Hey KJ here I deleted my old stories and decided to start fresh as I
started High school..whoopee. Anyways I had this weird dream so I decided
to make a story outta it; it has Kurama and Hiei in it. Just think of them
going to my school..
(Just to tell all the readers, my name is Kiky. If you see any parentheses then it's me helping you, the reader, better understand KJ's writing)
Hey..so I guess you're my editor ne?
(Uhh yea I guess you could call it that)
Ok on with the dream, story thingy.oooo never mind you know what I mean! O yea and KJ is me and I'm describing my self with a few edits of clothing and school.blah de blah de blah.
It's nearing midnight on the last day before the first day of high school for KJ. She was RPing as long as she could before she had to go back to school. She finished up talking to her RPG friends; Kiila, Fenix, Kourtney, Naomi, Chandi and maybe even Jay.
(Ahmm.KJ you mean Kiky) *ooo yea 0.0*
She finished posting for her Angel twin characters
(You mean your well known characters Nyoko and Kyoto) *yeppers now stop interrupting me*
She said her bye-nesses and oyasuminasais, signing off and going to her room.
(What is oyasuminasai??) *.means goodnight* (ooook) She pulled off her black t-shirt showing her green tank top and replaced her jeans with a pare of black shorts. She turned up the volume as 'Cry Little Sister' started to play
(Oooo cry little sister, I love that music vid with Hiei and Yukina...*starry eyes at Hiei*) *hey snap outta it he's mine remember...he bit me* (.. *snapping outta it* hmm what ooo never mind)
She looked into her mirror closet doors as she undid her hair as it fell to her shoulders and started to brush her med. length blondish hair, while adjusting her white bandana. She blinked a few times and rubbed her eyes thinking 'I guess I should got to bed' she turned her fan on high and set her alarm clock for 6am. She then turned on her black light with her little glow balls on the floor spelling out Nyoko and Kyoto.
(Why may I ask?) *I was bored and didn't have anything else to do with um..* (*knocks head against computer* ok then shall we continue)
She sat on her couch for several min. making sure all of her stories were still there and maybe adding or editing a few. She then climbed up to the top bunk of her wooden bunk bed and laid down
(You mean that wooden bunk bed with no bottom bunk.and how do you sleep with six pillows and three cone fenders and still have room for yourself?) *I dunno*
She kissed her Hiei and Kurama pics that hung on her wall then turned on her ceiling fan lying back down.
(Aren't those the pics where Kurama has no well nothing on *it isn't showing anything* and your Hiei collage with the pic in the middle being the only pic of him with a shirt?) *maybe.* She tossed and turned till she finally got comfy and fell asleep as the posts from the RPGs came flooding back to her memory..
KJ: well that is chapter one pretty short but then again..it was a good stopping point.if you would tell me what ya think cause I started fresh and I just wanna know if anyone likes it sooo far..so I guess a review would do ^^ well if you got this far you must of thought it decent enough to keep reading.bye-ness
(Just to tell all the readers, my name is Kiky. If you see any parentheses then it's me helping you, the reader, better understand KJ's writing)
Hey..so I guess you're my editor ne?
(Uhh yea I guess you could call it that)
Ok on with the dream, story thingy.oooo never mind you know what I mean! O yea and KJ is me and I'm describing my self with a few edits of clothing and school.blah de blah de blah.
It's nearing midnight on the last day before the first day of high school for KJ. She was RPing as long as she could before she had to go back to school. She finished up talking to her RPG friends; Kiila, Fenix, Kourtney, Naomi, Chandi and maybe even Jay.
(Ahmm.KJ you mean Kiky) *ooo yea 0.0*
She finished posting for her Angel twin characters
(You mean your well known characters Nyoko and Kyoto) *yeppers now stop interrupting me*
She said her bye-nesses and oyasuminasais, signing off and going to her room.
(What is oyasuminasai??) *.means goodnight* (ooook) She pulled off her black t-shirt showing her green tank top and replaced her jeans with a pare of black shorts. She turned up the volume as 'Cry Little Sister' started to play
(Oooo cry little sister, I love that music vid with Hiei and Yukina...*starry eyes at Hiei*) *hey snap outta it he's mine remember...he bit me* (.. *snapping outta it* hmm what ooo never mind)
She looked into her mirror closet doors as she undid her hair as it fell to her shoulders and started to brush her med. length blondish hair, while adjusting her white bandana. She blinked a few times and rubbed her eyes thinking 'I guess I should got to bed' she turned her fan on high and set her alarm clock for 6am. She then turned on her black light with her little glow balls on the floor spelling out Nyoko and Kyoto.
(Why may I ask?) *I was bored and didn't have anything else to do with um..* (*knocks head against computer* ok then shall we continue)
She sat on her couch for several min. making sure all of her stories were still there and maybe adding or editing a few. She then climbed up to the top bunk of her wooden bunk bed and laid down
(You mean that wooden bunk bed with no bottom bunk.and how do you sleep with six pillows and three cone fenders and still have room for yourself?) *I dunno*
She kissed her Hiei and Kurama pics that hung on her wall then turned on her ceiling fan lying back down.
(Aren't those the pics where Kurama has no well nothing on *it isn't showing anything* and your Hiei collage with the pic in the middle being the only pic of him with a shirt?) *maybe.* She tossed and turned till she finally got comfy and fell asleep as the posts from the RPGs came flooding back to her memory..
KJ: well that is chapter one pretty short but then again..it was a good stopping point.if you would tell me what ya think cause I started fresh and I just wanna know if anyone likes it sooo far..so I guess a review would do ^^ well if you got this far you must of thought it decent enough to keep reading.bye-ness