OK people this is my very FIRST story so plz review

Disclaimer: I do not own x-men , I do not own this computer, I do not own this world I am so poor that I only own Abbie... OK ! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Chapter 1: Abbie

The morning started the same as usual. Abbie just woken up. She was sleeping in a camp bed just like the other nine people in the room. This place Abbie was in is a military school but the military school had a secret lab where teenagers and children who were thought of as mutants were kept. Abbie knew she was a mutant, the only mutant that was here in this entire place. As for the others they where just thought of as mutants. Abbie looked at the mirror on the wall .she had dark green hair, lighter green fur all over her body, elf like ears, a tail, golden eyes, three toes on each foot and wings a bit like a fairy's. She also had a power, she can fire this green chemicals called solerrexsisticl or also known as solerisum. Abbie looked away from the mirror and sighed. She looked around the room. She then realised there were only 8 people in the room including her self. It was scary, she knew who was missing.

Abbie: oh no.. Homer ? where are you?

Abbie was afraid, she woke up her only friend Jenny who came from Ireland and brought here because her mother was a mutant.

Abbie: hey Jenny wake up..

Jenny: hmmm nah go away me sleep, me need sleep its the only good thing here.

Abbie: but Jenny Homer isn't here.

Jenny sat up and looked at Abbie. There are two things Jenny don't like 1: being waken up from her sleep and 2: her friends or people she knows goes missing.

Jenny: your kidding right.

Abbie: No I m serious

Jenny: ok lets look for him.. He could be having a shower or going toilet or hiding in the cubed or something.

So the two girls looked around. Then after a while a man came in , he was one of the soilers that worked here.

Solider: HEY! WAKE UP YOU LAZY LOT! Oh I got news for ya . that mangy kid homer isn't coming back heh heh heh.

Abbie sat on the floor and started crying.

Abbie: He's dead he means

Jenny: oh Abbie don't cry please, HEY I got something for you...an early birthday pressie

Jenny passed Abbie a book. It was called 'The Chinese's Cinderella' by Adeline yen

Abbie: oh thanks Jenny this cheered me up good

Jenny: oh don't mention it the Solider dropped it and I thought you like it

Abbie: oh thanks jenny thank you.