A/N: Hey everyone! This is my first fan fiction, so I would appreciate
reviews! I want to make my work better so critiques would be very
appreciated! Although this is not perfect, you can't expect it from anyone!
Thanks for reading my story and send your reviews!
Chapter 1
Harry Potter, Ron Weasley and Hermione Granger were wondering outside of the Hogwarts castle on a brisk, pleasantly sunny morning. They were on their way to visit their friend Hagrid, who lived near the Forbidden Forest. As they passed by the edge of the forest, an almost human whisper floated through the trees loudly.
" What was that?" Hermione asked the two boys, as she autonomously, but firmly, stepped towards the trees.
" I don't know Hermione, but I wouldn't like to find out either." Ron whimpered, his face going slightly pale.
" Oh come on, it can't be that bad if it came near the edge of the forest where it can be seen or heard by students." Hermione said bravely, while containing her snickers aimed towards Ron.
" Please you two, stop bickering and lets just peek inside the forest a few feet, so that we can just run back out if necessary all right? Besides, I think you guys just heard the wind. But obviously Hermione want to explore, so lets go." Harry butted his suggestion between the two.
" Come on Ronald, or are you to scared that some hairy monster is going to eat you up fired and boiled for dinner?" Hermione said all cutesy and sweet, while batting her eyelashes at him.
" Oh shut up Hermione! And DON'T call me RONALD!" Ron said in an angry rush, as his face and ear began to redden in embarrassment and anger.
" Come on, you two, and I thought I told you to stop bickering? Breaks almost over so we'd better hurry." Harry reached behind him and grabbed Ron and Hermione's wrists. He jerked them forward and let go of them once they were inside of the darkened tree's canopy.
Ron, now back to pale, was complaining and trying to make excuses to get them out of the forest. "But- but- we were going to see Hagrid! And we haven't seen him in ages! I mean- HARRY!"
Harry and Hermione spun around just in time to see Ron clinging to the side of the pit. Ron had fallen into some sort of trap door that had been hidden among the leaves littering the dirt. Harry dropped his wand near Hermione's feet, flung off his black school robe, and cautiously stepped closer to Ron. As he did so, Ron shouted and told him not to come any closer, for he was being lowered as Harry stepped closer. Harry returned to Hermione, and asked her what she thought they should do, just as he finished, Ron fell down into the pit.
Hermione and Harry, being faithful and loyal friends, ran quickly up to the hole and jumped in head first, after which they realized was incredibly stupid.
A/N: ok, so now you have read the 1st chapter. I would like to know what you thought of it. Any reviews would be appreciated. I need encouragement to keep writing!
Chapter 1
Harry Potter, Ron Weasley and Hermione Granger were wondering outside of the Hogwarts castle on a brisk, pleasantly sunny morning. They were on their way to visit their friend Hagrid, who lived near the Forbidden Forest. As they passed by the edge of the forest, an almost human whisper floated through the trees loudly.
" What was that?" Hermione asked the two boys, as she autonomously, but firmly, stepped towards the trees.
" I don't know Hermione, but I wouldn't like to find out either." Ron whimpered, his face going slightly pale.
" Oh come on, it can't be that bad if it came near the edge of the forest where it can be seen or heard by students." Hermione said bravely, while containing her snickers aimed towards Ron.
" Please you two, stop bickering and lets just peek inside the forest a few feet, so that we can just run back out if necessary all right? Besides, I think you guys just heard the wind. But obviously Hermione want to explore, so lets go." Harry butted his suggestion between the two.
" Come on Ronald, or are you to scared that some hairy monster is going to eat you up fired and boiled for dinner?" Hermione said all cutesy and sweet, while batting her eyelashes at him.
" Oh shut up Hermione! And DON'T call me RONALD!" Ron said in an angry rush, as his face and ear began to redden in embarrassment and anger.
" Come on, you two, and I thought I told you to stop bickering? Breaks almost over so we'd better hurry." Harry reached behind him and grabbed Ron and Hermione's wrists. He jerked them forward and let go of them once they were inside of the darkened tree's canopy.
Ron, now back to pale, was complaining and trying to make excuses to get them out of the forest. "But- but- we were going to see Hagrid! And we haven't seen him in ages! I mean- HARRY!"
Harry and Hermione spun around just in time to see Ron clinging to the side of the pit. Ron had fallen into some sort of trap door that had been hidden among the leaves littering the dirt. Harry dropped his wand near Hermione's feet, flung off his black school robe, and cautiously stepped closer to Ron. As he did so, Ron shouted and told him not to come any closer, for he was being lowered as Harry stepped closer. Harry returned to Hermione, and asked her what she thought they should do, just as he finished, Ron fell down into the pit.
Hermione and Harry, being faithful and loyal friends, ran quickly up to the hole and jumped in head first, after which they realized was incredibly stupid.
A/N: ok, so now you have read the 1st chapter. I would like to know what you thought of it. Any reviews would be appreciated. I need encouragement to keep writing!