I just want to answer a review from someone I got called Melissa:
Listen, I don't know if your review was meant as a flame or not, I just want to make myself clear now.
Maybe you should've read further before you started writing this. You know why? Cause I had someone to help me improve the third chapter, which you didn't read. People can improve you know, could you at least give me a chance, and see if my writing has gotten worse or better before you tell me this.
On the third chapter I even got a review from someone who told me that my writing was good! Just please, do me a favour and also look at the other chapter before you just give up on me the next time, alright?
Yes, my third chapter might still have a few mistakes. That happens to practically everyone, doesn't it?
I'm glad you like the other stuff. But what is left from the story if what you just said isn't good enough?
Bye,
Mysterygurl
Listen, I don't know if your review was meant as a flame or not, I just want to make myself clear now.
Maybe you should've read further before you started writing this. You know why? Cause I had someone to help me improve the third chapter, which you didn't read. People can improve you know, could you at least give me a chance, and see if my writing has gotten worse or better before you tell me this.
On the third chapter I even got a review from someone who told me that my writing was good! Just please, do me a favour and also look at the other chapter before you just give up on me the next time, alright?
Yes, my third chapter might still have a few mistakes. That happens to practically everyone, doesn't it?
I'm glad you like the other stuff. But what is left from the story if what you just said isn't good enough?
Bye,
Mysterygurl