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really appreciate that, and even your suggestions and requests, because
that's what makes perfect. So don't hesitate to add something in, I want to
make the story as enjoyable for you as possible! Due to requests, I have
tried to change the dialogue and paragraphing, lemme know if this is how
you like it or not-I tried! Well now..on with the story!
3 kaelynn aka LilyGirl
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"Lil, I still don't see them!!" exclaimed Brynna worryingly (is that a word?). The girls had been escorted by the boys to their table, but took no notice as their minds were still on Remus and Embry. "Come on, let's tell someone, one of the professors will be able to do something." Lily said. "Oh no, the sorting has started!" Brynna said looking toward the first years walking through the double doors. Due to their worry, the sorting seemed to take double the time it usually did. As soon as Dumbledore said "Dig in" they rushed to the high table and told Professor McGonagall the story.
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A Few Moments Ago.....
"Guys, where the heck is Moony?" Sirius asked, looking around the Great Hall. "He can't still be doing 'prefect business' Lily's right over there" James said, pointing his finger in Lily's direction. "Maybe he got jumped by Snape!" Peter exclaimed. "Nah, get real Wormtail, Snape would be smirking at us right now, and plus he knows that James and me would hex the pants off him." Sirius said smiling, remembering last year after the O.W.L.s. "Wait, have you noticed that Embry's missing too?" James said. "Ah, that sly wolf!" Sirius said, smirking. "Let's go ask the girls" said James, happy to find an excuse to be able to have a civilized conversation with Lily. But as soon as they got up to go towards Lily's side of the table, the first years walked in. "Oh Merlin, I have the worst timing!" James said disappointingly and sat back down again.
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As soon as they had finished dinner as McGonagall instructed, they rushed up to the common room to find Remus and Embry eating. "Guys, what happened? McGonagall only told us that you were up here." Lily said in a rush. "Well," Embry started, with a red color rising in her cheeks, "We erm..kinda feel asleep, and well, didn't wake up till the train was empty."
"We were able to catch the last carriage up to the school though" Remus added. "Why didn't you attend the feast then?" Brynna asked, smirking at them, having the wrong idea. Realizing what Brynna was thinking, Embry quickly said "We caught McGonagall when we walked in, and she didn't want us to make a scene, so she sent us up here."
"Lils, where are all the first years?" Remus asked looking around. "Oh my! I totally forgot! My mind was on you guys." she said. "Let's hurry down then, maybe no one will have noticed both prefects are missing" Remus said hopefully. Luckily, they ended up making it down there before dinner had ended.
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Lily and Remus entered the Great Hall, faces red and panting. "I guess we got the wrong idea about Remus and Embry..," Sirius started, looking at Lily and Remus's state, "I think it's been Remus and Lily!" Lily, not having the strength to be mad, punched him playfully in the arm, and decided to play along with the 'Remus and Lily' thing. She winked at Remus, and he put his arm around her. "Yeah guys, we've been friends so long, we just decided to take it a step farther" he said, trying to sound convincing. She leaned her head on his shoulder, thinking 'Haha, this is going to be funny if they really believe us!' James looked back between Remus's, and Lily's faces', unsure what to think. After a couple more seconds, he shook his head and walked out of the Hall.
"Oh Moony, James is going to so kill you tonight!" Peter said with a worried frown. "Were we really that convincing?" Lily said, eyes wide. "Guys, don't worry about it, James always acts like a pansy when Lily's with a guy" Sirius said, then added as an after though "hehe, get it? Acts like a pansy with Lily? I made a funny." Everyone just rolled their eyes.
"Lily, you go after James, he won't punch you like with me, and I'll lead the first years to the common room." Remus said walking toward the first years, not giving Lily time to protest. "Guys, could you go for m-" she started but Sirius cut her off. "Lils, even if he won't admit it, Jamesie is nuts about you! The least you could do is comfort him after you hurt him" Sirius said with a confident smile, he knew Lily couldn't live knowing she had hurt someone, even if it was James. "Oh fine" she said walking in the direction James had run in.
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"James?! James, are you down here?" Lily yelled down an empty corridor. "No Mudblood, but I am" said a voice. Lily turned around to see the pale, pointed face of Lucious Malfoy. "What do you want Malfoy?" she asked with an annoyed expression. "C'mon Mudblood, lighten up, lets have some 'fun'" he said, smiling perversely. He started to advance on her, causing Lily to give a frightened look. He backed her up to the wall, and stroked his hand up and down her leg.
"Get off me!" Lily said, trying to remove his hands from her. "Oh, and what are you going to do about it? No ones here to help you," He grinned widely, "C'mon Evans, I like it rough" he whispered in her ear. "Oh I think you're very much mistaken Malfoy, because I believe she has me." James appeared out of the shadows with a look to kill on his face. Lily found that for the first time in her life, she was actually happy to see James. "Im not scared of you Potter" Malfoy said. "Could've fooled me" James said twirling his wand with his fingers. "Here, I have a deal, you get your hands off Evans, and I not hex you too bad," James said, "Deal?" Malfoy growled, but got off her nun-the-less (is that how you spell that?) and stalked off. Lily, unsure what to say, managed to get out a "Thanks Potter." James just glared at her and walked off down the corridor. "James? Wait, can we ta-" she asked, but didn't get to finish due to James. "Can we talk?" James mimicked. "Oh, so now you want to talk!" "Before you wouldn't give me the time of day, and now you want to talk?" James said still rambled on. "How could you Lily? I know you hate me, and I saw you with Amos, but with my best friend? One of the reasons I like you is because I thought you wouldn't do something low like that!" He finished, nodding his head as if to get out a bad memory, and continued walking. All the while he was thinking 'Remus is going to get hell later.'
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Well guys, there it is! I really hope that I worked this out with what the request asked! PLEASE REVIEW!! And let me know if you would like me to do a character profile or not You have no idea how happy it makes me, yesterday, I was like "six, I got six!!!" Well, again, please (review) and thank you (4 reviewing!)!!
3 Kaelynn aka Lilygirl
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"Lil, I still don't see them!!" exclaimed Brynna worryingly (is that a word?). The girls had been escorted by the boys to their table, but took no notice as their minds were still on Remus and Embry. "Come on, let's tell someone, one of the professors will be able to do something." Lily said. "Oh no, the sorting has started!" Brynna said looking toward the first years walking through the double doors. Due to their worry, the sorting seemed to take double the time it usually did. As soon as Dumbledore said "Dig in" they rushed to the high table and told Professor McGonagall the story.
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A Few Moments Ago.....
"Guys, where the heck is Moony?" Sirius asked, looking around the Great Hall. "He can't still be doing 'prefect business' Lily's right over there" James said, pointing his finger in Lily's direction. "Maybe he got jumped by Snape!" Peter exclaimed. "Nah, get real Wormtail, Snape would be smirking at us right now, and plus he knows that James and me would hex the pants off him." Sirius said smiling, remembering last year after the O.W.L.s. "Wait, have you noticed that Embry's missing too?" James said. "Ah, that sly wolf!" Sirius said, smirking. "Let's go ask the girls" said James, happy to find an excuse to be able to have a civilized conversation with Lily. But as soon as they got up to go towards Lily's side of the table, the first years walked in. "Oh Merlin, I have the worst timing!" James said disappointingly and sat back down again.
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As soon as they had finished dinner as McGonagall instructed, they rushed up to the common room to find Remus and Embry eating. "Guys, what happened? McGonagall only told us that you were up here." Lily said in a rush. "Well," Embry started, with a red color rising in her cheeks, "We erm..kinda feel asleep, and well, didn't wake up till the train was empty."
"We were able to catch the last carriage up to the school though" Remus added. "Why didn't you attend the feast then?" Brynna asked, smirking at them, having the wrong idea. Realizing what Brynna was thinking, Embry quickly said "We caught McGonagall when we walked in, and she didn't want us to make a scene, so she sent us up here."
"Lils, where are all the first years?" Remus asked looking around. "Oh my! I totally forgot! My mind was on you guys." she said. "Let's hurry down then, maybe no one will have noticed both prefects are missing" Remus said hopefully. Luckily, they ended up making it down there before dinner had ended.
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Lily and Remus entered the Great Hall, faces red and panting. "I guess we got the wrong idea about Remus and Embry..," Sirius started, looking at Lily and Remus's state, "I think it's been Remus and Lily!" Lily, not having the strength to be mad, punched him playfully in the arm, and decided to play along with the 'Remus and Lily' thing. She winked at Remus, and he put his arm around her. "Yeah guys, we've been friends so long, we just decided to take it a step farther" he said, trying to sound convincing. She leaned her head on his shoulder, thinking 'Haha, this is going to be funny if they really believe us!' James looked back between Remus's, and Lily's faces', unsure what to think. After a couple more seconds, he shook his head and walked out of the Hall.
"Oh Moony, James is going to so kill you tonight!" Peter said with a worried frown. "Were we really that convincing?" Lily said, eyes wide. "Guys, don't worry about it, James always acts like a pansy when Lily's with a guy" Sirius said, then added as an after though "hehe, get it? Acts like a pansy with Lily? I made a funny." Everyone just rolled their eyes.
"Lily, you go after James, he won't punch you like with me, and I'll lead the first years to the common room." Remus said walking toward the first years, not giving Lily time to protest. "Guys, could you go for m-" she started but Sirius cut her off. "Lils, even if he won't admit it, Jamesie is nuts about you! The least you could do is comfort him after you hurt him" Sirius said with a confident smile, he knew Lily couldn't live knowing she had hurt someone, even if it was James. "Oh fine" she said walking in the direction James had run in.
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"James?! James, are you down here?" Lily yelled down an empty corridor. "No Mudblood, but I am" said a voice. Lily turned around to see the pale, pointed face of Lucious Malfoy. "What do you want Malfoy?" she asked with an annoyed expression. "C'mon Mudblood, lighten up, lets have some 'fun'" he said, smiling perversely. He started to advance on her, causing Lily to give a frightened look. He backed her up to the wall, and stroked his hand up and down her leg.
"Get off me!" Lily said, trying to remove his hands from her. "Oh, and what are you going to do about it? No ones here to help you," He grinned widely, "C'mon Evans, I like it rough" he whispered in her ear. "Oh I think you're very much mistaken Malfoy, because I believe she has me." James appeared out of the shadows with a look to kill on his face. Lily found that for the first time in her life, she was actually happy to see James. "Im not scared of you Potter" Malfoy said. "Could've fooled me" James said twirling his wand with his fingers. "Here, I have a deal, you get your hands off Evans, and I not hex you too bad," James said, "Deal?" Malfoy growled, but got off her nun-the-less (is that how you spell that?) and stalked off. Lily, unsure what to say, managed to get out a "Thanks Potter." James just glared at her and walked off down the corridor. "James? Wait, can we ta-" she asked, but didn't get to finish due to James. "Can we talk?" James mimicked. "Oh, so now you want to talk!" "Before you wouldn't give me the time of day, and now you want to talk?" James said still rambled on. "How could you Lily? I know you hate me, and I saw you with Amos, but with my best friend? One of the reasons I like you is because I thought you wouldn't do something low like that!" He finished, nodding his head as if to get out a bad memory, and continued walking. All the while he was thinking 'Remus is going to get hell later.'
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Well guys, there it is! I really hope that I worked this out with what the request asked! PLEASE REVIEW!! And let me know if you would like me to do a character profile or not You have no idea how happy it makes me, yesterday, I was like "six, I got six!!!" Well, again, please (review) and thank you (4 reviewing!)!!
3 Kaelynn aka Lilygirl