OK then. I've been away from my comp for the last little while and just got on about 30 mins ago to this flood of reviews. I think it would be in the best interests of all who care that I remove this story from FF.net. It is obvious that I have severely offended certain people and for that I am sorry. I attempted a story that was clearly out of my league, I tried it and I found that it didn't work. So those of you that sent me flames (not constructive criticism) I'm sorry I'm not the stellar person u want me to be, but hey, I'm just one more person on the internet, right? I have never heard of the book "Silmarillion", and my Microsoft Word automatically spellchecked the "elven" to "Elvin" *hey look at the red squiggly line under Elven* So those of you that are interested in reading this story solely for entertaining purposes and not to learn about the Valar (not gods remember, but Valar) I am continueing to write this story for my own enjoyment, and I will not post anymore chapters up here, if u want to get in contact with me and have me e-mail u the next few chapters, u know my e-mail is on my profile.
Once again I'm sorry this offended many people, in a few days, I will fully remove this story from the site, and it will never darken your doorstep again.
Thanks to those who told me continue, I needed the support, b/c there are some people in this world who need that kind of thing, personally I need reviews b/c I have low self esteem and I am not a confident person in my writing, that's the blatant truth. Theres things I'm better at, but I do enjoy writing. Well. I open myself to all the blows you throw my way, just watch the bruises that u made with your reviews, those are tender areas.
Cheers, Bubbles