A Ninja in My Heart
By: Chikara Carrie
( "Chikara " means power ) I wanna change my name now!!!!! It sounds corny!
The story is Still in Vincent's point of view. o.k.?
August 8, 2003
Ayonnae is a character I created - so therefore she is mine! You can't steal her!!!! Disclaimer 00579 says that Chikara Carrie does not own FF7 or any elements or characters.
People please: I will accept constructive criticism , not destructive !!!! So, if you wanna flame me , don't! Because flaming is so very rude, and it's not fair to the writer!
Author Notes: Um. hello? Hi, I'm back! * All reviewers throw stuff at Chikara Carrie* I'm sorry. Here's a new chapter for you guys! Please enjoy . I'm not that very good at describing battles, fighting , and all that jazz but here goes.........
In the last chapter:
Suddenly, I heard a noise. It sounded like something broke or snapped. I looked in The direction of the sound..
" Yarghhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!1 " came the cry of the monster that jumped out from the bushes. Instantly, I take out my revolver and fire a few shots. Missing with each shot , it starts attacking in Yuffie, Ayonnae , and Red's direction.
I watch as Ayonnae takes off her shriuken as, Red stands in front of her, as if to protect her. The monster, a flying, bird looking creature knocks Red off to the side with the flap of a wing.
Yuffie throws her shruiken at the monster.
The shruiken flies to the direction of the monster but as soon as it gets in range the Monster brings it's wing close and sends the shuriken flying into some other part of the forest.
" Uh." Yuffie stutters as the monster tilts it's head to the sky and a flash of thunder hits the ground right next to Yuffie. The impact throws Yuffie to the side.
Before I could blink my eyes, the monster charges at Ayonnae. Ayonnae takes at step back And charges forwards the monster.
The monster's head is against Ayonnae 's shuriken. Both are pressing forward at the same time, both are pushing each other back. It seems that the two are equal in strength ..
Ayonnae kicks the bird underneath, pulls back her shuriken for a split second and pulls it under the monster's neck.
The monster falls to the ground, a pile of blood encircling it.
( I'm like really slow with battles, so the battle scene took me like twenty minutes to write.. I kept rewriting it till - it just seemed right)
I stand there in awe, All, this registering in my mind. Caith Sith begins to clap and runs over to Ayonnae who is now wiping the blood off her shuriken with a white cloth that she took out her pocket.
Ayonnae just stands there, her eye closed and sighs deeply.
"Are you hurt, Ayonnae?' came Red's voice and he walked over to her.
Ayonnae shakes her head and says "No just tired. Are you and Yuffie hurt?' she says while bending over, looking at Red's scratches.
Red starts to nervously twitch as Ayonnae 's hands brush through his mane, as her eyes Roaming his body for hidden injuries.
Cloud steps forward, "So, Ayonnae this means you'll be joining us. Right? " His hands playing with his sword while his blue, Mako eyes piercing the night.
Ayonnae stands up and puts away her shuriken. "Yes, I suppose I will join your group."
" Yahh!! I'm so glad, sis." Yuffie exclaims and jumps up and down.
"Welcome to the Group." Cat Sith says as he shakes Ayonnae's hand.
"One request." Ayonnae says as her eyes gave a hard glare. "What? " Everyone ask at the same time.
" Can we stop at a Inn for the night? I 'm really tired!" Ayonnae exclaims.
Thump! I look around to see everyone else on the ground. I shake my head and muffle the laugh coming from my lips.@
This would be interesting.....very...
@( Little explanation: Every one fell over Anime - style)
End of Chapter!!! Please read and review so, I can come out with the next Chapter!
Remember: I need 5 reviews to continue!!!!
A little about the background for this fic:
Aries is dead already. (sniff) The gang which consists of : Cloud , Cat Sith , Tifa. Red 13, Vincent and Yuffie are Searching for Sephiroth, While being hunted down by the Shinra. The Turks will appear in the next chapter - so review!!!
Oh yeah , I'm trying to use some of the events that really happened in the game , But I let my Brother's friend borrow my FF7. So , now I 'm just making it up as I go! Hope it turns out well... It would also help if you give me some ideas. I have a rough layout for 5 chapters. But it would help , if you could tell me a few ideas.. I'll give you credit! ^_^; I want to put some more plot development in the fic and I 'm not too proud of my writing style , even though I've improved!
Lastly, I would like for some one to help me out: Some one who could proofread the chapter before I post at ff.net and to tell me if some part didn't make sense.
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE help me out here! I really do need help !
Send me a email - or review if interested.
See you next time Cowboy ( sigh) Been watching too much Cowboy Bebop. Chikara Carrie
Black Angel131 -
Gosh...Thanks for reviewing..^_^; I feel so special !!!!! Thanks for making me on your list of Favorite Authors! I se you love The Vincent stories..You go GIRL! There's a lot of good, angst Vincent fics on this site!
Glad you like my fic , I'm gonna try my best to continue the story. Actually, Yes. This is a repost, slightly rewritten. I was originally an author on this site, under the name of Anime Girl Carrie. But I believe my account was erased or something cause I couldn't log in. I sent emails to support@fanfiction.net, asking for help, `cause I really wanted to continue my stories. but all my efforts were in vain.
So. I just started over... I wanted to change the name of Yuffie 's sister because 'Angel' , to me sounds tooo American. But Ayonnae . sounds so much more Japanese.which suits the story. Since she is going to be a ninja!
I 've got so many ideas for this story , so please review!
( "Chikara " means power ) I wanna change my name now!!!!! It sounds corny!
The story is Still in Vincent's point of view. o.k.?
August 8, 2003
Ayonnae is a character I created - so therefore she is mine! You can't steal her!!!! Disclaimer 00579 says that Chikara Carrie does not own FF7 or any elements or characters.
People please: I will accept constructive criticism , not destructive !!!! So, if you wanna flame me , don't! Because flaming is so very rude, and it's not fair to the writer!
Author Notes: Um. hello? Hi, I'm back! * All reviewers throw stuff at Chikara Carrie* I'm sorry. Here's a new chapter for you guys! Please enjoy . I'm not that very good at describing battles, fighting , and all that jazz but here goes.........
In the last chapter:
Suddenly, I heard a noise. It sounded like something broke or snapped. I looked in The direction of the sound..
" Yarghhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!1 " came the cry of the monster that jumped out from the bushes. Instantly, I take out my revolver and fire a few shots. Missing with each shot , it starts attacking in Yuffie, Ayonnae , and Red's direction.
I watch as Ayonnae takes off her shriuken as, Red stands in front of her, as if to protect her. The monster, a flying, bird looking creature knocks Red off to the side with the flap of a wing.
Yuffie throws her shruiken at the monster.
The shruiken flies to the direction of the monster but as soon as it gets in range the Monster brings it's wing close and sends the shuriken flying into some other part of the forest.
" Uh." Yuffie stutters as the monster tilts it's head to the sky and a flash of thunder hits the ground right next to Yuffie. The impact throws Yuffie to the side.
Before I could blink my eyes, the monster charges at Ayonnae. Ayonnae takes at step back And charges forwards the monster.
The monster's head is against Ayonnae 's shuriken. Both are pressing forward at the same time, both are pushing each other back. It seems that the two are equal in strength ..
Ayonnae kicks the bird underneath, pulls back her shuriken for a split second and pulls it under the monster's neck.
The monster falls to the ground, a pile of blood encircling it.
( I'm like really slow with battles, so the battle scene took me like twenty minutes to write.. I kept rewriting it till - it just seemed right)
I stand there in awe, All, this registering in my mind. Caith Sith begins to clap and runs over to Ayonnae who is now wiping the blood off her shuriken with a white cloth that she took out her pocket.
Ayonnae just stands there, her eye closed and sighs deeply.
"Are you hurt, Ayonnae?' came Red's voice and he walked over to her.
Ayonnae shakes her head and says "No just tired. Are you and Yuffie hurt?' she says while bending over, looking at Red's scratches.
Red starts to nervously twitch as Ayonnae 's hands brush through his mane, as her eyes Roaming his body for hidden injuries.
Cloud steps forward, "So, Ayonnae this means you'll be joining us. Right? " His hands playing with his sword while his blue, Mako eyes piercing the night.
Ayonnae stands up and puts away her shuriken. "Yes, I suppose I will join your group."
" Yahh!! I'm so glad, sis." Yuffie exclaims and jumps up and down.
"Welcome to the Group." Cat Sith says as he shakes Ayonnae's hand.
"One request." Ayonnae says as her eyes gave a hard glare. "What? " Everyone ask at the same time.
" Can we stop at a Inn for the night? I 'm really tired!" Ayonnae exclaims.
Thump! I look around to see everyone else on the ground. I shake my head and muffle the laugh coming from my lips.@
This would be interesting.....very...
@( Little explanation: Every one fell over Anime - style)
End of Chapter!!! Please read and review so, I can come out with the next Chapter!
Remember: I need 5 reviews to continue!!!!
A little about the background for this fic:
Aries is dead already. (sniff) The gang which consists of : Cloud , Cat Sith , Tifa. Red 13, Vincent and Yuffie are Searching for Sephiroth, While being hunted down by the Shinra. The Turks will appear in the next chapter - so review!!!
Oh yeah , I'm trying to use some of the events that really happened in the game , But I let my Brother's friend borrow my FF7. So , now I 'm just making it up as I go! Hope it turns out well... It would also help if you give me some ideas. I have a rough layout for 5 chapters. But it would help , if you could tell me a few ideas.. I'll give you credit! ^_^; I want to put some more plot development in the fic and I 'm not too proud of my writing style , even though I've improved!
Lastly, I would like for some one to help me out: Some one who could proofread the chapter before I post at ff.net and to tell me if some part didn't make sense.
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE help me out here! I really do need help !
Send me a email - or review if interested.
See you next time Cowboy ( sigh) Been watching too much Cowboy Bebop. Chikara Carrie
Black Angel131 -
Gosh...Thanks for reviewing..^_^; I feel so special !!!!! Thanks for making me on your list of Favorite Authors! I se you love The Vincent stories..You go GIRL! There's a lot of good, angst Vincent fics on this site!
Glad you like my fic , I'm gonna try my best to continue the story. Actually, Yes. This is a repost, slightly rewritten. I was originally an author on this site, under the name of Anime Girl Carrie. But I believe my account was erased or something cause I couldn't log in. I sent emails to support@fanfiction.net, asking for help, `cause I really wanted to continue my stories. but all my efforts were in vain.
So. I just started over... I wanted to change the name of Yuffie 's sister because 'Angel' , to me sounds tooo American. But Ayonnae . sounds so much more Japanese.which suits the story. Since she is going to be a ninja!
I 've got so many ideas for this story , so please review!