She's back......Howdy all....I got my results back ! yay!! 4 C's, 4 B's and 4 A's !! Take that English department ! Eat my Dust Mr Harris!!
Marko: AHEM!
Sorry got all caught up in the moment anyway 2 things after this chapter somewhen im gonna redo the typos in my work! second thing im gonna have songs to go with the chapters ...
oh yes and the girl ... i was faffing about on a dollmaker so all the female victims have dolls to go with if you want them...as if.
David : I cant deal with her when shes happy like this!
Paul : Hey at least she's writing again!
Chapter Six ; Changes
Marko opened his blurry eyes Star and David were carrying him through the boardwalk oblivious to the stares of passing punks and the rude catcalls of the other local gangs. Only Max paid any attention after all this was Santa Carla , and with masses of dissapearences a man being carried by his two friends was a regular occurance.
All Marko saw of the crowd was the swirl of color form neon green to midnight black. After what seemed like mere moments they were all on the beach, bright bonfires burning . Star laughed as David propped Marko up and shook him awake.
"MARKO!! WAKE UP!!" David yelled at him more out of annoyance than concern. When Marko stirred David muttered "finally" only to have his attention distracted by a freindly run away who had been walking past the secluded area. She had short dusky blonde nearly orange hair , amber eyes and was wearing purple pin stripe truosers and some sort of purple shirt.
"Hey, is you're friend ok? he looks kinda .. sick.." she looked with concern at Marko who was slumped against a large wooden sea weathered wall, with an expression of what can only be described in drunk terms, as one second away from vomiting but he's really happy about it.
David smiled a cruel smile the firelight capturing his eyes to reflect the girls expression of confusion as she backed away from David. David's features warped as he lunged at her he tore at her neck drinking the rich crimson blood. Star screamed at David to stop, crying , paralyzed by her fear of a man she thought was her way out from her dull routine. Marko looked at the scence with passive bloodlust his face contorted but not wanting to join in.
David's victim cried out in pain then shuddered and died. David back away from her corpse looking sadly on at the girl he killed a rush of color coming to his cheeks as his vampire face faded away mearly a bad memory.
"So, what do you want to do now ?" David said laughing.
Marko: AHEM!
Sorry got all caught up in the moment anyway 2 things after this chapter somewhen im gonna redo the typos in my work! second thing im gonna have songs to go with the chapters ...
oh yes and the girl ... i was faffing about on a dollmaker so all the female victims have dolls to go with if you want them...as if.
David : I cant deal with her when shes happy like this!
Paul : Hey at least she's writing again!
Chapter Six ; Changes
Marko opened his blurry eyes Star and David were carrying him through the boardwalk oblivious to the stares of passing punks and the rude catcalls of the other local gangs. Only Max paid any attention after all this was Santa Carla , and with masses of dissapearences a man being carried by his two friends was a regular occurance.
All Marko saw of the crowd was the swirl of color form neon green to midnight black. After what seemed like mere moments they were all on the beach, bright bonfires burning . Star laughed as David propped Marko up and shook him awake.
"MARKO!! WAKE UP!!" David yelled at him more out of annoyance than concern. When Marko stirred David muttered "finally" only to have his attention distracted by a freindly run away who had been walking past the secluded area. She had short dusky blonde nearly orange hair , amber eyes and was wearing purple pin stripe truosers and some sort of purple shirt.
"Hey, is you're friend ok? he looks kinda .. sick.." she looked with concern at Marko who was slumped against a large wooden sea weathered wall, with an expression of what can only be described in drunk terms, as one second away from vomiting but he's really happy about it.
David smiled a cruel smile the firelight capturing his eyes to reflect the girls expression of confusion as she backed away from David. David's features warped as he lunged at her he tore at her neck drinking the rich crimson blood. Star screamed at David to stop, crying , paralyzed by her fear of a man she thought was her way out from her dull routine. Marko looked at the scence with passive bloodlust his face contorted but not wanting to join in.
David's victim cried out in pain then shuddered and died. David back away from her corpse looking sadly on at the girl he killed a rush of color coming to his cheeks as his vampire face faded away mearly a bad memory.
"So, what do you want to do now ?" David said laughing.