...Here comEs chap 3... n my thankz to all the people who gave me reviews.. I wasn't planning on continuing..
but who knew what reviews can do.. Thanks again. :-)
(A/N: I had ta fix dis chap. cuz i messed it up and more den half of da stori wuz from chap 2)
chapter 3: ANNIE!
Crystal backed up. Tom looked at her but said nothing.
Oh no, She thought, it really is him. She turned and ran home. There was another letter waiting for her, it read "You shouldn't have talked to her, you shouldn't have been with her... now you'll be next."
For a moment, she just stood there. When reality hit her, her life nearly snapped in front of her because of the lack of breathing.
She cried, it wasn't a joke.... she was next.
Oh well, at least I might go to heaven, and I get to figure out whats it like being part of da community in da other side of the world.(//Actually, i've alwayz wanted ta no.. but o wellz..i guess i'll figure it out someday//) She thought,
but the thinng is, i won't be able to rest in peace and.. Annie won't either.
Crystal was willing to take the risk.
She went inside her apartment and sat still dreaming for about an hour. And again reality slapped her and slipped into her head.
In her head, all these possibility of what happened to Annie were swimming around causing headaches.
She had to rest so the day ended for her there.
When she woke up, she had no idea ... of anything. It was like she knew nothing. Her memory slipped in.
'Annie' 'I'm next' 'im about to die'
Her thoughts were interupted with a knock on the door.
Oh no, here's where my spirit will remain. She held her breath. There was another knock.
Oh well, I guess I can't just lie down here and wait to the death angel come pick me up for my train to the top.
She tip toed cautiously to the door and peeked through the peep hole (ok... i duno why, but my vocabulary part of my mind just stopped working.. and im not sure.. not an idea if i got that peek peep hole ding rite)
Her breath was held. It was a guy. He looked awfully familiar. But the glass wasn't quite clean and the veiw was fuzzy.
But the question is, 'Who is that guy?'
(A/N: SO howd u guys like it so far?.. )
(you know, i havn't eaten, and if ur nice, mayb some reviews?)
but who knew what reviews can do.. Thanks again. :-)
(A/N: I had ta fix dis chap. cuz i messed it up and more den half of da stori wuz from chap 2)
chapter 3: ANNIE!
Crystal backed up. Tom looked at her but said nothing.
Oh no, She thought, it really is him. She turned and ran home. There was another letter waiting for her, it read "You shouldn't have talked to her, you shouldn't have been with her... now you'll be next."
For a moment, she just stood there. When reality hit her, her life nearly snapped in front of her because of the lack of breathing.
She cried, it wasn't a joke.... she was next.
Oh well, at least I might go to heaven, and I get to figure out whats it like being part of da community in da other side of the world.(//Actually, i've alwayz wanted ta no.. but o wellz..i guess i'll figure it out someday//) She thought,
but the thinng is, i won't be able to rest in peace and.. Annie won't either.
Crystal was willing to take the risk.
She went inside her apartment and sat still dreaming for about an hour. And again reality slapped her and slipped into her head.
In her head, all these possibility of what happened to Annie were swimming around causing headaches.
She had to rest so the day ended for her there.
When she woke up, she had no idea ... of anything. It was like she knew nothing. Her memory slipped in.
'Annie' 'I'm next' 'im about to die'
Her thoughts were interupted with a knock on the door.
Oh no, here's where my spirit will remain. She held her breath. There was another knock.
Oh well, I guess I can't just lie down here and wait to the death angel come pick me up for my train to the top.
She tip toed cautiously to the door and peeked through the peep hole (ok... i duno why, but my vocabulary part of my mind just stopped working.. and im not sure.. not an idea if i got that peek peep hole ding rite)
Her breath was held. It was a guy. He looked awfully familiar. But the glass wasn't quite clean and the veiw was fuzzy.
But the question is, 'Who is that guy?'
(A/N: SO howd u guys like it so far?.. )
(you know, i havn't eaten, and if ur nice, mayb some reviews?)