NAOTA & HARUKO FOREVER!!!
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I am so proud of this fic!! It's coming along good and it seems like you all like it ^.^ Which is most important of all! I'm not sure if this is the best or one of the best FLCL fics out there but for those of you who said so, you made me feel great! Now, thanks to all of you awesome people that reviewed! You're the people that keep me writing:
tyty
Seto jr.
Ta's ficcys
RuRsHeR
sum1
Noloc3
Alex
0_0
Me
Nate Grey
MirokuLova
fuedal eruption
Haruko-san
mangagirl2
Akira
unlimiteddragon1
CSI productions
Hecate
^Thanks all of you^ You're all so great for reviewing and even reading my fic! The reviews are great! Thanks a lot! Love you all!!! I'm so glad there's more FLCL fics on this site by the day! That just makes me so happy! We need more! It's a great anime it needs more credit!
Ok, here's chapter three! It's in general writing now, some third person too. I hope you enjoy =^.^=
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Chapter Three: Hungry?
A bright yellow Vespa came tearing around a corner at a lightning, and may I say, irresponsible speed. But, what would you expect from an insane alien woman? And with that, the Vespa and lunatic woman driving it disappeared down the street. You could hear her menacing laughter echoing through the streets.
Haruko seemed even crazier than the last time she came to Mabase. But she wasn't crazier, she was excited. She had grown a bit (and a small one at that) the day she broke her own heart because of her selfishness. In a way, it didn't make sense. She was selfish, yes, but if she was, why would she leave behind something she wanted? Value. She had thought the power of Atomsk was much more powerful than her silly little crush on a little boy...Naota. Boy, was she ever wrong...
Being without Naota on her journey to finding Atomsk, Haruko realized Naota's heart was much more valuable and much more powerful than Atomsk. She needed him. His heart was also delicate. She had let her fingers slip and it had shattered as she drove away on her Vespa, leaving him there, alone and confused. But now she was going to glue the pieces back together and make it right again. This had to be the right thing...she was following her heart. Not to mention Haruko finding out that Naota's heart meant so much more to her than power.
So she came back.
And here she is, the all-too-familiar scene of a young-looking pink haired crazy woman speeding along on her Vespa, smashing anything, and anyone, that got in her way with her guitar.
Eri was walking along the sidewalk towards Naota's house. She'd had a crush on him since she was 12. She never told anyone, but she thinks he knows. She's been trying to get him ever since. Even though she was heading towards Naota's home, and that was her destination, she still wasn't sure if she had wanted to go. She thought she would have had a chance with him if it weren't for that crazy Vespa Woman. Damn her.
Haruko was getting closer to him as each second passed and more objects lay mangled on the street from her guitar and reckless driving as she sped away toward the puzzle she had to put back together - Naota's heart. She had her glue ready. Nothing could stop her now.
Eri was still not sure if she should be going through with seeing Naota at his house. She was pretty sure he still wasn't over the Vespa Woman that gave him those cat ears. Well...the ears were pretty cute on him. She was going to help him get over her. Eri heard something like a motorcycle come down the street behind her. She thought everything was fine, she was on the sidewalk. But as she turned around, it seemed she wasn't. "What the..." she began but was blinded as a woman with crazy pink hair and a big ass guitar zoomed past her yelling
"GET OUTTA THE WAY!" as she swung her guitar at Eri.
She fell onto the sidewalk, face down, barely missing a blow that would have been quite painful, had it hit her. As she looked up to see what had happened, she saw the all-too-familiar yellow Vespa with that Alien Vespa Woman riding along to...towards Naota's. No one could forget that psyco. Eri gathered herself up, turned around, and walked back home. Damn.
Naota lay on his bed upside-down, staring at the ceiling. His dad wasn't home again, he noted. There probably wasn't anything to eat, and noon was approaching too. Sighing in defeat, Naota got up off of his bed, got some money out of his desk, and descended down the stairs and out the door on the way to getting some food. His dad was never home much these days. But when he was, all he talked about was fooly cooly. Even though neither of them knew exactly what it was. Another reason Naota couldn't wait to leave. As he reached the sidewalk and down the street, he had thought he was dreaming when he saw the familiar yellow Vespa coming down the street and the love of his life riding along on it...towards him.
There he was...right in front of her. Haruko had to hold back with all her will-power so she wouldn't pounce on him and start licking his face. She could do that later. For now, she wanted to keep it fun. She grinned her mischievous grin and noticed how much older Naota looked. He really did Furi Kuri. "Hungry?" she asked the shocked (not to mention cute) Naota.
"Yea..." Naota didn't even know where the answer had come from. For all he knew, for all he cared, he didn't have a voice. Haruko was here, right in front of him, right now, and it was real, and that's all that mattered.
Haruko smiled, a genuine smile. The first Naota had ever seen. It was beautiful.
She still looked the same she did when she came and left Mabase the first time, claiming to be 19 years old. Who knows, maybe aliens age differently than humans? It doesn't matter. She's here now.
Naota climbed behind Haruko on the Vespa, wrapping his arms around her tightly knowing it was going to be a wild ride. "Don't leave this time." he whispered into her back before she took off again screaming
"CURRY!" the whole way there.
They walked into the restaurant and ordered their curry. Naota got mild, or course, whereas Haruko got the spicy.
"I hate spicy stuff." Naota huffed as they got their food and sat down. Haruko just laughed at him and said
"Looks like little Ta-Kun isn't all done growing up yet is he?" she laughed. "They gave us the wrong ones." Haruko said after taking a bite of her curry. Naota was glad he didn't eat any of his yet...he hated spicy stuff. They switched.
Naota took some of his curry and stuffed it into his mouth. He almost spit it back out instantly. "HEY! This is the spicy one! Give me mine back!"
Haruko just looked up at him innocently before telling him "No."
He huffed in frustration, then sighed in defeat. He was really hungry so he just stuffed it all down.
Well...at least Haruko hadn't changed.
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Chapter three is finished! I hope you all liked it! I'm so glad everyone has been reviewing and loving the story ::beams with happiness:: I'm sure if no one liked it I wouldn't of continued. AND, this chappie is longer!! ^.^ I hope you all enjoyed! Please review, good or bad, I love feedback on what you all think, flame me for all I care! I love you all!
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I am so proud of this fic!! It's coming along good and it seems like you all like it ^.^ Which is most important of all! I'm not sure if this is the best or one of the best FLCL fics out there but for those of you who said so, you made me feel great! Now, thanks to all of you awesome people that reviewed! You're the people that keep me writing:
tyty
Seto jr.
Ta's ficcys
RuRsHeR
sum1
Noloc3
Alex
0_0
Me
Nate Grey
MirokuLova
fuedal eruption
Haruko-san
mangagirl2
Akira
unlimiteddragon1
CSI productions
Hecate
^Thanks all of you^ You're all so great for reviewing and even reading my fic! The reviews are great! Thanks a lot! Love you all!!! I'm so glad there's more FLCL fics on this site by the day! That just makes me so happy! We need more! It's a great anime it needs more credit!
Ok, here's chapter three! It's in general writing now, some third person too. I hope you enjoy =^.^=
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Chapter Three: Hungry?
A bright yellow Vespa came tearing around a corner at a lightning, and may I say, irresponsible speed. But, what would you expect from an insane alien woman? And with that, the Vespa and lunatic woman driving it disappeared down the street. You could hear her menacing laughter echoing through the streets.
Haruko seemed even crazier than the last time she came to Mabase. But she wasn't crazier, she was excited. She had grown a bit (and a small one at that) the day she broke her own heart because of her selfishness. In a way, it didn't make sense. She was selfish, yes, but if she was, why would she leave behind something she wanted? Value. She had thought the power of Atomsk was much more powerful than her silly little crush on a little boy...Naota. Boy, was she ever wrong...
Being without Naota on her journey to finding Atomsk, Haruko realized Naota's heart was much more valuable and much more powerful than Atomsk. She needed him. His heart was also delicate. She had let her fingers slip and it had shattered as she drove away on her Vespa, leaving him there, alone and confused. But now she was going to glue the pieces back together and make it right again. This had to be the right thing...she was following her heart. Not to mention Haruko finding out that Naota's heart meant so much more to her than power.
So she came back.
And here she is, the all-too-familiar scene of a young-looking pink haired crazy woman speeding along on her Vespa, smashing anything, and anyone, that got in her way with her guitar.
Eri was walking along the sidewalk towards Naota's house. She'd had a crush on him since she was 12. She never told anyone, but she thinks he knows. She's been trying to get him ever since. Even though she was heading towards Naota's home, and that was her destination, she still wasn't sure if she had wanted to go. She thought she would have had a chance with him if it weren't for that crazy Vespa Woman. Damn her.
Haruko was getting closer to him as each second passed and more objects lay mangled on the street from her guitar and reckless driving as she sped away toward the puzzle she had to put back together - Naota's heart. She had her glue ready. Nothing could stop her now.
Eri was still not sure if she should be going through with seeing Naota at his house. She was pretty sure he still wasn't over the Vespa Woman that gave him those cat ears. Well...the ears were pretty cute on him. She was going to help him get over her. Eri heard something like a motorcycle come down the street behind her. She thought everything was fine, she was on the sidewalk. But as she turned around, it seemed she wasn't. "What the..." she began but was blinded as a woman with crazy pink hair and a big ass guitar zoomed past her yelling
"GET OUTTA THE WAY!" as she swung her guitar at Eri.
She fell onto the sidewalk, face down, barely missing a blow that would have been quite painful, had it hit her. As she looked up to see what had happened, she saw the all-too-familiar yellow Vespa with that Alien Vespa Woman riding along to...towards Naota's. No one could forget that psyco. Eri gathered herself up, turned around, and walked back home. Damn.
Naota lay on his bed upside-down, staring at the ceiling. His dad wasn't home again, he noted. There probably wasn't anything to eat, and noon was approaching too. Sighing in defeat, Naota got up off of his bed, got some money out of his desk, and descended down the stairs and out the door on the way to getting some food. His dad was never home much these days. But when he was, all he talked about was fooly cooly. Even though neither of them knew exactly what it was. Another reason Naota couldn't wait to leave. As he reached the sidewalk and down the street, he had thought he was dreaming when he saw the familiar yellow Vespa coming down the street and the love of his life riding along on it...towards him.
There he was...right in front of her. Haruko had to hold back with all her will-power so she wouldn't pounce on him and start licking his face. She could do that later. For now, she wanted to keep it fun. She grinned her mischievous grin and noticed how much older Naota looked. He really did Furi Kuri. "Hungry?" she asked the shocked (not to mention cute) Naota.
"Yea..." Naota didn't even know where the answer had come from. For all he knew, for all he cared, he didn't have a voice. Haruko was here, right in front of him, right now, and it was real, and that's all that mattered.
Haruko smiled, a genuine smile. The first Naota had ever seen. It was beautiful.
She still looked the same she did when she came and left Mabase the first time, claiming to be 19 years old. Who knows, maybe aliens age differently than humans? It doesn't matter. She's here now.
Naota climbed behind Haruko on the Vespa, wrapping his arms around her tightly knowing it was going to be a wild ride. "Don't leave this time." he whispered into her back before she took off again screaming
"CURRY!" the whole way there.
They walked into the restaurant and ordered their curry. Naota got mild, or course, whereas Haruko got the spicy.
"I hate spicy stuff." Naota huffed as they got their food and sat down. Haruko just laughed at him and said
"Looks like little Ta-Kun isn't all done growing up yet is he?" she laughed. "They gave us the wrong ones." Haruko said after taking a bite of her curry. Naota was glad he didn't eat any of his yet...he hated spicy stuff. They switched.
Naota took some of his curry and stuffed it into his mouth. He almost spit it back out instantly. "HEY! This is the spicy one! Give me mine back!"
Haruko just looked up at him innocently before telling him "No."
He huffed in frustration, then sighed in defeat. He was really hungry so he just stuffed it all down.
Well...at least Haruko hadn't changed.
E n D
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Chapter three is finished! I hope you all liked it! I'm so glad everyone has been reviewing and loving the story ::beams with happiness:: I'm sure if no one liked it I wouldn't of continued. AND, this chappie is longer!! ^.^ I hope you all enjoyed! Please review, good or bad, I love feedback on what you all think, flame me for all I care! I love you all!
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