OK here goes nothing Please excuse me if this is a little corny at first but like most harvest moon fics they usually start out like that eh? oh PS this is my first fanfic I need some tips for future chapters and I am open to criticism just nothing like this
Ex: Your fanfic sucks go get a life But Am open to Criticism like this Ex: Good. but not perfect you should not do bla bla bla
Get the point uh yea and all bad criticism will be ignored so why bother writing it eh well um here it goes
Oh and I tried to fix some of the grammar mistakes if you see any more please e-mail me about them I will fix them . but thanks for your reviews they are helping me to make a better fanfic.
Disclaimer : I do not own any of the people in this story they are all characters names of the game Harvest Moon owned by Natsume and Victor Interactive
Chapter :1 The new start
One warm summer day a 12 year old boy came to Mineral Village, a small farming town. He went to stay with his grandpa, Joe Luna, who owned the Luna Ranch. The boy didn't know anyone there, and felt lonely. About a week after his arrival, he decided to go for a hike on the mountain. He sat by the river and played a song on his ocarina. A girl walked up behind him and with her flute played along with the boy. He turned around and saw her. The two children smiled at each other and continued to play the lullaby. "Hi," the little girl said shyly, "my name is ..... What is yours?" The little boy replied, "My name's Jack. I'm here to visit my grandpa who owns Luna Ranch." The girl asked, "Want to be friends?" she whispered, looking at her feet. "Sure!" Joe chirped happily.
The two children became the best of friends that summer. They were on the same team for the Tomato Festival, watched the fireworks together, and even got into some mischief involving chickens and slingshots(long story). Then the day came when Joe had to leave. The girl walked to the farm to see Jack, but knew at once something was wrong. She saw Joe with his suitcase and ran to him. "You're leaving....." she whispered as tears filled her eyes. Joe promised, "I'll be back someday I promise" "Remember, you promised..." The little girl ran off, and 10 years later Jacks Grandfather died jack had made it in time to say goodbye his grandfather ask him to take over the farm and fulfill his Dreams. This is the story.. At first it was hard to believe that happened all in one day my grandpa had died and in that same day. I had told my father that instead of staying in college I wanted to work on the farm and fulfill grandpa's dream . I knew challenges lay ahead of me wile I lay down in my new bed , in my new home. I was still busy thinking about what might happen what might go wrong but it did not matter...
Just as I was about to doze off I heard little Scratches and pawing at my door " Pal !! keep it down!!" I yelled ,but after a few minutes I gave in. I went over to the door and let him in he waged his tail ,slipped and slip across the floor till finally he jumped on my bed made a little bark and fell asleep. His bark still sound like a little squeak after all he was just a puppy. Then I laid back down still aware of the challenges ahead and fell into a deep sleep..
The Next morning I got up early so I could get a start on cleaning up the field, After A short breakfast of riceballs I went outside and broke up stumps , rocks , and cut up grass then I pulled My hoe out and started Plowing up little square plots in which I would plant my crops in they were perfect 9 by 9 squares I has busy admiring my hard work when I remembered I had nothing to plant!! I ran to the flower shop to get some seeds I had disided to grow a little of everything I could Find in total I had bought 2 bags of turnips 2 bags of Celery , 4 bags of patatoes seemed like a good combo to me.
After paying the owner and planting my seeds I dicided I still had some time to kill so I would go to the beach , I put on some shorts got a towel and went swimming, after a wile it had started to get dark so I walked up out of the water and started drying off just then I noticed That a Girl with blond hair was watching me I knew I had seen her somewhere. I quickly Went over to greet her she had Long smooth blond hair she was beautiful . It was hard to speak I finally gathered up the courage to ask for her name when I ask she said
" Oh my name is Karen my father owns the Super market Its nice to meet you uh oopes I forgot what is your name?" I said " Oh..Uh my name is Jack hey umm do you know all the people here? I haven't really got to meet anyone ." she then responded " Yes I have lived in this town all my life hey and mabey since you dont know anyone I could introduce you is that OK? " I thought for a minute then said "Shure what time should we meet up?" . She thought for a second then said " at your farm you can show me around the farm for a wile then I will show you the town sounds like a fair trade eh?" . I agreed then we decided to meet up at my farm around 10 the next morning.
We said " goodbye" then both walked home.. When I got there I thought about her I knew I liked her, I also felt I had known her forever. I thought about that wile I played my Xbox my Dad had packed for me when I left the city after killing about 50 guys in Halo I jumped on in the bed and fell asleep That night I had a strange dream.
Ex: Your fanfic sucks go get a life But Am open to Criticism like this Ex: Good. but not perfect you should not do bla bla bla
Get the point uh yea and all bad criticism will be ignored so why bother writing it eh well um here it goes
Oh and I tried to fix some of the grammar mistakes if you see any more please e-mail me about them I will fix them . but thanks for your reviews they are helping me to make a better fanfic.
Disclaimer : I do not own any of the people in this story they are all characters names of the game Harvest Moon owned by Natsume and Victor Interactive
Chapter :1 The new start
One warm summer day a 12 year old boy came to Mineral Village, a small farming town. He went to stay with his grandpa, Joe Luna, who owned the Luna Ranch. The boy didn't know anyone there, and felt lonely. About a week after his arrival, he decided to go for a hike on the mountain. He sat by the river and played a song on his ocarina. A girl walked up behind him and with her flute played along with the boy. He turned around and saw her. The two children smiled at each other and continued to play the lullaby. "Hi," the little girl said shyly, "my name is ..... What is yours?" The little boy replied, "My name's Jack. I'm here to visit my grandpa who owns Luna Ranch." The girl asked, "Want to be friends?" she whispered, looking at her feet. "Sure!" Joe chirped happily.
The two children became the best of friends that summer. They were on the same team for the Tomato Festival, watched the fireworks together, and even got into some mischief involving chickens and slingshots(long story). Then the day came when Joe had to leave. The girl walked to the farm to see Jack, but knew at once something was wrong. She saw Joe with his suitcase and ran to him. "You're leaving....." she whispered as tears filled her eyes. Joe promised, "I'll be back someday I promise" "Remember, you promised..." The little girl ran off, and 10 years later Jacks Grandfather died jack had made it in time to say goodbye his grandfather ask him to take over the farm and fulfill his Dreams. This is the story.. At first it was hard to believe that happened all in one day my grandpa had died and in that same day. I had told my father that instead of staying in college I wanted to work on the farm and fulfill grandpa's dream . I knew challenges lay ahead of me wile I lay down in my new bed , in my new home. I was still busy thinking about what might happen what might go wrong but it did not matter...
Just as I was about to doze off I heard little Scratches and pawing at my door " Pal !! keep it down!!" I yelled ,but after a few minutes I gave in. I went over to the door and let him in he waged his tail ,slipped and slip across the floor till finally he jumped on my bed made a little bark and fell asleep. His bark still sound like a little squeak after all he was just a puppy. Then I laid back down still aware of the challenges ahead and fell into a deep sleep..
The Next morning I got up early so I could get a start on cleaning up the field, After A short breakfast of riceballs I went outside and broke up stumps , rocks , and cut up grass then I pulled My hoe out and started Plowing up little square plots in which I would plant my crops in they were perfect 9 by 9 squares I has busy admiring my hard work when I remembered I had nothing to plant!! I ran to the flower shop to get some seeds I had disided to grow a little of everything I could Find in total I had bought 2 bags of turnips 2 bags of Celery , 4 bags of patatoes seemed like a good combo to me.
After paying the owner and planting my seeds I dicided I still had some time to kill so I would go to the beach , I put on some shorts got a towel and went swimming, after a wile it had started to get dark so I walked up out of the water and started drying off just then I noticed That a Girl with blond hair was watching me I knew I had seen her somewhere. I quickly Went over to greet her she had Long smooth blond hair she was beautiful . It was hard to speak I finally gathered up the courage to ask for her name when I ask she said
" Oh my name is Karen my father owns the Super market Its nice to meet you uh oopes I forgot what is your name?" I said " Oh..Uh my name is Jack hey umm do you know all the people here? I haven't really got to meet anyone ." she then responded " Yes I have lived in this town all my life hey and mabey since you dont know anyone I could introduce you is that OK? " I thought for a minute then said "Shure what time should we meet up?" . She thought for a second then said " at your farm you can show me around the farm for a wile then I will show you the town sounds like a fair trade eh?" . I agreed then we decided to meet up at my farm around 10 the next morning.
We said " goodbye" then both walked home.. When I got there I thought about her I knew I liked her, I also felt I had known her forever. I thought about that wile I played my Xbox my Dad had packed for me when I left the city after killing about 50 guys in Halo I jumped on in the bed and fell asleep That night I had a strange dream.