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Thanks to everyone who reviewed! You're all great! I really pushed myself to get this chapter done when I did! I didn't think I could do it, so I did this for all of YOU awesome readers/reviewers out there! I love you all:
Seto Jr.
Chibi Chan
Red-Eyed demon
SweetLiMedy
Ame Kurayami
Aya the White Dragon
Forgot my name...
Fallen Haibane
Zaber
Ana
Hecate
Lord Quartz zypher
fuedal eruption
Escuro de la Lus
^Thanks all of you^ You're all great! I'm glad you all like my fic! I've been working pretty hard on it, harder than any of my other fics! Thanks everyone! I hope you like chapter four!
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Chapter Four: All Clean?
Riding on Haruko's Vespa while she was driving was like giving yourself a death wish. But if your head is empty, you have nothing to worry about, right? They sped down the street together nearing the beach. Just like old times.
Haruko suddenly stopped and hopped off the Vespa. "Well...come on!" she said, as she gestured for Naota to follow her onto the sand.
The waves were shimmering in the sunlight, make the ocean seem like a giant sheet of crystal. Haruko's eyes glinted as she stared into Naota's. They looked like bright yellow diamonds.
"You really did furi kuri since the last time I saw you Ta...I guess you're wondering why I came back?" Haruko said, drawing pictures in the sand with her fingertip. She couldn't decide if she should give Naota those cat ears again. They were cute on him...
Naota just looked at her. She was different. The way she looked at him. Her eyes...they help something...more this time. "Well...of course I want to know but...I'm glad you're back."
Haruko smiled her second real smile. She was special...She leaned forward, touching her nose to Naota's. "To see my Ta-Kun of course!" she exclaimed, hopping on top of Naota and hugging him so tight he thought his lungs would explode.
"C-can't b-breath...!" Naota choked out. He wanted to hug her back but, well, how can you hug someone if you can't breath?
She loosened her grip once Naota began to turn purple. She sat back up again, looking at him. Naota wanted to trust her; praying she was telling the truth; but what if she needed something from him again?
As Naota began to sit up Haruko spoke. "I don't want anything from you Ta...I really did want to see you. Look at everything we went through. How could I forget you?" She affectionately ruffled his hair, picturing the kitty ears there again. "Really."
Man she was weird. It's like she could read his mind or something...well she is an alien...but her head is empty?! He believed her. How could he not? She was Haruko. Even if she wasn't telling the truth, he didn't care. He had waited for this day for three years. Haruko was back now. Nothing else mattered...as long as she didn't leave.
Haruko stood up to leave as Naota followed suit. Before Haruko could go back to her Vespa with Naota, he grabbed her wrist and pulled her into a tight, loving hug. "Don't go this time." he said as his arms squeezed around her middle. She hugged back this time.
She wasn't going anywhere. She knew she wasn't. This felt too right. If she was going anywhere, it was with her Ta-Kun.
They rode back to Naota's in what seemed five seconds and a whole lot of smashing objects with guitars. Once they arrived Naota saw his dad was home...finally. Haruko got up and pulled Naota off and she stormed into the house.
Haruko found Kamon and screamed "HOW ABOUT GETTING YOUR HOUSE KEEPER BACK?!"
Kamon jumped, causing his curry to go flying everywhere. It looked like a scene from one of those weird animes you don't get. He blushed. "Haruko- san! Of course, of course! How is fooly cooly?!" he said, beginning to drool.
Naota rolled his eyes "Here we go again..." he mumbled. Slouching, he went upstairs to take a bath and give Haruko and Kamon some 'privacy.'
He got into the bathroom and slipped his shirt off.
"Need some help with that?" Haruko said slyly, grinning.
"Don't you and my dad have some things to catch up on.?" Naota bitterly spat back at her.
Haruko felt guilty about the way she acted with Kamon in front of Naota. She just thought if she did it the feelings she was having for Naota would cease. But they didn't...of course.
His back was facing her. She walked up to him, wrapping her arms around him middle, resting her head on his back. He was as tall as her now. "I told you, I came here to see you, Ta-Kun." she murmured.
Haruko let go of Naota and left, letting him finish his bath.
Naota came into his room and found Haruko laying in his bed. She glanced up when she heard him come in. "All clean?" she asked him, scooting over on the bed to make room for him.
Naota walked over to his bed and fell down onto it next to Haruko mumbling "Mmhmm."
"Good. No one likes a dirty Naota." Haruko said, embracing Naota as he laughed at her.
She played with his hair thinking about the cat ears again. Maybe she could put them on him while he was sleeping...
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There's chapter four! I hope you all liked it. I don't think it was that good but...maybe I'm wrong? I hope I'm wrong! I hope you all enjoyed it! I'm glad there's more Furi Kuri fics out there now, and there's a lot of readers which is awesome! It might take me a bit longer to update now, school is starting in a few days so it'll be a little harder to get all this done, but I will do my best because you all make me feel so good about my writing! Please review, thank you for reading!
NAOTA & HARUKO 4-EVER!! 3
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Thanks to everyone who reviewed! You're all great! I really pushed myself to get this chapter done when I did! I didn't think I could do it, so I did this for all of YOU awesome readers/reviewers out there! I love you all:
Seto Jr.
Chibi Chan
Red-Eyed demon
SweetLiMedy
Ame Kurayami
Aya the White Dragon
Forgot my name...
Fallen Haibane
Zaber
Ana
Hecate
Lord Quartz zypher
fuedal eruption
Escuro de la Lus
^Thanks all of you^ You're all great! I'm glad you all like my fic! I've been working pretty hard on it, harder than any of my other fics! Thanks everyone! I hope you like chapter four!
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Chapter Four: All Clean?
Riding on Haruko's Vespa while she was driving was like giving yourself a death wish. But if your head is empty, you have nothing to worry about, right? They sped down the street together nearing the beach. Just like old times.
Haruko suddenly stopped and hopped off the Vespa. "Well...come on!" she said, as she gestured for Naota to follow her onto the sand.
The waves were shimmering in the sunlight, make the ocean seem like a giant sheet of crystal. Haruko's eyes glinted as she stared into Naota's. They looked like bright yellow diamonds.
"You really did furi kuri since the last time I saw you Ta...I guess you're wondering why I came back?" Haruko said, drawing pictures in the sand with her fingertip. She couldn't decide if she should give Naota those cat ears again. They were cute on him...
Naota just looked at her. She was different. The way she looked at him. Her eyes...they help something...more this time. "Well...of course I want to know but...I'm glad you're back."
Haruko smiled her second real smile. She was special...She leaned forward, touching her nose to Naota's. "To see my Ta-Kun of course!" she exclaimed, hopping on top of Naota and hugging him so tight he thought his lungs would explode.
"C-can't b-breath...!" Naota choked out. He wanted to hug her back but, well, how can you hug someone if you can't breath?
She loosened her grip once Naota began to turn purple. She sat back up again, looking at him. Naota wanted to trust her; praying she was telling the truth; but what if she needed something from him again?
As Naota began to sit up Haruko spoke. "I don't want anything from you Ta...I really did want to see you. Look at everything we went through. How could I forget you?" She affectionately ruffled his hair, picturing the kitty ears there again. "Really."
Man she was weird. It's like she could read his mind or something...well she is an alien...but her head is empty?! He believed her. How could he not? She was Haruko. Even if she wasn't telling the truth, he didn't care. He had waited for this day for three years. Haruko was back now. Nothing else mattered...as long as she didn't leave.
Haruko stood up to leave as Naota followed suit. Before Haruko could go back to her Vespa with Naota, he grabbed her wrist and pulled her into a tight, loving hug. "Don't go this time." he said as his arms squeezed around her middle. She hugged back this time.
She wasn't going anywhere. She knew she wasn't. This felt too right. If she was going anywhere, it was with her Ta-Kun.
They rode back to Naota's in what seemed five seconds and a whole lot of smashing objects with guitars. Once they arrived Naota saw his dad was home...finally. Haruko got up and pulled Naota off and she stormed into the house.
Haruko found Kamon and screamed "HOW ABOUT GETTING YOUR HOUSE KEEPER BACK?!"
Kamon jumped, causing his curry to go flying everywhere. It looked like a scene from one of those weird animes you don't get. He blushed. "Haruko- san! Of course, of course! How is fooly cooly?!" he said, beginning to drool.
Naota rolled his eyes "Here we go again..." he mumbled. Slouching, he went upstairs to take a bath and give Haruko and Kamon some 'privacy.'
He got into the bathroom and slipped his shirt off.
"Need some help with that?" Haruko said slyly, grinning.
"Don't you and my dad have some things to catch up on.?" Naota bitterly spat back at her.
Haruko felt guilty about the way she acted with Kamon in front of Naota. She just thought if she did it the feelings she was having for Naota would cease. But they didn't...of course.
His back was facing her. She walked up to him, wrapping her arms around him middle, resting her head on his back. He was as tall as her now. "I told you, I came here to see you, Ta-Kun." she murmured.
Haruko let go of Naota and left, letting him finish his bath.
Naota came into his room and found Haruko laying in his bed. She glanced up when she heard him come in. "All clean?" she asked him, scooting over on the bed to make room for him.
Naota walked over to his bed and fell down onto it next to Haruko mumbling "Mmhmm."
"Good. No one likes a dirty Naota." Haruko said, embracing Naota as he laughed at her.
She played with his hair thinking about the cat ears again. Maybe she could put them on him while he was sleeping...
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There's chapter four! I hope you all liked it. I don't think it was that good but...maybe I'm wrong? I hope I'm wrong! I hope you all enjoyed it! I'm glad there's more Furi Kuri fics out there now, and there's a lot of readers which is awesome! It might take me a bit longer to update now, school is starting in a few days so it'll be a little harder to get all this done, but I will do my best because you all make me feel so good about my writing! Please review, thank you for reading!
NAOTA & HARUKO 4-EVER!! 3
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