen them all~
"It's changed" Meilin mumbled.
Luckily my hearing had improved with my training.
~*Flashback ~*
An 18-year-old girl turned. It was pitch black inside the room.
~I'm never going to find him in all this darkness~
A low sound of fabric could be heard.
~HA! He's left; uh oh he knows I heard him. Right kick right~ my brain screamed.
"Ha!" I leaped forward and punched at my opponent.
"Ow..." came the figures response.
I giggled. "Sorry Touya!" I said as I bowed.
"Yea, sure monster"
"You want a bloody nose?"
~*End flashback~*
"Sakura?" came a voice.
"I turned my head.
"Come on! You've been standing there for the last 5 minutes! I would have left you but I don't know which music store is your favorite." Meilin said complaining.
"Come on follow me" I instructed.
~Normal Pov~
As Sakura and Meilin headed to the escalator catcalls could be heard from a lot of boys. Meilin had enough of it.
"Okay I want all of you to listen up! If I hear another catcall that person will die! If you want to do catcalls then you have to beat me up first." Meilin said giving every guy in the mall at least 2 death glares.
Sakura stifled a giggle.
"Good going Meilin. Everyone is looking at us." Sakura said as they got off the escalator.
Meilin sweat dropped. "Are we there yet?"
"Are you 5 years old?"
"No?"
"There's your answer"
After a couple more turns they reached a store called "Koshiwa's Music"(sorry first thing that came to mind)
"Hey Sakura!" a group started coming over.
"Hey guys!"
"Who's your hot friend?" Yamazaki asked. Chiharu pulled out a hammer.
"You want to die? Okay!" she threatened
Everyone laughed.
"You guys this is our old friend Meilin Li!" Sakura introduced.
"Hey! It's been to long" Rika piped up.
"Wait!!!!!" Came a cry. "Sakura say that again I didn't get it on video!" Tomoyo cried.
"Honey maybe that's a good thing.." Came Eriol's voice.
"But.."
"No"
"So you guys gonna argue all day?" Naoko asked.
"Here Sakura we got you the single you wanted." The girls said handing her a CD.
"Yes! Thanks"
"No problem."
"Sakura are you going to tell them about the trip?" Meilin asked.
"Oh yea. everyone Yelan has hired us for a job." Sakura stared. "Meilin will tell you the details"
Meilin explains.
"So everyone agrees? We will go?"
"Yea!"
"So you all know that drill right? Let me review for you. Sakura gets the fighting gear, Eriol the guns, Yamazaki the ammo, Tomoyo your favorite the clothes, Meilin the health things, Naoko books. I'll um sit here! Meet at the food court! Break!"
Everyone ran back and forth.
~* 1 hour later ~*
"So how did all the shopping go? I got you all food." Rika said
"Dandy" Came the replay.
"I just want to say that for a gang you guys don't really act like one. I would think you would be tougher."
"Well I like to give them their space. Just because were a gang does not mean we have to be tough. But I still make them all tough anyway. That way they can protect themselves." Sakura explained.
"Okay I see."
"Hi Sakura." Came a manly voice.
"Hi Eriol hunny" came a girl's voice that was dripping with honey.
"Hi you hot man Yamazaki" came another voice.
Everyone turned around glaring except a confused Meilin.
"Takara( sorry about the name. I did not mean to steal the name from anyone I promise!) How many times do I have to tell you! I don't like you I despise you! After what you did to me that night I never want to see you again" Eriol said sneering at a girl in an extremely low cut black skirt and belly top that barley cover her stomach.
"As goes for me Shiena" Yamazaki said seriously.
Meilin shot Sakura a What? Glance. While Sakura shot her an I'll tell you later glance.
"So Sakura, Decided that you'd finally go out with me?"
"Screw off! I hate you! You can't even lay a finger on me. Otherwise you'd be dead"
"Come on ladies it looks like were not welcome here." The guy said walking away, the other two following.
"Okay explain now" Meilin ordered.
Heads turned to Sakura.
"What? Fine.."
~*Flashback ~*
It all started about 3 months ago. We all decided to go to a bar and hang out. Then those 3 showed up.
"Hi hot shot, wanna stay at my place tonight" Takara Said seductively in Eriol's ear.
"How about.No?" Came Eriol's reply.
"Oh come on I promise you'll like it.." She tried again.
"I have a girlfriend, she's 10 times better than you slut. I would never want you."
What Eriol didn't see was that while Takara argued with him Shiena was drugging his drink. Eriol stopped yelling for a moment to take a drink. That's when it hit him.
"What did you put in this?" Eriol asked.
"Wouldn't you just love to know that?"
That night Eriol and Yamazaki were drugged. Luckily Tomoyo and Chiharu found then before something bad could have happened to them. The worst for them was a few kisses and their shirts off.
"Who was the guy then?" Meilin interrupted.
The bartender. He tried to rape me. I was drugged to. with stronger stuff then Eriol and Yamazaki. Rika and Naoko found him before it was too late though. I owe my life to them.
~*End flashback ~*
"Oh my gosh" Meilin whispered
~If Syaoran knew this then they'd all be dead with no mercy. Why Syaoran, Why couldn't you at least keep in touch with Eriol?
"Well I hate to bust this up but it's out usual mall party time guys!" Tomoyo yelled startling some people.
"Let's hit it then." Sakura yelled. "Meet you guys in the middle of the square. Here's the music you know what to do."
The girls raced off to the bathrooms.
"What are we doing?" Meilin asked while being handed flare jeans that tied up the sides but stopped about the knee along with a red halter that read 'hottie'
"We're doing our weekly mall dance. We dance and have fun and people join in. In the end we make a lot of money. We charge people to dance with us." Sakura said smiling. She was wearing kaki pants with a black tube top that said 'can't touch this'.
Tomoyo came out wearing black pants that buttoned up the side and a purple tank that said 'kiss this'. Naoko came out in jean capris and a blue halter that read 'read this and die' while Chiharu came out in black pants and a green top that said ' no more lying'. Rika came out in jean flares and a jeweled yellow top that said ' bow down'.
They all raced to the center of the mall.
"There you girls are we thought you ditched us!" Eriol said jokingly.
"Eriol. don't make us hurt you." Naoko threatened.
"Yea whatever. Let's dance."
Eriol and Tomoyo got ready while Chiharu and Yamazaki did. Rika and Naoko went to the stand to charge people.
Sakura turned to Meilin and asked "Ready?"
"Hell yea! Let's hear the music!"
Sakura pressed play and the CD she had her friends buy started up.
Oh, I, I, I
I wanna be bad with you baby
I, I, I, I
I wanna be bad with you baby Sakura and Meilin grabbed the 1st guys they saw and started dancing up close with them.
Do you, understand what I need, need (from you)
Just let me be the girl to show you (you)
Everything that you can be is everything that I can be
I wanna be
My turn
Let me let you know that I can (I can)
Promise that I won't do that
So boy, save it 'til my place cause you make me wanna loose my head
I wanna be bad
You make that look so good
I got things on my mind
I never thought I would
I,I wanna be bad (bad)
You make that feel so good
I'm loosing all my cools
I'm about to break the rules
I,I wanna be bad
I wanna be bad with you baby
I, I, I, I, I wanna be bad with you baby
What's up?
Tell me what you do honey
To teach me
All you want is me but I,
So whatcha other girl gonna see from messin' around with me
When your hanging with me
Should I boy
Tell you what I got is what you want?
Tell, tell me boy want me boy?
Oh No one does it like me
I wanna be bad
You make that look so good
I got things on my mind
I never thought I would
I,I wanna be bad (bad)
You make that feel so good
I'm loosing all my cools
I'm about to break the rules
I,I wanna be bad
I wanna be bad with you baby
I, I, I, I, I wanna be bad with you baby
I wanna be bad with you baby
I, I, I, I, I wanna be bad with you baby
I wanna be bad
You make that look so good
I got things on my mind
I never thought I would
I,I wanna be bad (bad)
You make that feel so good
I'm loosing all my cools
I'm about to break the rules
I,I wanna be bad
Meilin Pov~ Dang Syaoran would be so mad if he saw these guys. I mean they are all over Sakura. I better go save her.
Sakura Pov
~Guys what pigs. Syaoran was never a pig. But from what Meilin says he's moved on. I guess I should too. I wonder.. that boy looks cute.. I think I'll get his digits. Maybe we'll go steady who knows.~ "Hey! Sakura I saw you getting topped by the boys. You want help?" Meilin asked concerned. "No thanks. But could you give me your opinion on that guy with the well built body, the brown hair, amber eyes and the good looks" I asked. Meilin POV
~Let's see who this guy is, he sounds a lot like Syaoran~ I turned around.. "Oh my gosh Sakura! That's Syaoran." I trailed off..
~*End of chapter~*
Well what did you think??? It's a total of 9 pages long and its 2,240 words! Yay! Remember REVIEW!!!!!! I look forward to hearing from you!
Lot's of love ~Sakura Potao
.
By: ~Sakura Potato~
Rating: PG-13
Thank you's
Yu Yuan: OMG!! THANK YOU!!!! You have no idea how much your review meant to me! I was in a horrible mood my best friend who I do everything thing in left to travel for about a week and a half. I got your review and my mood was 10x better! Thank you!
Meilin Fan 4eva: Thank you so much for the name! I really needed it! I'm not sure if I'll use it. I'm trying to decide on a name still. I need a name for later on (wink*wink*) for Syaoran's..better not spoil it.
Mellisa: I'm sorry if I did not spell that right.but I want to say thank you! You are a GREAT friend! I'm so glad that we get to talk^_~ I'm saving my stamps! I have 2 right now! I will send you Marmalade Boy! Even if it takes a long time! Thank you so much though! We have so much in common its freaky.Thanks again!
Sakura-Star3: WOW! That's a long review! Thanks for it! I promise I will try to space things out more! Thanks so much for Yamazaki's name! You're so cool! It's no problem for the review! I'm going to read your story again right after I post this chapter! I like your name^_~. I will still dedicate this chapter to you and some other people^_^ one more thing. It was so nice of you to tell me that my story was good and to not put myself down.I do that sometimes. Thank you so much.
My notes:
Hey everyone! I'm back for round two! If you want to be e-mailed when I update please tell me in your review! IT WILL BE DONE^_^ also thanks to my reviewers.
Dedication: This chapter is dedicated to Yu Yuan, Meilin Fan 4eva, Mellisa, and Sakura-Star3. Without all your support this would not have happened.
Disclaimer: Last chapter I for got to say I do not own the song "I Must not chase the Boys" By Play. This chapter I wont forgot! I do not own the song "I wanna Be bad" By Willa Ford. Also I don't own CCS sadly.
"Talking" ~Thinking~ ~*Flashbacks ~* (a/n) *action *
Last Chapter:
With that Sakura and Meilin took off to the mall.
Meilin Pov
~I don't know if I should tell Sakura that her ex-Boyfriend is in the gang or not. Not even Syaoran knows that he's in it.~
~Sakura Pov~
I got off the bike when we got off at the mall. I took off my helmet letting my Auburn hair fall down my back. Catcalls could be heard.
"Immature, freaks, geeks..." My list of names went on as I mumbled them.
"Did you say something Sakura?" Meilin asked.
"Oh, no. Nothing." I lied.
Meilin shrugged.
"Let's get going into the mall" I said " Were meeting by my favorite music store."
"Cool, let's go"
When we got in the mall I could hear Meilin gasp.
~Geeze ya see one mall ya seen them all~
"It's changed" Meilin mumbled.
Luckily my hearing had improved with my training.
~*Flashback ~*
An 18-year-old girl turned. It was pitch black inside the room.
~I'm never going to find him in all this darkness~
A low sound of fabric could be heard.
~HA! He's left; uh oh he knows I heard him. Right kick right~ my brain screamed.
"Ha!" I leaped forward and punched at my opponent.
"Ow..." came the figures response.
I giggled. "Sorry Touya!" I said as I bowed.
"Yea, sure monster"
"You want a bloody nose?"
~*End flashback~*
"Sakura?" came a voice.
"I turned my head.
"Come on! You've been standing there for the last 5 minutes! I would have left you but I don't know which music store is your favorite." Meilin said complaining.
"Come on follow me" I instructed.
~Normal Pov~
As Sakura and Meilin headed to the escalator catcalls could be heard from a lot of boys. Meilin had enough of it.
"Okay I want all of you to listen up! If I hear another catcall that person will die! If you want to do catcalls then you have to beat me up first." Meilin said giving every guy in the mall at least 2 death glares.
Sakura stifled a giggle.
"Good going Meilin. Everyone is looking at us." Sakura said as they got off the escalator.
Meilin sweat dropped. "Are we there yet?"
"Are you 5 years old?"
"No?"
"There's your answer"
After a couple more turns they reached a store called "Koshiwa's Music"(sorry first thing that came to mind)
"Hey Sakura!" a group started coming over.
"Hey guys!"
"Who's your hot friend?" Yamazaki asked. Chiharu pulled out a hammer.
"You want to die? Okay!" she threatened
Everyone laughed.
"You guys this is our old friend Meilin Li!" Sakura introduced.
"Hey! It's been to long" Rika piped up.
"Wait!!!!!" Came a cry. "Sakura say that again I didn't get it on video!" Tomoyo cried.
"Honey maybe that's a good thing.." Came Eriol's voice.
"But.."
"No"
"So you guys gonna argue all day?" Naoko asked.
"Here Sakura we got you the single you wanted." The girls said handing her a CD.
"Yes! Thanks"
"No problem."
"Sakura are you going to tell them about the trip?" Meilin asked.
"Oh yea. everyone Yelan has hired us for a job." Sakura stared. "Meilin will tell you the details"
Meilin explains.
"So everyone agrees? We will go?"
"Yea!"
"So you all know that drill right? Let me review for you. Sakura gets the fighting gear, Eriol the guns, Yamazaki the ammo, Tomoyo your favorite the clothes, Meilin the health things, Naoko books. I'll um sit here! Meet at the food court! Break!"
Everyone ran back and forth.
~* 1 hour later ~*
"So how did all the shopping go? I got you all food." Rika said
"Dandy" Came the replay.
"I just want to say that for a gang you guys don't really act like one. I would think you would be tougher."
"Well I like to give them their space. Just because were a gang does not mean we have to be tough. But I still make them all tough anyway. That way they can protect themselves." Sakura explained.
"Okay I see."
"Hi Sakura." Came a manly voice.
"Hi Eriol hunny" came a girl's voice that was dripping with honey.
"Hi you hot man Yamazaki" came another voice.
Everyone turned around glaring except a confused Meilin.
"Takara( sorry about the name. I did not mean to steal the name from anyone I promise!) How many times do I have to tell you! I don't like you I despise you! After what you did to me that night I never want to see you again" Eriol said sneering at a girl in an extremely low cut black skirt and belly top that barley cover her stomach.
"As goes for me Shiena" Yamazaki said seriously.
Meilin shot Sakura a What? Glance. While Sakura shot her an I'll tell you later glance.
"So Sakura, Decided that you'd finally go out with me?"
"Screw off! I hate you! You can't even lay a finger on me. Otherwise you'd be dead"
"Come on ladies it looks like were not welcome here." The guy said walking away, the other two following.
"Okay explain now" Meilin ordered.
Heads turned to Sakura.
"What? Fine.."
~*Flashback ~*
It all started about 3 months ago. We all decided to go to a bar and hang out. Then those 3 showed up.
"Hi hot shot, wanna stay at my place tonight" Takara Said seductively in Eriol's ear.
"How about.No?" Came Eriol's reply.
"Oh come on I promise you'll like it.." She tried again.
"I have a girlfriend, she's 10 times better than you slut. I would never want you."
What Eriol didn't see was that while Takara argued with him Shiena was drugging his drink. Eriol stopped yelling for a moment to take a drink. That's when it hit him.
"What did you put in this?" Eriol asked.
"Wouldn't you just love to know that?"
That night Eriol and Yamazaki were drugged. Luckily Tomoyo and Chiharu found then before something bad could have happened to them. The worst for them was a few kisses and their shirts off.
"Who was the guy then?" Meilin interrupted.
The bartender. He tried to rape me. I was drugged to. with stronger stuff then Eriol and Yamazaki. Rika and Naoko found him before it was too late though. I owe my life to them.
~*End flashback ~*
"Oh my gosh" Meilin whispered
~If Syaoran knew this then they'd all be dead with no mercy. Why Syaoran, Why couldn't you at least keep in touch with Eriol?
"Well I hate to bust this up but it's out usual mall party time guys!" Tomoyo yelled startling some people.
"Let's hit it then." Sakura yelled. "Meet you guys in the middle of the square. Here's the music you know what to do."
The girls raced off to the bathrooms.
"What are we doing?" Meilin asked while being handed flare jeans that tied up the sides but stopped about the knee along with a red halter that read 'hottie'
"We're doing our weekly mall dance. We dance and have fun and people join in. In the end we make a lot of money. We charge people to dance with us." Sakura said smiling. She was wearing kaki pants with a black tube top that said 'can't touch this'.
Tomoyo came out wearing black pants that buttoned up the side and a purple tank that said 'kiss this'. Naoko came out in jean capris and a blue halter that read 'read this and die' while Chiharu came out in black pants and a green top that said ' no more lying'. Rika came out in jean flares and a jeweled yellow top that said ' bow down'.
They all raced to the center of the mall.
"There you girls are we thought you ditched us!" Eriol said jokingly.
"Eriol. don't make us hurt you." Naoko threatened.
"Yea whatever. Let's dance."
Eriol and Tomoyo got ready while Chiharu and Yamazaki did. Rika and Naoko went to the stand to charge people.
Sakura turned to Meilin and asked "Ready?"
"Hell yea! Let's hear the music!"
Sakura pressed play and the CD she had her friends buy started up.
Oh, I, I, I
I wanna be bad with you baby
I, I, I, I
I wanna be bad with you baby Sakura and Meilin grabbed the 1st guys they saw and started dancing up close with them.
Do you, understand what I need, need (from you)
Just let me be the girl to show you (you)
Everything that you can be is everything that I can be
I wanna be
My turn
Let me let you know that I can (I can)
Promise that I won't do that
So boy, save it 'til my place cause you make me wanna loose my head
I wanna be bad
You make that look so good
I got things on my mind
I never thought I would
I,I wanna be bad (bad)
You make that feel so good
I'm loosing all my cools
I'm about to break the rules
I,I wanna be bad
I wanna be bad with you baby
I, I, I, I, I wanna be bad with you baby
What's up?
Tell me what you do honey
To teach me
All you want is me but I,
So whatcha other girl gonna see from messin' around with me
When your hanging with me
Should I boy
Tell you what I got is what you want?
Tell, tell me boy want me boy?
Oh No one does it like me
I wanna be bad
You make that look so good
I got things on my mind
I never thought I would
I,I wanna be bad (bad)
You make that feel so good
I'm loosing all my cools
I'm about to break the rules
I,I wanna be bad
I wanna be bad with you baby
I, I, I, I, I wanna be bad with you baby
I wanna be bad with you baby
I, I, I, I, I wanna be bad with you baby
I wanna be bad
You make that look so good
I got things on my mind
I never thought I would
I,I wanna be bad (bad)
You make that feel so good
I'm loosing all my cools
I'm about to break the rules
I,I wanna be bad
Meilin Pov~ Dang Syaoran would be so mad if he saw these guys. I mean they are all over Sakura. I better go save her.
Sakura Pov
~Guys what pigs. Syaoran was never a pig. But from what Meilin says he's moved on. I guess I should too. I wonder.. that boy looks cute.. I think I'll get his digits. Maybe we'll go steady who knows.~ "Hey! Sakura I saw you getting topped by the boys. You want help?" Meilin asked concerned. "No thanks. But could you give me your opinion on that guy with the well built body, the brown hair, amber eyes and the good looks" I asked. Meilin POV
~Let's see who this guy is, he sounds a lot like Syaoran~ I turned around.. "Oh my gosh Sakura! That's Syaoran." I trailed off..
~*End of chapter~*
Well what did you think??? It's a total of 9 pages long and its 2,240 words! Yay! Remember REVIEW!!!!!! I look forward to hearing from you!
Lot's of love ~Sakura Potao
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