Chapter 6 Left Alone
Ahhhh, thanks to those reviewer's, we can continue with Chapter 6!
Despite Gryffindor's hard-earned win, our trio has been separated by pure jealousy. Harry just spent a long night thinking. How did Ron and Hermione get together? How could they be so stupid as to talk so loud so I'd hear them?
Sighing, Harry Potter pulled himself out of bed. Putting on his trademark glasses, he dragged his dead body to the bathroom.
Ron woke up in a hurry. Today was the first Hogsmead trip of the year! After hastily dressing, he rushed down to meet his love.
Ron and Hermione were still ignoring Harry. He could care less. He just hoped Ron would mess up bad somewhere so he can have a chance with Hermione. His mind briefly landed on Draco Malfoy. Maybe he could.nah. He thought. He broke out of his concentration with the fluttering of the morning owls. After finishing breakfast, Cho came up to him.
" Hey Harry, don't forget our date!" said Cho.
Harry said nothing
" Aw Harry, don't be so stubborn. It's Ron and Hermione, isn't it?"
"Wha?. How do you know?" cried Harry. " Isn't it obvious?" she asked," every time you look at them your eyes start to water and you start fumbling with your hair."
Harry had to admit that Cho was right. " Just don't forget to meet me at Hogsmead!" and she left Harry alone. Then, Dumbledore's booming voice could be heard all over the school. " Students reporting to Hogsmead please come to the main entrance for departure. Oops, he thought better get going. Trying not to pay attention to what Ron and Hermione were doing, Harry started the hunt for Cho. When he found her, he decided that he was going to do what he should've done last year. I'm not going to mess up, he thought.
He took Cho to the local joke shop, where he met Fred, George, and Lee Jordan shopping for more pranks. He too stocked up and stuff like that. After Cho dragged Harry to the Cloth's shop, ( Hm, thought Harry, she does have good taste.) Cho took Harry to dinner. Harry decided that he still liked Hermione, so he would reject further meetings with Cho. When Ron gets dumped, I'll get Hermione. But then that little nasty voice in the back of his head spoke, but what if Hermione loves Ron and they live happily ever after? Who will you take then? He shook Cho off and then departed back to Hogwarts. ________________________________________________________________________
They had Transfiguration directly after the trip to Hogsmead. Today Professor Mcgonoggal was in no mood to be treating them with mercy. Those who failed to turn a rabbit into a pair of slipper's within 30 minutes would be given extra homework and a detention. Poor Neville only gave his rabbit a lot of exercise. Harry had just barely succeeded before time expired and was spared the grief of more work. Ron was not that lucky. He transfigured his rabbit into a slipper all right, but the slipper acted like a real rabbit. Only the outside was a slipper, the inside was a rabbit. Trying to conceal his laughter, he sneaked away when class ended.
Harry still felt like he was unnoticed. He spent a good portion of his evening slaving over unnecessary homework. " Don't the teachers breath down our backs so much that they still give us homework?" he muttered to himself. He was disgruntled with the amount of work. Gritting his teeth he continued with Charms homework. He saw Ron taking Hermione outside. He also noticed Ron to be in a bad mood and how Hermione was trying to resist. Harry was to frustrated to be paying too much attention to them. He would think about them later.
1 hour later.
"ARRRRRGGGHHHH!" screamed Harry. After an hour, he was still on that exact same problem. Time to seek professional help.
He pulled out the Dr. Filibuster's 100% correct answer pen!
He put the pen on the paper and it immediately started righting the correct answer. Within minutes, he had finished that piece of homework. " Ha," he said," should've bought this a long time ago." He kissed his new pen. " Buddy, you and I are going to go a long way."
Within 30 minutes he had a homework free night. Then it suddenly occurred to him that he hadn't seen Ron and Hermione return. He decided to investigate. He hoped they were still all right. He walked along many corridors. It was late at night so the corridors were deserted. The longer he walked, the darker it seemed to become. He started to whistle because he was getting nervous. He was about to return to the common room when he realized he was lost. Never in his five years has he been in this hallway. Then, he heard it. A female's cry of desperation!
" No Ron, please no, we can't," stammered Hermione.
" Who cares," said a gruff voice," no one will now."
" Ron stop it," Hermione cried frantically," What will everyone say?"
" Doesn't matter. We are alone. No one can save you now. You are all mine." "NOOO!!!!"
Harry decided to move in.
What he saw he would never forget.
Hermione was laying on the floor, bleeding and her robes torn. Ron was moving closer to Hermione, with an evil grin on his face.
Hermione stood up. " Ron! I won't let you!"
Ron punched Hermione hard in the face. She fell. Then Ron jumped on her and began to tear off all her cloths. Hermione was trying to resist, but Ron kept punching her back down and making sure that she would not be able to escape. She was being raped!
Harry wouldn't allow this. He ran back the way he came, in hopes of finding a teacher. Oh man, he thought, how can Ron be so evil as to do this. He ran so fast that he rammed right into Snape. Oh great, he thought the last person I need to see.
" Out of bed are we? That means I will take 50 points away from Gryffindor." Harry ran past him, ignoring his protests. Right on time, Harry found their Headmaster. " Professor?" he said," emergency. I need your help." " Yes?" said Dumbledore pleasantly," what is the problem?" " Follow me." And he sped off with the headmaster at his heels.
Harry arrived at the scene just in time, for Ron was about to penetrate Hermione.
Dumbledore had a face with utmost fury on his face. Within a few seconds, Ron and Hermione were separate.
" Ronald Weasley, this absolutely unacceptable. I will take 100 points from Gryffindor, suspend you for 10 days, and a months detention." Said Dumbledore. Harry breathed again. Ron and Hermione had broken up.
In moments that situation was under control and the students were sent to bed.
Harry never felt this alone. Then he realized how much Hermione really meant to him. What would he do if he really lost Hermione to Ron? Now Ron controlled most of Hermione, but Harry maintained to small portion of her. He needs Hermione badly, to cure his aching heart. Now he had nothing to do. He got ready to turn in. Harry knew he was slowly fighting back, but until he totally won Hermione, he would be.alone.
So ladies and germs, I felt that chapter was a little weird, but.anyhow, this is like WW 2 Ron is Japan and he's dominating the world, Hermione. Harry, the U.S, is slowly fighting back. But the results of this story might not be the same as in WW 2. will Harry get the girl and be happy for the rest of his life? Or will Ron finally beat him at something?
I NEED IDEAS SO HELP! Also tell me how I could make this chapter better.
Despite Gryffindor's hard-earned win, our trio has been separated by pure jealousy. Harry just spent a long night thinking. How did Ron and Hermione get together? How could they be so stupid as to talk so loud so I'd hear them?
Sighing, Harry Potter pulled himself out of bed. Putting on his trademark glasses, he dragged his dead body to the bathroom.
Ron woke up in a hurry. Today was the first Hogsmead trip of the year! After hastily dressing, he rushed down to meet his love.
Ron and Hermione were still ignoring Harry. He could care less. He just hoped Ron would mess up bad somewhere so he can have a chance with Hermione. His mind briefly landed on Draco Malfoy. Maybe he could.nah. He thought. He broke out of his concentration with the fluttering of the morning owls. After finishing breakfast, Cho came up to him.
" Hey Harry, don't forget our date!" said Cho.
Harry said nothing
" Aw Harry, don't be so stubborn. It's Ron and Hermione, isn't it?"
"Wha?. How do you know?" cried Harry. " Isn't it obvious?" she asked," every time you look at them your eyes start to water and you start fumbling with your hair."
Harry had to admit that Cho was right. " Just don't forget to meet me at Hogsmead!" and she left Harry alone. Then, Dumbledore's booming voice could be heard all over the school. " Students reporting to Hogsmead please come to the main entrance for departure. Oops, he thought better get going. Trying not to pay attention to what Ron and Hermione were doing, Harry started the hunt for Cho. When he found her, he decided that he was going to do what he should've done last year. I'm not going to mess up, he thought.
He took Cho to the local joke shop, where he met Fred, George, and Lee Jordan shopping for more pranks. He too stocked up and stuff like that. After Cho dragged Harry to the Cloth's shop, ( Hm, thought Harry, she does have good taste.) Cho took Harry to dinner. Harry decided that he still liked Hermione, so he would reject further meetings with Cho. When Ron gets dumped, I'll get Hermione. But then that little nasty voice in the back of his head spoke, but what if Hermione loves Ron and they live happily ever after? Who will you take then? He shook Cho off and then departed back to Hogwarts. ________________________________________________________________________
They had Transfiguration directly after the trip to Hogsmead. Today Professor Mcgonoggal was in no mood to be treating them with mercy. Those who failed to turn a rabbit into a pair of slipper's within 30 minutes would be given extra homework and a detention. Poor Neville only gave his rabbit a lot of exercise. Harry had just barely succeeded before time expired and was spared the grief of more work. Ron was not that lucky. He transfigured his rabbit into a slipper all right, but the slipper acted like a real rabbit. Only the outside was a slipper, the inside was a rabbit. Trying to conceal his laughter, he sneaked away when class ended.
Harry still felt like he was unnoticed. He spent a good portion of his evening slaving over unnecessary homework. " Don't the teachers breath down our backs so much that they still give us homework?" he muttered to himself. He was disgruntled with the amount of work. Gritting his teeth he continued with Charms homework. He saw Ron taking Hermione outside. He also noticed Ron to be in a bad mood and how Hermione was trying to resist. Harry was to frustrated to be paying too much attention to them. He would think about them later.
1 hour later.
"ARRRRRGGGHHHH!" screamed Harry. After an hour, he was still on that exact same problem. Time to seek professional help.
He pulled out the Dr. Filibuster's 100% correct answer pen!
He put the pen on the paper and it immediately started righting the correct answer. Within minutes, he had finished that piece of homework. " Ha," he said," should've bought this a long time ago." He kissed his new pen. " Buddy, you and I are going to go a long way."
Within 30 minutes he had a homework free night. Then it suddenly occurred to him that he hadn't seen Ron and Hermione return. He decided to investigate. He hoped they were still all right. He walked along many corridors. It was late at night so the corridors were deserted. The longer he walked, the darker it seemed to become. He started to whistle because he was getting nervous. He was about to return to the common room when he realized he was lost. Never in his five years has he been in this hallway. Then, he heard it. A female's cry of desperation!
" No Ron, please no, we can't," stammered Hermione.
" Who cares," said a gruff voice," no one will now."
" Ron stop it," Hermione cried frantically," What will everyone say?"
" Doesn't matter. We are alone. No one can save you now. You are all mine." "NOOO!!!!"
Harry decided to move in.
What he saw he would never forget.
Hermione was laying on the floor, bleeding and her robes torn. Ron was moving closer to Hermione, with an evil grin on his face.
Hermione stood up. " Ron! I won't let you!"
Ron punched Hermione hard in the face. She fell. Then Ron jumped on her and began to tear off all her cloths. Hermione was trying to resist, but Ron kept punching her back down and making sure that she would not be able to escape. She was being raped!
Harry wouldn't allow this. He ran back the way he came, in hopes of finding a teacher. Oh man, he thought, how can Ron be so evil as to do this. He ran so fast that he rammed right into Snape. Oh great, he thought the last person I need to see.
" Out of bed are we? That means I will take 50 points away from Gryffindor." Harry ran past him, ignoring his protests. Right on time, Harry found their Headmaster. " Professor?" he said," emergency. I need your help." " Yes?" said Dumbledore pleasantly," what is the problem?" " Follow me." And he sped off with the headmaster at his heels.
Harry arrived at the scene just in time, for Ron was about to penetrate Hermione.
Dumbledore had a face with utmost fury on his face. Within a few seconds, Ron and Hermione were separate.
" Ronald Weasley, this absolutely unacceptable. I will take 100 points from Gryffindor, suspend you for 10 days, and a months detention." Said Dumbledore. Harry breathed again. Ron and Hermione had broken up.
In moments that situation was under control and the students were sent to bed.
Harry never felt this alone. Then he realized how much Hermione really meant to him. What would he do if he really lost Hermione to Ron? Now Ron controlled most of Hermione, but Harry maintained to small portion of her. He needs Hermione badly, to cure his aching heart. Now he had nothing to do. He got ready to turn in. Harry knew he was slowly fighting back, but until he totally won Hermione, he would be.alone.
So ladies and germs, I felt that chapter was a little weird, but.anyhow, this is like WW 2 Ron is Japan and he's dominating the world, Hermione. Harry, the U.S, is slowly fighting back. But the results of this story might not be the same as in WW 2. will Harry get the girl and be happy for the rest of his life? Or will Ron finally beat him at something?
I NEED IDEAS SO HELP! Also tell me how I could make this chapter better.