Title: UNCOMMITTED CRIME
Author: StRaIgHt A ChEaTeR
Summary: Syaoran gets hauled in for a murder he didn't commit, the murder of his own best friend. But what really happened on Eriol's birthday? Sakura gets kidnapped, can these two incidents have a possible connection? S+S R+R
Disclaimer: I DO NOT OWN CCS I DO NOT OWN ANY OF THE CHARACTERS
Key Notes:
"Talking"
'Thinking'
(A/N Author's Note)
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"Listen, you girls say bullshit to anyone kay? Something's wrong and I'm going to find out. Watch out for ANYTHING and trust NO ONE" Syaoran whispered quickly as he was heaved away.
Sakura and Tomoyo stood there helplessly, watching one of the only guys they ever trusted, being hauled away into jail, for the murder his best friend.
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Syaoran sat behind the bars, not even bothering to look at the jailbirds next to him. He just sat there, knees up to his chin and face buried in his hands, simply thinking about what was going on.
'Was there anyone else on the boat last night? Hey if they couldn't find Eriol's body, how can they prove he's dead?! Nono, they said something about him being thrown off blah blah. . . What if somebody was jealous of him liking Sakura? No but me and her are going steady so they must've wanted to kill me. Anyway, I DIDN'T kill him, I couldn't have. What am I saying? I didn't kill Eriol. I DIDN'T KILL ERIOL-'
"Hey, it's Li aint it?" asked an officer interrupting his thoughts.
"..yea.." replied Syaoran vaguely lost in his own world.
"You've been proved guilty and you've gotten yourself a pass to jail for a couple a months. You can try to show your innocence, but it'll be hard."
"What?! NO!! YOU CAN'T DO THIS TO ME!! AT LEAST TAKE ME TO COURT WHERE I CAN PROVE MY INNOCENCE!! NOO!! IM ONLY 16-" Syaoran was now on his feet, face inches away from the bars trying to get through to the officer.
The officer held out a tape-recorder and pressed PLAY. What it revealed, Syaoran knew he couldn't argue at all.
"YOU MOTHER-FUCKER! I'M GONNA KILL YOU!" Yelled a recorded voice, Syaoran's voice. . .
Head hanging now, "Look, did you listen to the rest of the tape!? And how the hell did it get there-"
"THAT doesn't matter. Everything else on the tape seems baffled up, seems like you two were yelling so much, we couldn't understand a word, UNTIL you spoke of those EVIDENTIAL words, shall I continue?" he asked straight forwardly, knowing Syaoran couldn't argue with that.
Syaoran fell to the ground, he was back to where he started from. Only if they gave him a chance to explain. Syaoran sat there in anxiety and terror. He felt as though he could cry. What had his life come to? Who was gonna get him outta this? And this definitely seemed like a setup on account of the tape-recorder. His thoughts were suddenly interrupted by the sound of a girl crying and screaming, soon it got louder and louder.
"SYAO! IM SO SORRY!! SYAORAN WILL YOU EVER FORGIVE ME?!" yelled Sakura throwing herself at the bars grabbing Syaoran's hands. She fell to her knees. Face reddened with tears, her eyeliner smudged.
"Sakura?! SAKURA!! WHAT'S WRONG?!" Syaoran tried to lift her head, he held her hands tightly within his grip, but she was holding back. 'Oh man, this is my entire fault, what are they doing to her?' he angrily thought to himself.
"Syao, I'm sorry. . ." she whispered gently lifting up her head, afraid to look Syaoran in the eyes. "I put the tape-recorder on the boat!" she said miserably, "Me and Tomoyo," she cautiously explained everything, the way they couldn't join along on the planned boat trip, so they snuck in a tape- recorder, but really meant no harm.
Syaoran gently let go of her hands, starring down at the ground. 'It was Sakura, and Tomoyo. Then this couldn't have been a setup. Someone really did kill Eriol'
"Syao?" she asked curiously, "D-do y-y-ou t-think y-y-ou'll be o-ok?" she asked uncomfortably.
"Huh? Yeah, don't worry. I guess I understand. But I'm gonna make sure I find out who really DID kill Eriol, or at least hurt him so much there won't be much left of him to show." Syaoran said coarsely, starring into space. This was obviously scaring the shit out of Sakura, who's never seen him so agitated. Yet, she couldn't blame him.
`*~ `*~ `*~ `*TWO MONTHES LATER*~ `*~ `*~ `*~ `*~`*~ `*~ `*~
Well, Syaoran couldn't prove himself to the police yet and I guess you can say he just gave up. He felt as if his life was over, but it was still worth living because every other day, Sakura would come and visit. Just seeing Sakura brought the light into day.
"Hey Syao? How you doing buddy?" asked Sakura softly through the glass.
Syaoran starred right back at her, "Yeah, I'm doing okay, it's just not the same anymore, no one believes me, I guess it's over between us eh?" Syaoran asked cautiously looking down.
"What?! Syao!! No, never!! Look, I'll always love you, as a best friend, brother, boyfriend, and maybe even a husband one day." She said with a little wink.
Syaoran couldn't help but smile, he's never heard her say that before. He nor she, couldn't believe that Syaoran had just smiled, it had been too long since she'd seen his goofy reaction every time she said something relating to their relationship.
"OKAY! VISITING HOURS ARE OVER! PLEASE START MOVING TOWARDS THE EXIT TO YOUR LEFT! VISITING HOURS ARE OVER!" heard a voice, getting louder and louder by the second.
"Kay Syao, I better go." Sakura said with a huge sigh. She kissed her hand a touched the glass that was separating her from Syaoran. Syaoran did the same.
"Love you," he said as he was pulled by a guard back behind the bars. (A/N BARE WITH ME PPL, I HAVE NO IDEA ON HOW JAILS WORK OR LOOK!. . . never been there you see ^__^)
`*~ `*~ `*~ `*THREE WEEKS LATER*~ `*~ `*~ `*~ `*~`*~ `*~ `*~
Syaoran stood outside in front of the glass window watching the other couples and family members visit their loved-ones. He searched around for an amber-haired teenager but he didn't spot her anywhere, it had been weeks since Sakura had visited him.
'What's going on? Did Sakura forget me?! Frig, has she met some other guy and going steady with him?! Man, did she forget bout me? Wonder---'
"SYAORAN! SYAORAN OVER HERE!!!" called out a familiar voice, it had been so long since he'd heard that voice, it wasn't Sakura's, but for some weird reason he felt relief flow through his body.
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Well, that's where Imma leave it for now!! I'm so glad it's turning out really good! SoooOOOOoooo, who do YOU think the person is? Ain't much of a mystery once you find out, but eh, seemed like a nice spot to end the chappie ^__^ LoL muahaha!!
And I'm gonna try to make a habit of thanking all my reviewers!!
Thanks to
LiL DuDeTtE im so glad u like my story!! Sorry im not updating mega fast but hey, im trying!! So keep up what ur thinking of Eriol. . . who knows? ^__^ And guess what? I also read ur story "LIFE ISNT ALWAYS FAIR" and im waiting for YOU to update missy!!! LoL
Skylover hey! I cant thank u enough!! Im so happy u like my fanfic!! I thot NOBODY would read it cuz ja kno? There ARE alota other stories out there and howz MINE supposed to compare with THOSE?! Well thanks again!! LoL
Summary: Syaoran gets hauled in for a murder he didn't commit, the murder of his own best friend. But what really happened on Eriol's birthday? Sakura gets kidnapped, can these two incidents have a possible connection? S+S R+R
Disclaimer: I DO NOT OWN CCS I DO NOT OWN ANY OF THE CHARACTERS
Key Notes:
"Talking"
'Thinking'
(A/N Author's Note)
`*~ `*~ `*~ `*~ `*~ `*~ - Change of Scene
`*~ `*~ `*~ `*~ `*~ `*~`*~ `*~ `*~ `*~ `*~ `*~`*~ `*~ `*~ `*~ `*~ `*~`*~ `*~ `*~
"Listen, you girls say bullshit to anyone kay? Something's wrong and I'm going to find out. Watch out for ANYTHING and trust NO ONE" Syaoran whispered quickly as he was heaved away.
Sakura and Tomoyo stood there helplessly, watching one of the only guys they ever trusted, being hauled away into jail, for the murder his best friend.
`*~ `*~ `*~ `*~ `*~ `*~`*~ `*~ `*~ `*~ `*~ `*~`*~ `*~ `*~ `*~ `*~ `*~`*~ `*~ `*~
Syaoran sat behind the bars, not even bothering to look at the jailbirds next to him. He just sat there, knees up to his chin and face buried in his hands, simply thinking about what was going on.
'Was there anyone else on the boat last night? Hey if they couldn't find Eriol's body, how can they prove he's dead?! Nono, they said something about him being thrown off blah blah. . . What if somebody was jealous of him liking Sakura? No but me and her are going steady so they must've wanted to kill me. Anyway, I DIDN'T kill him, I couldn't have. What am I saying? I didn't kill Eriol. I DIDN'T KILL ERIOL-'
"Hey, it's Li aint it?" asked an officer interrupting his thoughts.
"..yea.." replied Syaoran vaguely lost in his own world.
"You've been proved guilty and you've gotten yourself a pass to jail for a couple a months. You can try to show your innocence, but it'll be hard."
"What?! NO!! YOU CAN'T DO THIS TO ME!! AT LEAST TAKE ME TO COURT WHERE I CAN PROVE MY INNOCENCE!! NOO!! IM ONLY 16-" Syaoran was now on his feet, face inches away from the bars trying to get through to the officer.
The officer held out a tape-recorder and pressed PLAY. What it revealed, Syaoran knew he couldn't argue at all.
"YOU MOTHER-FUCKER! I'M GONNA KILL YOU!" Yelled a recorded voice, Syaoran's voice. . .
Head hanging now, "Look, did you listen to the rest of the tape!? And how the hell did it get there-"
"THAT doesn't matter. Everything else on the tape seems baffled up, seems like you two were yelling so much, we couldn't understand a word, UNTIL you spoke of those EVIDENTIAL words, shall I continue?" he asked straight forwardly, knowing Syaoran couldn't argue with that.
Syaoran fell to the ground, he was back to where he started from. Only if they gave him a chance to explain. Syaoran sat there in anxiety and terror. He felt as though he could cry. What had his life come to? Who was gonna get him outta this? And this definitely seemed like a setup on account of the tape-recorder. His thoughts were suddenly interrupted by the sound of a girl crying and screaming, soon it got louder and louder.
"SYAO! IM SO SORRY!! SYAORAN WILL YOU EVER FORGIVE ME?!" yelled Sakura throwing herself at the bars grabbing Syaoran's hands. She fell to her knees. Face reddened with tears, her eyeliner smudged.
"Sakura?! SAKURA!! WHAT'S WRONG?!" Syaoran tried to lift her head, he held her hands tightly within his grip, but she was holding back. 'Oh man, this is my entire fault, what are they doing to her?' he angrily thought to himself.
"Syao, I'm sorry. . ." she whispered gently lifting up her head, afraid to look Syaoran in the eyes. "I put the tape-recorder on the boat!" she said miserably, "Me and Tomoyo," she cautiously explained everything, the way they couldn't join along on the planned boat trip, so they snuck in a tape- recorder, but really meant no harm.
Syaoran gently let go of her hands, starring down at the ground. 'It was Sakura, and Tomoyo. Then this couldn't have been a setup. Someone really did kill Eriol'
"Syao?" she asked curiously, "D-do y-y-ou t-think y-y-ou'll be o-ok?" she asked uncomfortably.
"Huh? Yeah, don't worry. I guess I understand. But I'm gonna make sure I find out who really DID kill Eriol, or at least hurt him so much there won't be much left of him to show." Syaoran said coarsely, starring into space. This was obviously scaring the shit out of Sakura, who's never seen him so agitated. Yet, she couldn't blame him.
`*~ `*~ `*~ `*TWO MONTHES LATER*~ `*~ `*~ `*~ `*~`*~ `*~ `*~
Well, Syaoran couldn't prove himself to the police yet and I guess you can say he just gave up. He felt as if his life was over, but it was still worth living because every other day, Sakura would come and visit. Just seeing Sakura brought the light into day.
"Hey Syao? How you doing buddy?" asked Sakura softly through the glass.
Syaoran starred right back at her, "Yeah, I'm doing okay, it's just not the same anymore, no one believes me, I guess it's over between us eh?" Syaoran asked cautiously looking down.
"What?! Syao!! No, never!! Look, I'll always love you, as a best friend, brother, boyfriend, and maybe even a husband one day." She said with a little wink.
Syaoran couldn't help but smile, he's never heard her say that before. He nor she, couldn't believe that Syaoran had just smiled, it had been too long since she'd seen his goofy reaction every time she said something relating to their relationship.
"OKAY! VISITING HOURS ARE OVER! PLEASE START MOVING TOWARDS THE EXIT TO YOUR LEFT! VISITING HOURS ARE OVER!" heard a voice, getting louder and louder by the second.
"Kay Syao, I better go." Sakura said with a huge sigh. She kissed her hand a touched the glass that was separating her from Syaoran. Syaoran did the same.
"Love you," he said as he was pulled by a guard back behind the bars. (A/N BARE WITH ME PPL, I HAVE NO IDEA ON HOW JAILS WORK OR LOOK!. . . never been there you see ^__^)
`*~ `*~ `*~ `*THREE WEEKS LATER*~ `*~ `*~ `*~ `*~`*~ `*~ `*~
Syaoran stood outside in front of the glass window watching the other couples and family members visit their loved-ones. He searched around for an amber-haired teenager but he didn't spot her anywhere, it had been weeks since Sakura had visited him.
'What's going on? Did Sakura forget me?! Frig, has she met some other guy and going steady with him?! Man, did she forget bout me? Wonder---'
"SYAORAN! SYAORAN OVER HERE!!!" called out a familiar voice, it had been so long since he'd heard that voice, it wasn't Sakura's, but for some weird reason he felt relief flow through his body.
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Well, that's where Imma leave it for now!! I'm so glad it's turning out really good! SoooOOOOoooo, who do YOU think the person is? Ain't much of a mystery once you find out, but eh, seemed like a nice spot to end the chappie ^__^ LoL muahaha!!
And I'm gonna try to make a habit of thanking all my reviewers!!
Thanks to
LiL DuDeTtE im so glad u like my story!! Sorry im not updating mega fast but hey, im trying!! So keep up what ur thinking of Eriol. . . who knows? ^__^ And guess what? I also read ur story "LIFE ISNT ALWAYS FAIR" and im waiting for YOU to update missy!!! LoL
Skylover hey! I cant thank u enough!! Im so happy u like my fanfic!! I thot NOBODY would read it cuz ja kno? There ARE alota other stories out there and howz MINE supposed to compare with THOSE?! Well thanks again!! LoL
