A/N: this is what I think should have happened, or something like it.
No offense 2 the author, but the ending sucked!
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Jesse went to the house. His parents must already be there, because the house was nice and warm. He urged his horse to go faster, he wanted to see what they had learned in town.
He entered the house, and went to the kitchen. He wanted to surprise his mother, for he was not expected for awhile. In his excitement, he did not notice how different his mother looked. He gave her a hug and a kiss on the cheek.
She turned around. Jesse's heart ceased beating for a second. He stood shock still. For the woman standing before him was not his mother.
"Winnie?" "Hello, Jesse." He gathered her in a hug and swung her about the room. "You drank the water?" She was laughing. "Yes, I did, but was about not 2." "Why?" "For many reasons. Put me down, I might break something!" He put her down. "But why?"
She sighed, and started telling her story.
~ok, I have a good idea of what 2 do next, but I wish some1 would review!!!!~
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Jesse went to the house. His parents must already be there, because the house was nice and warm. He urged his horse to go faster, he wanted to see what they had learned in town.
He entered the house, and went to the kitchen. He wanted to surprise his mother, for he was not expected for awhile. In his excitement, he did not notice how different his mother looked. He gave her a hug and a kiss on the cheek.
She turned around. Jesse's heart ceased beating for a second. He stood shock still. For the woman standing before him was not his mother.
"Winnie?" "Hello, Jesse." He gathered her in a hug and swung her about the room. "You drank the water?" She was laughing. "Yes, I did, but was about not 2." "Why?" "For many reasons. Put me down, I might break something!" He put her down. "But why?"
She sighed, and started telling her story.
~ok, I have a good idea of what 2 do next, but I wish some1 would review!!!!~