First attempt at limited syllables, abaab rhyme scheme, sounds weird to me.

up all night
i cannot sleep
it's not right
what a fright
i feel so cheap

sanity leaves
my mind is racing
bloodied sleaves
my chest heaves
now i am pacing

i don't feel
life is tragic
cold as steel
life's a wheel
no more magic

nightmares come
i still can't sleep
i want some
life is dumb
i still feel cheap

hurt me more
getting dizzy
life's a whore
fall to the floor
mind is busy

the last blow
hits like a cannon
never know
feel so low
her name is Shannon

life is good
she made it so
never could
never would
but she said go

now delight
sad never more
life is right
no more fright
things to live for