A new begining
BY: hyper mage
ok, I have some of this story figured out, for one thing ****spoiler up ahead, don't read unless you wanna know how the story ends, rebecca is going to die and baryl will team up with some1 from another story of mine end of spoiler**** and another is I want more reviews,
rebecca marched on to barony olau, she would get some apples and then travel north to see the world and teach baryl, who lay asleep on her lap. All this time she was thinking, what would she do? she had spent months with the theives, so she knew how to protect herself if she ever had to, she knew how to hunt and make a good fire, thanks to william.
Thinking about william made her cry, he had been so nice to her, but seeing him die was like seeing some of herself die. He had been kind, telling her his deepest secret, and trusting her instead of someone else with baryl.
That was another thing she had to think about, baryl. He was sweet as she had found out, but what would she do with him? She knew she had to take care of him, teach him things, but what was he going to become? Would she turn him into a theif? NO, he would not die like his father, he would live to a nice old age. She looked down at him, there was something about him, like he knew something she didn't, everytime she had tried to do something, he would now. Did he have the gift? should she leave him somewhere to become a mage. Maybe in the next town she would test him, then she would know what to do. They made camp and ate some fish she had caught in the river, he looked at her
"where are we going?" she looked at him
"we're going to stop at a town near barony Olau, then we'll head north to look around in the mountains, we'll live there for a while, in a town near the fief trebond, I think we should stay low for a while, who knows who is looking for us" baryl thought for a moment. he finished his fish and went to sleep, she took out the necklace she ad taken from william, he had told her a story once, about how he got it. He said he went into a mages room, and he took the necklace. When he was getting out, the mage went inside and told william to take it. He told him that it was a special thing that only the right person would be able to use it, william had tried but it would only bring him good luck. The mage had also said that it was made for a certain person, and that the necklace would somehow make it's way to them. rebecca put the necklace and went back to sleep.
Rebecca and baryl moved into a town in the middle of trebond and mindelan. Baryl grew to be a strong wielded person. but rebecca never told him more than that what he knew, never told him about her past, her father, her old town. Baryl, being who he was, knew something was there, but never asked her about it, knowing that there was something there that was too painful for her to want to remember.
Years passsed quickly, as Baryl started to develop his skills in pick pocketing, but made sure he never showed his mother, she had something against it.
"mom, I'm going out with Frank, be back in an hour or so,' baryl ran out the door and rebecca stayed home. It was years since the death of William. She missed him dearly, and Lanna too, it had ocourred to her that Lanna didn't know she had moved. Creature had left with Baryl, they were always together, it was as if Creature and Baryl were the same person, both were patient, graceful and very smart. Baryl barely ever got in trouble, but rebecca knew that he would follow his father's footsteps, even though she had made sure he knew almost nothing about him. rebecca sighed and took out the necklace. She was getting restless, so she got up and went for a walk. She moved around and looked at the people she had learned to love. There was mr. ecter, the baker and ms. mcgosser, the weaver. They didn't know that the woman that had moved in to their town almost 13 years ago was the old angel they think died when the thieves hideplace was attacked, leaving the thieving world crippled and broken. Now and then she picked a pocket, using the grace she knew she possessed. Unlucky for her, another thief saw her.
Baryl stared at his mother, she slipped her hand into a man purse and produced 10 gold nobles. He jaw dropped. His mom, picking a pocket. The same woman who wouldn't let him even say thief. He showed Frank.
" forMithros sake, your old lady is stealing Are you sure it's her?" Frank and Baryl moved silently in the crowd.
"I'm pretty sure it's her. She's the only one who has that necklace and nasty slash on her arm. Do you know what this means? That that place I went with her when I first met her was the Dancing dove. Could she be a thief?" Frank looked at him skeptically
"o' course she is. Who else would she be? Damn, my best's friend moter could even be angel. wow, and I bet you that's the necklace that she took from william the old king, bless his soul." Baryl's interest was caught when he said william.
"tell me the story, I didn't hear that one," Frank gave him another look.
"well, william was the king of thieves, and he had a necklace for luck, well he had a son, and the necklace wasn't giving him any luck, so he deicided to kill himself and make it look like an accident. As the story goes, he was saved by a woman with flowing blond hair and intence eyes. They said that she had come as a sign for the king," Frank told him the rest. How the king named her angel and how no one knew more than that. Then the attack happened, the surviving thieves wanted her to take the crown, but they never found her, or her body.
"but how couldn't they?"
"well, ther found things that she had done, like they know she went to get her things. And they say that the king's son was with her. But he didn't knowthat his father had died. They say that they're still looking for her, to revenge the death of the king and how she left the thief world almost dead." rebecca moved on and walked into an alley. Frank and Baryl climbed up and looker at her from the roof.
Rebecca cried. She was sadder then usual. It looked like useless habits didn't die easily.
"oh william, whydid you have to go" Frank shook his head
"yep, she's her all right, but they never saud she was so dependent on him." Baryl could see his mother was in a bad mood.
"But look at all the things she's done. For me, for my father"
"Still, she's gotten rusty. They used to say that the moment someone was following her, she knew, unless she was thinking a lot." Rebecca looked up as if that was a cue.
"Don't think that I've lost my touch frank, I knew you were following me since the 10 nobles. Please come down,. both of you" baryl came down first, frank came down slower, feeling humiliated"mom, why didn't you ever tell me? I could have taken it, it's not like I'm stupid or anything," rebecca looked up and sighed.
"oh dear baryl, it's not that. I didn't want that for you. Your'e didfrent, I didn't want you hurt more than what you had been hurt with that man." Frank looked at rebecca
"William is said to have been dear and a wonderful man to his followers, especially you. Why do you say that william ever did anything wrong to baryl," Baryl looked at frank
"She isn't talking abut my real father. she's talking about the man my real mother left me with" Frank's eyes widened.
"you mean... she's not you real mother? and whose the other man." Bar4yl told him. It was impresive how much he had remebered from so long age. Rebecca got up and sretched.
"well, is you young people don't mind. I would like to go home before dark." Baryl stopped her before she left the alley
"what do you mean? I want to stay here and learn more." rebecca shook her head.
"weren't you listening to your friend over there? I am being hunted. I've known that forever. That's why I came over here. To get away from them and raise you out of all that. now if you don't mind, you can stay here and I'll cook dinner. see you later frank." she left and went home, baryl shook his head
"angel, the famous thief, one of the most famous in all corus is my mom. see you later frank, I'm goiing to pick some pockets and get my mind off this." Baryl walked down the street. But Frank walked the other way, he went into a tavern and asked to see someone. He was sent to another room where he met a man.
"your majesty, you were correct, she is here. hidding at home right now, with her son." Nathan came out of the shadows, quickly he took out his knife and stabbed frank, him dying instantly. Nathan smiled.
"good I shall pay a visit soon. Finishing what I've started so long ago." he crept back into his shadows, planing on how he would dispose of the only thing keeping him from the crown, baryl
Mwahahahahah I'm sooooooo evil. If you don't understand the last part, it goes like this. After rebecca left with baryl, everyone looked for her, but they couldn't find the body. So some of them accepted her as dead, others were still faithful to her, and they're the ones who believed that either she should rule, or baryl, since they were the ones william had trusted. nathan needed these people too, so he told them he was going to come back and show them once and for all that their "precious" person was dead. So he sent frank over there and he had a suspicion that she was angel, so he became friends with william. and so on. review pleaze, I really want to finsh this story and start on my next one, which will of course have more blood and death mwahahahahahaha. tehe
BY: hyper mage
ok, I have some of this story figured out, for one thing ****spoiler up ahead, don't read unless you wanna know how the story ends, rebecca is going to die and baryl will team up with some1 from another story of mine end of spoiler**** and another is I want more reviews,
rebecca marched on to barony olau, she would get some apples and then travel north to see the world and teach baryl, who lay asleep on her lap. All this time she was thinking, what would she do? she had spent months with the theives, so she knew how to protect herself if she ever had to, she knew how to hunt and make a good fire, thanks to william.
Thinking about william made her cry, he had been so nice to her, but seeing him die was like seeing some of herself die. He had been kind, telling her his deepest secret, and trusting her instead of someone else with baryl.
That was another thing she had to think about, baryl. He was sweet as she had found out, but what would she do with him? She knew she had to take care of him, teach him things, but what was he going to become? Would she turn him into a theif? NO, he would not die like his father, he would live to a nice old age. She looked down at him, there was something about him, like he knew something she didn't, everytime she had tried to do something, he would now. Did he have the gift? should she leave him somewhere to become a mage. Maybe in the next town she would test him, then she would know what to do. They made camp and ate some fish she had caught in the river, he looked at her
"where are we going?" she looked at him
"we're going to stop at a town near barony Olau, then we'll head north to look around in the mountains, we'll live there for a while, in a town near the fief trebond, I think we should stay low for a while, who knows who is looking for us" baryl thought for a moment. he finished his fish and went to sleep, she took out the necklace she ad taken from william, he had told her a story once, about how he got it. He said he went into a mages room, and he took the necklace. When he was getting out, the mage went inside and told william to take it. He told him that it was a special thing that only the right person would be able to use it, william had tried but it would only bring him good luck. The mage had also said that it was made for a certain person, and that the necklace would somehow make it's way to them. rebecca put the necklace and went back to sleep.
Rebecca and baryl moved into a town in the middle of trebond and mindelan. Baryl grew to be a strong wielded person. but rebecca never told him more than that what he knew, never told him about her past, her father, her old town. Baryl, being who he was, knew something was there, but never asked her about it, knowing that there was something there that was too painful for her to want to remember.
Years passsed quickly, as Baryl started to develop his skills in pick pocketing, but made sure he never showed his mother, she had something against it.
"mom, I'm going out with Frank, be back in an hour or so,' baryl ran out the door and rebecca stayed home. It was years since the death of William. She missed him dearly, and Lanna too, it had ocourred to her that Lanna didn't know she had moved. Creature had left with Baryl, they were always together, it was as if Creature and Baryl were the same person, both were patient, graceful and very smart. Baryl barely ever got in trouble, but rebecca knew that he would follow his father's footsteps, even though she had made sure he knew almost nothing about him. rebecca sighed and took out the necklace. She was getting restless, so she got up and went for a walk. She moved around and looked at the people she had learned to love. There was mr. ecter, the baker and ms. mcgosser, the weaver. They didn't know that the woman that had moved in to their town almost 13 years ago was the old angel they think died when the thieves hideplace was attacked, leaving the thieving world crippled and broken. Now and then she picked a pocket, using the grace she knew she possessed. Unlucky for her, another thief saw her.
Baryl stared at his mother, she slipped her hand into a man purse and produced 10 gold nobles. He jaw dropped. His mom, picking a pocket. The same woman who wouldn't let him even say thief. He showed Frank.
" forMithros sake, your old lady is stealing Are you sure it's her?" Frank and Baryl moved silently in the crowd.
"I'm pretty sure it's her. She's the only one who has that necklace and nasty slash on her arm. Do you know what this means? That that place I went with her when I first met her was the Dancing dove. Could she be a thief?" Frank looked at him skeptically
"o' course she is. Who else would she be? Damn, my best's friend moter could even be angel. wow, and I bet you that's the necklace that she took from william the old king, bless his soul." Baryl's interest was caught when he said william.
"tell me the story, I didn't hear that one," Frank gave him another look.
"well, william was the king of thieves, and he had a necklace for luck, well he had a son, and the necklace wasn't giving him any luck, so he deicided to kill himself and make it look like an accident. As the story goes, he was saved by a woman with flowing blond hair and intence eyes. They said that she had come as a sign for the king," Frank told him the rest. How the king named her angel and how no one knew more than that. Then the attack happened, the surviving thieves wanted her to take the crown, but they never found her, or her body.
"but how couldn't they?"
"well, ther found things that she had done, like they know she went to get her things. And they say that the king's son was with her. But he didn't knowthat his father had died. They say that they're still looking for her, to revenge the death of the king and how she left the thief world almost dead." rebecca moved on and walked into an alley. Frank and Baryl climbed up and looker at her from the roof.
Rebecca cried. She was sadder then usual. It looked like useless habits didn't die easily.
"oh william, whydid you have to go" Frank shook his head
"yep, she's her all right, but they never saud she was so dependent on him." Baryl could see his mother was in a bad mood.
"But look at all the things she's done. For me, for my father"
"Still, she's gotten rusty. They used to say that the moment someone was following her, she knew, unless she was thinking a lot." Rebecca looked up as if that was a cue.
"Don't think that I've lost my touch frank, I knew you were following me since the 10 nobles. Please come down,. both of you" baryl came down first, frank came down slower, feeling humiliated"mom, why didn't you ever tell me? I could have taken it, it's not like I'm stupid or anything," rebecca looked up and sighed.
"oh dear baryl, it's not that. I didn't want that for you. Your'e didfrent, I didn't want you hurt more than what you had been hurt with that man." Frank looked at rebecca
"William is said to have been dear and a wonderful man to his followers, especially you. Why do you say that william ever did anything wrong to baryl," Baryl looked at frank
"She isn't talking abut my real father. she's talking about the man my real mother left me with" Frank's eyes widened.
"you mean... she's not you real mother? and whose the other man." Bar4yl told him. It was impresive how much he had remebered from so long age. Rebecca got up and sretched.
"well, is you young people don't mind. I would like to go home before dark." Baryl stopped her before she left the alley
"what do you mean? I want to stay here and learn more." rebecca shook her head.
"weren't you listening to your friend over there? I am being hunted. I've known that forever. That's why I came over here. To get away from them and raise you out of all that. now if you don't mind, you can stay here and I'll cook dinner. see you later frank." she left and went home, baryl shook his head
"angel, the famous thief, one of the most famous in all corus is my mom. see you later frank, I'm goiing to pick some pockets and get my mind off this." Baryl walked down the street. But Frank walked the other way, he went into a tavern and asked to see someone. He was sent to another room where he met a man.
"your majesty, you were correct, she is here. hidding at home right now, with her son." Nathan came out of the shadows, quickly he took out his knife and stabbed frank, him dying instantly. Nathan smiled.
"good I shall pay a visit soon. Finishing what I've started so long ago." he crept back into his shadows, planing on how he would dispose of the only thing keeping him from the crown, baryl
Mwahahahahah I'm sooooooo evil. If you don't understand the last part, it goes like this. After rebecca left with baryl, everyone looked for her, but they couldn't find the body. So some of them accepted her as dead, others were still faithful to her, and they're the ones who believed that either she should rule, or baryl, since they were the ones william had trusted. nathan needed these people too, so he told them he was going to come back and show them once and for all that their "precious" person was dead. So he sent frank over there and he had a suspicion that she was angel, so he became friends with william. and so on. review pleaze, I really want to finsh this story and start on my next one, which will of course have more blood and death mwahahahahahaha. tehe