WEEHEE! I couldn't believe how many reviews I got in one day! I was so happy that I had hysterical fits of laughter from disbelief! I'm serious! I started freaking out and my friend was like-jeeze. This is crazy even for you! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! *starts laughing again.* I CAN'T BELIEVE IT! *Falls out of chair. Gets up and starts crying* You are all so good to me! I don't deserve this! I have to thank all of you!
whoeverwastoolazytoputaname(j/k^^)
Thank you so much for being my first reviewer. I'd like to know your name the next time, though.
crystal-kitty2003
Thankyou so much! I always get reviews saying "put more up" but never reviews saying that that reviewer will definetly be back again! Thankyou!
Kouji Ishida, Tomoki Takashi
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! I like you guys! You took time to e-mail a lowly author who is only thirteen and has no meaning in life at the moment. ^^
KawaiinessPnay
LOL! You remind me of myself. All hyper one moment, then say one word to end the conversation. ^^ And yeah, I love CCS/HP crossovers too. ^____________^
fire_storm
*gasp* You...really...think...so? *Glomps fire_storm* WOW! SOMEONE WHO THINKS THAT I'M ACTUALLY WORTH SOMETHING! THANKYOU SO MUCH!!! Oh, and by the way, Sakura's *appearence* hasn't changed, it's her personality. The only outer difference is that Sakura's hair is just a little longer. ^^
ps: I LOVE your name! If you hadn't already claimed it, it would be my penname!!! LOL! *in a hushed whisper* I'm a pyromaniac. Shhhhhhhhhhhh!!! *cackles and sets her brother on fire* lol
sweetlilacblossom
THANKYOU!!!! Somebody thinks I should keep going!!! Unlike my so-called friends! *glares at ppl in her school* Oh, and by the way, I LOVE you name! Lilacs are my favorite flowers!
kawaiitenshisakura
*Sobs* THANKYOU! YOU HAVE INCOURAGED ME SO MUCH! *hugs* BTW, I read the first chapter of your story, but it wouldn't let me review. T'ain't that bad, girl! (Wait, you ARE a girl, aren't you??? I'd think it by your name...LOL) I just have a suggestion: When you do paragraphs, put a space inbetween each one. If you try to do it the normal way, it'll all just get cramped up.
Monique
Well, I'm updating right now, aren't I? lol. I love your name too! It's one of my favorite names. ^^
iii_sis
Well, it looks like I did write another, now, doesn't it? LOL! Thanks!
eva
Thanks, but I can't tell you! *winks*
Nightwings
More soon? More like more now! lol I LOOOOOOOVE Your name! (It seems I love everyone's name's these days, don't it?)
SJ
LOL! You forgot the 'e' at the end of 'update.' LOL! Don't worry, I do that all the time. ^^ And...WISH GRANTED! I'm updating right now. LOL!
Murasaki
Hehehehehe...of course I'm going to continue! ^^
Angela
Why wouldn't I write more? You've been so good to me that I wouldn't dream of not continuing!
Suki
Thank youso much for reading and liking this story! I'm so glad that you've reviewed!
All the reviewers
Thankyou soooooooo much! I've never gotten so many reviews on one chapter before. You don't know how much this means to me. I was so happy I thought my heart was going to burst! *cries* Thank you soooooooo much. I didn't think I'd get this chapter up till next week, but you changed my minds! Thankyou so much! I would run to the store and buy all of you roses if I wans't broke! THANKYOU!!!!!!!!
Ok, I just wanted to tell you that I wrote down all my ideas for each chapter on paper and what you are about to read is the first of an estimated fourteen chapters. And BTW, when you read, please keep an eye out for any mistakes. I don't wanna embarrass my self. ^^;;; Ok, if I made the author's notes any longer they'd be as long as the story, so I'll let you go now! Happy Reading! LOL
Fang of an Immortal
Chapter one
The Sorting Hat
"I'm so tired!" Sakura exclaimed as the students made their way up to the castle.
"Tired!" Tomoyo stared at Sakura. "You were asleep the second we got on the train, and slept till it was just about to leave! How can you be tired?!?!?!"
Sakura giggled and brushed her hair back behind her ear. Her hair was longer then when she was a kid. It was now about four inches below her collar bone and lately she'd been letting her straightened hair hang loose.
The students were too busy talking to notice the two new girls.
Sakura and Tomoyo stepped into the boat that would carry them across the lake to Hogwarts. They sat in the front, staring down into the water, wondering what was down there when they felt three new people climb in. They glanced over their shoulders and saw two boys and a girl their age. The girl had wavy brown hair down to her mid-back, one of the boys had bright red hair and the other had unruly black hair, eyes as green as Sakura's, glasses and an odd scar on his forehead.
"That's Harry potter!" Tomoyo whispered. Sakura just shrugged and kept her eyes on the dark water in the lake.
'There are immortals down there.' She thought, searching with her magic to find them and communicate with them. 'I wonder what kind. Nothing I've ever met before.'
"Sakura!" Tomoyo nudged her, braking into her thoughts, and Sakura nearly fell in.
"NANI?!?!?!" Sakura screamed.
"We're here!" Tomoyo said, embarrassed. Sakura quickly saw why. Everyone was staring at them.
"You shouldn't yell like that," Tomoyo whispered as they got out of the boat and started up toward the castle. Sakura just stared at her feet.
Once they were inside, Tomoyo quickly forgot the incident and was absorbed by interior of the castle.
"Quickly, to the Great Hall!" An old woman with a sharp stare said.
One by one the students piled in, leaving only the first years and the transfer students standing.
An old man with a mischevious gleam in is eye and a long white beard stood up.
"I'm sure you all know," said Dumbledoor, "That we have some transfer sudents. We will sort them first."
The woman, McGonagall, unfolded a piece of paper and started calling the names of the two transfer students. Or...was is three?
Sakura and Tomoyo expected to hear their names, but it was just the opposite.
"Hiiragaziwa, Eriol!"
"NANI?!?!?!" This time both Sakura and Tomoyo said it, but not loud enough for everyone to hear.
Eriol stepped forward, and looked over his shoulder, directly at Sakura and Tomoyo. They returned his stare and he smirked before apraching the sorting hat.
He sat down and placed it on his head. The hat didn't move. Then, after a few minutes, the sorting hat spoke.
"Hmmm...very hard...very hard indeed...You would do well in Slytherin...hmm...or maybe in Ravenclaw? What's this? You were Clow Reed in your past life?"
The school burst out in gasps and hushed whispers.
"I've decided." The hat finally said. "You are to be in...GRYFFINDOR!"
A cheer rang out and Eriol, with his 'sweet' smile on, made his way to the back of the table where a boy with chestnut hair and brown eyes sat.
"Next..." Professor McGonagall said, "Daidouji, Tomoyo!"
Sakura squeezed Tomoyo's hand and whispered 'good luck' and then watched as Tomoyo made her way to the sorting hat.
Remarks like "She's cute!" from the boys and "Look how perfect her posture is!" from the girls could be hear all over the Great Hall.
She had barely put the sorting hat on when it yelled, "GRYFFINDOR!"
Once again the Gryffindor table burst out in cheers as Tomoyo walked over to the table. But she stopped five feet away from it.
"You...you may take your seat, Miss Daidouji." McGonagall said.
"No thanks," Tomoyo said with a smile. "I would like to wait until my friend is sorted.
"Very...well..." McGonagall took a deep breath when she saw the next name on the list.
"Kinomoto, Sakura, Master of the Clow."
Now, some might have expected a reaction similar to when Harry was sorted (The Great Hall breaking out in whispers). But instead, the whole Hall fell completely silent as they watched the girl walk over to the stool. Wait, walking? It looked as if she were floating.
The silence was so great that it hurt Sakura's ears.
The second she put the hat on, it started talking.
"My, this is the hardest decision of my life. You are brave at heart, you are patient and you have wits, but you are also very cunning. Hmm...You would thrive in...no...yes...no,no,no..but...maybe..."
The whole Hall hung onto the hat's every word.
"I think...I have decided..." then the hat fell silent, as if pondering.
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"Sakura Kinomoto, you are to be..." The hat took a deep breath. "IN SLYTHERIN!"
AAAAAAAAAA!!! *is dieing from the evil glares that people are giving her* SOMETHING GOOD WILL COME OUT OF THIS, I PROMISE!!!!!!!!!!!! I mean, jeeze, what sort of story would this be if she was put in Slytherin? Whoops, did I say too much? *snickers* Oh, and sorry for the somewhat short chapter. I'll try to make the next one longer, k?
-$tephanie Lynn F. aka $harky
whoeverwastoolazytoputaname(j/k^^)
Thank you so much for being my first reviewer. I'd like to know your name the next time, though.
crystal-kitty2003
Thankyou so much! I always get reviews saying "put more up" but never reviews saying that that reviewer will definetly be back again! Thankyou!
Kouji Ishida, Tomoki Takashi
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! I like you guys! You took time to e-mail a lowly author who is only thirteen and has no meaning in life at the moment. ^^
KawaiinessPnay
LOL! You remind me of myself. All hyper one moment, then say one word to end the conversation. ^^ And yeah, I love CCS/HP crossovers too. ^____________^
fire_storm
*gasp* You...really...think...so? *Glomps fire_storm* WOW! SOMEONE WHO THINKS THAT I'M ACTUALLY WORTH SOMETHING! THANKYOU SO MUCH!!! Oh, and by the way, Sakura's *appearence* hasn't changed, it's her personality. The only outer difference is that Sakura's hair is just a little longer. ^^
ps: I LOVE your name! If you hadn't already claimed it, it would be my penname!!! LOL! *in a hushed whisper* I'm a pyromaniac. Shhhhhhhhhhhh!!! *cackles and sets her brother on fire* lol
sweetlilacblossom
THANKYOU!!!! Somebody thinks I should keep going!!! Unlike my so-called friends! *glares at ppl in her school* Oh, and by the way, I LOVE you name! Lilacs are my favorite flowers!
kawaiitenshisakura
*Sobs* THANKYOU! YOU HAVE INCOURAGED ME SO MUCH! *hugs* BTW, I read the first chapter of your story, but it wouldn't let me review. T'ain't that bad, girl! (Wait, you ARE a girl, aren't you??? I'd think it by your name...LOL) I just have a suggestion: When you do paragraphs, put a space inbetween each one. If you try to do it the normal way, it'll all just get cramped up.
Monique
Well, I'm updating right now, aren't I? lol. I love your name too! It's one of my favorite names. ^^
iii_sis
Well, it looks like I did write another, now, doesn't it? LOL! Thanks!
eva
Thanks, but I can't tell you! *winks*
Nightwings
More soon? More like more now! lol I LOOOOOOOVE Your name! (It seems I love everyone's name's these days, don't it?)
SJ
LOL! You forgot the 'e' at the end of 'update.' LOL! Don't worry, I do that all the time. ^^ And...WISH GRANTED! I'm updating right now. LOL!
Murasaki
Hehehehehe...of course I'm going to continue! ^^
Angela
Why wouldn't I write more? You've been so good to me that I wouldn't dream of not continuing!
Suki
Thank youso much for reading and liking this story! I'm so glad that you've reviewed!
All the reviewers
Thankyou soooooooo much! I've never gotten so many reviews on one chapter before. You don't know how much this means to me. I was so happy I thought my heart was going to burst! *cries* Thank you soooooooo much. I didn't think I'd get this chapter up till next week, but you changed my minds! Thankyou so much! I would run to the store and buy all of you roses if I wans't broke! THANKYOU!!!!!!!!
Ok, I just wanted to tell you that I wrote down all my ideas for each chapter on paper and what you are about to read is the first of an estimated fourteen chapters. And BTW, when you read, please keep an eye out for any mistakes. I don't wanna embarrass my self. ^^;;; Ok, if I made the author's notes any longer they'd be as long as the story, so I'll let you go now! Happy Reading! LOL
Fang of an Immortal
Chapter one
The Sorting Hat
"I'm so tired!" Sakura exclaimed as the students made their way up to the castle.
"Tired!" Tomoyo stared at Sakura. "You were asleep the second we got on the train, and slept till it was just about to leave! How can you be tired?!?!?!"
Sakura giggled and brushed her hair back behind her ear. Her hair was longer then when she was a kid. It was now about four inches below her collar bone and lately she'd been letting her straightened hair hang loose.
The students were too busy talking to notice the two new girls.
Sakura and Tomoyo stepped into the boat that would carry them across the lake to Hogwarts. They sat in the front, staring down into the water, wondering what was down there when they felt three new people climb in. They glanced over their shoulders and saw two boys and a girl their age. The girl had wavy brown hair down to her mid-back, one of the boys had bright red hair and the other had unruly black hair, eyes as green as Sakura's, glasses and an odd scar on his forehead.
"That's Harry potter!" Tomoyo whispered. Sakura just shrugged and kept her eyes on the dark water in the lake.
'There are immortals down there.' She thought, searching with her magic to find them and communicate with them. 'I wonder what kind. Nothing I've ever met before.'
"Sakura!" Tomoyo nudged her, braking into her thoughts, and Sakura nearly fell in.
"NANI?!?!?!" Sakura screamed.
"We're here!" Tomoyo said, embarrassed. Sakura quickly saw why. Everyone was staring at them.
"You shouldn't yell like that," Tomoyo whispered as they got out of the boat and started up toward the castle. Sakura just stared at her feet.
Once they were inside, Tomoyo quickly forgot the incident and was absorbed by interior of the castle.
"Quickly, to the Great Hall!" An old woman with a sharp stare said.
One by one the students piled in, leaving only the first years and the transfer students standing.
An old man with a mischevious gleam in is eye and a long white beard stood up.
"I'm sure you all know," said Dumbledoor, "That we have some transfer sudents. We will sort them first."
The woman, McGonagall, unfolded a piece of paper and started calling the names of the two transfer students. Or...was is three?
Sakura and Tomoyo expected to hear their names, but it was just the opposite.
"Hiiragaziwa, Eriol!"
"NANI?!?!?!" This time both Sakura and Tomoyo said it, but not loud enough for everyone to hear.
Eriol stepped forward, and looked over his shoulder, directly at Sakura and Tomoyo. They returned his stare and he smirked before apraching the sorting hat.
He sat down and placed it on his head. The hat didn't move. Then, after a few minutes, the sorting hat spoke.
"Hmmm...very hard...very hard indeed...You would do well in Slytherin...hmm...or maybe in Ravenclaw? What's this? You were Clow Reed in your past life?"
The school burst out in gasps and hushed whispers.
"I've decided." The hat finally said. "You are to be in...GRYFFINDOR!"
A cheer rang out and Eriol, with his 'sweet' smile on, made his way to the back of the table where a boy with chestnut hair and brown eyes sat.
"Next..." Professor McGonagall said, "Daidouji, Tomoyo!"
Sakura squeezed Tomoyo's hand and whispered 'good luck' and then watched as Tomoyo made her way to the sorting hat.
Remarks like "She's cute!" from the boys and "Look how perfect her posture is!" from the girls could be hear all over the Great Hall.
She had barely put the sorting hat on when it yelled, "GRYFFINDOR!"
Once again the Gryffindor table burst out in cheers as Tomoyo walked over to the table. But she stopped five feet away from it.
"You...you may take your seat, Miss Daidouji." McGonagall said.
"No thanks," Tomoyo said with a smile. "I would like to wait until my friend is sorted.
"Very...well..." McGonagall took a deep breath when she saw the next name on the list.
"Kinomoto, Sakura, Master of the Clow."
Now, some might have expected a reaction similar to when Harry was sorted (The Great Hall breaking out in whispers). But instead, the whole Hall fell completely silent as they watched the girl walk over to the stool. Wait, walking? It looked as if she were floating.
The silence was so great that it hurt Sakura's ears.
The second she put the hat on, it started talking.
"My, this is the hardest decision of my life. You are brave at heart, you are patient and you have wits, but you are also very cunning. Hmm...You would thrive in...no...yes...no,no,no..but...maybe..."
The whole Hall hung onto the hat's every word.
"I think...I have decided..." then the hat fell silent, as if pondering.
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...
...
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"Sakura Kinomoto, you are to be..." The hat took a deep breath. "IN SLYTHERIN!"
AAAAAAAAAA!!! *is dieing from the evil glares that people are giving her* SOMETHING GOOD WILL COME OUT OF THIS, I PROMISE!!!!!!!!!!!! I mean, jeeze, what sort of story would this be if she was put in Slytherin? Whoops, did I say too much? *snickers* Oh, and sorry for the somewhat short chapter. I'll try to make the next one longer, k?
-$tephanie Lynn F. aka $harky