A new begining
By: Hyper mage
I was wondering what it would be like to be a normal commoner and cooked up this weird little story, don't know what to do next though. I REALLY need some help, and this is kinda a way to get rid of a writers block that I've had for like 4 months. here it goes...
"I can't take it anymore I'm out of here, take your whores SOMEWHERE else" she stormed out of the house. She wouldn't put up with her drunken father anymore, everytime she came home from herjob at the Shouting Star her father was home with some slut he found somewhere, she had packed up her stuff and left the bizzare town of Outhere. [A/n I had no clue what else to call it] Rebecca was 15 years old and on stampede mode. her blonde hair flipping in the breeze, she got on her horse, eyesight, and went of into the forest, she knew exactly where she wanted to go, Corus, the place everyone talked about. Sure, she would problably never be famous or anything, but she just heard that things were better, there were schools there, and she wanted to learn how to read better.
Growing up in the town Outhere, she had learned that not everyone was nice. Her own father had beaten hser mother to death, and when her father was drunk beyond reason, he had tried to rape her. She told her best friend in the whole world, Clover, but she told her mother and her mother told her father and her father told Rebecca's father and her father beat her. Rebecca was forced to feed herself and find work when she was just 7, she was always thinking that her father would change, but it was obvious that he would never change. she remebered that one time when a girl, she had a dog and they talked a lot, she was very nice to her, and acted like she cared about her. The girls name was Lanna Swift, or as some people called her Drakness, she lived in the forest, grew up with her animals, they talked a lot, the one conversation that popped out more in her mind was the one they had a week before the the Clove was burned down, she was crying and was thinking of running away, she told Darkness, she looked at her with pleasure
"go right on ahead, I know what you have to go through, I won't tell a soul, we could meet up later on the road, if you want, it's not as easy as it looks, but not as hard eiher, good luck"
Later the Tavern was burned down and Darkness disapeared, some say she was taken away and killed, but Rebecca knew that darkness could never die, and she was the only one that knew that she was darkness. Remebering her life Rebecca made a promise to herself, she would find good work somewhere and forget about her past. Getting herself ready for a long ride, she held her head high and never looked back into the town of Outhere...
What do you think? Bizzare I know, but I don't know if I should continue this or not. I know it's short but that's because I'm not sure where I'm going with this. enjoy what is on now. Pleaze review if you think I should continue, if you read my other story, this is connected with Forgotten.
By: Hyper mage
I was wondering what it would be like to be a normal commoner and cooked up this weird little story, don't know what to do next though. I REALLY need some help, and this is kinda a way to get rid of a writers block that I've had for like 4 months. here it goes...
"I can't take it anymore I'm out of here, take your whores SOMEWHERE else" she stormed out of the house. She wouldn't put up with her drunken father anymore, everytime she came home from herjob at the Shouting Star her father was home with some slut he found somewhere, she had packed up her stuff and left the bizzare town of Outhere. [A/n I had no clue what else to call it] Rebecca was 15 years old and on stampede mode. her blonde hair flipping in the breeze, she got on her horse, eyesight, and went of into the forest, she knew exactly where she wanted to go, Corus, the place everyone talked about. Sure, she would problably never be famous or anything, but she just heard that things were better, there were schools there, and she wanted to learn how to read better.
Growing up in the town Outhere, she had learned that not everyone was nice. Her own father had beaten hser mother to death, and when her father was drunk beyond reason, he had tried to rape her. She told her best friend in the whole world, Clover, but she told her mother and her mother told her father and her father told Rebecca's father and her father beat her. Rebecca was forced to feed herself and find work when she was just 7, she was always thinking that her father would change, but it was obvious that he would never change. she remebered that one time when a girl, she had a dog and they talked a lot, she was very nice to her, and acted like she cared about her. The girls name was Lanna Swift, or as some people called her Drakness, she lived in the forest, grew up with her animals, they talked a lot, the one conversation that popped out more in her mind was the one they had a week before the the Clove was burned down, she was crying and was thinking of running away, she told Darkness, she looked at her with pleasure
"go right on ahead, I know what you have to go through, I won't tell a soul, we could meet up later on the road, if you want, it's not as easy as it looks, but not as hard eiher, good luck"
Later the Tavern was burned down and Darkness disapeared, some say she was taken away and killed, but Rebecca knew that darkness could never die, and she was the only one that knew that she was darkness. Remebering her life Rebecca made a promise to herself, she would find good work somewhere and forget about her past. Getting herself ready for a long ride, she held her head high and never looked back into the town of Outhere...
What do you think? Bizzare I know, but I don't know if I should continue this or not. I know it's short but that's because I'm not sure where I'm going with this. enjoy what is on now. Pleaze review if you think I should continue, if you read my other story, this is connected with Forgotten.