Chapter 2: New Enemies
"STOP IT! I'm not a little kid anymore," Chiori yelled as her body shook with anger.
"Who do you think you are talking to me like that?" Yusuke yelled back.
"Someone stronger than you ever were," Chiori yelled, "admit it, you never liked me as much as Cheie because you could sense how strong my spirit energy was and you were jealous!"
Kuwabara, Hiei, Koenma, Kurama, and Cheie watched from the side as the two fought.
"You know she does have a point. I can feel a considerable amount of energy coming from her, more energy than Yusuke ever had," Kurama said coolly.
Hearing a small outward sigh beside him Hiei looked down at the small girl that stood close beside him. Her hair and eyes were a light brown and her small body looked like it would break at any moment. She was dressed in a small white shirt that had dancing bears printed on it with matching shorts and sneakers. On her back hung a loose bag. There was almost no resemblance between her and Yusuke but more of a resemblance between a woman Hiei had meet once that he assumed was her mother. A small scowl was spread across her face as she watched her sister and father fight. Looking up Hiei focused his attention on the frenzied girl before him. She had long black hair that was tied up into a high ponytail and had dark deep-set eyes. Her resemblance towards Yusuke was unmistakable. Unlike her sister her body was built more full, even under her cloak Hiei could tell she was the essence of human beauty.
A sharp scream punctured Hiei's ears as the small girl was scooped up into the arms of a massive Youkai. 'Damn it how could I have let that fat lard skip past my senses' Hiei thought to himself.
"DADDY DADDY HELP," Cheie screamed as she swung back and forth by her leg.
"Ha ha look what I caught mommy," said the overly seized demon who was followed close by a small old lady.
"PUT HER DOWN," Yusuke screamed.
"Ha ha make me little man," the demon said smiling, showing off his crooked teeth.
"Now now my son is only having a little fun before he kills her, what is the harm in that," the little old lady said through beady eyes.
"WHAT'S THE HARM IN... GRANDMA I AM IN NO MOOD," Yusuke shouted.
"Little man should not yell at big mama," the youkai said.
"Just shut up and do what he says," Chiori said.
"Little woman with big mouth pretty," the Youkai said, as he looked Chiori up and down, liking what he saw.
"The great Zing-po make little woman his," Zing-po said as he threw Cheie into the surrounding woods and picked up Chiori by the neck.
"CHEIE," Yusuke said as he started to run but only to be stopped by a strong force holding his body.
"No no," the old woman said shaking her crooked finger in front of Yusuke's face.
"Why you old bat," Yusuke said struggling to get out of her hold.
"Hey," Kuwabara said stepping forewords but only to be stopped by the same force.
"Kuwabara," Kurama said trying to aid him.
"Hold it right there," the old lady said as she caught him as well, "I could have sworn there was two more of you.then again they are probably running for their lives."
~~~~~~~ Hiei stood in the woods over looking the problem with little Cheie unconscious in his arms. He had taken the time when no one was looking to slip away.. 'It figures that Koenma would disappear when a fight is about to start,' Hiei thought to himself. Carefully he placed the little girl on the ground making sure she was well hidden from view from any passing demons. Slowly he crept up behind the big Zing-po. Jumping on to his back Hiei unsheathed his sword and placed the tip directly between the skull and the spin.
"Let everyone go our your son dies," Hiei said.
"What." the old lady said turning around, "how dare you."
Slowly the old lady raised her hands. As she raised them Hiei was levitated into the air.
"You don't need that anymore," the old lady said as she moved a finger making Hiei's sword fly out of his grasp into the ground. With a wave of her hand Hiei was thrown across the clearing into a tree. As soon as he hit the tree the ground beneath him began to shake vigorously.
"I'd like you to meet my pet," The old lady said smiling at Hiei, "With each moment that passes it's grip around you gets tighter and as it gets tighter it sucks every bit of your spirit energy out of you and transfers it to me."
Hiei looked down at the earth slowly a plant like creature pushed its way through the earth's surface wrapping its self tightly around himself and the tree.
"And you call your self's men, you can't even take care of a granny and her over sized son who's brain is to small for its fat body to know what to do," Chiori said through gritted teeth as she swung back and forth.
"I'd like to see you do better," Yusuke said still struggling to get free of the old lady's grasp.
"Well then I guess it's up to the woman to save the day once again," Chiori said sarcastically as she reached out and grabbed the Youkai in the eye. Quickly Chiori pushed her spirit energy into her fingers and shouted, "SPIRIT FINGERS!" A blue light erupted from her fingers burning the Youkai's eye making him drop her to the ground hard.
"How dare you hurt my son," the old lady said as she pointed her finger at Chiori, catching her in the same web as the others.
"You stupid old hag," Chiori said.
The same blue light from before formed around Chiori's body as she adsorbed the old lady's attack. Smiling Chiori stood free of the old lady's grip in her hand she held a small sphere of blue energy. Quickly Chiori threw the ball at the old lady catching her with her own trick. Blue rings of energy swirled around the old lady's body prohibiting her to move.
"How did you.you're just a stupid human."the old lady said confused.
"Never underestimate the power of a human," Chiori said smiling as she pointed to the big Zing-po, "now release everyone or the other eye goes."
"Very well," the old lady said as she released her power making everyone fall to their knees. As soon as the power over the others was gone the ring around the old lady disappeared.
"Until next time," Chiori said smiling.
"Next time will be different and I'll make sure you'll know it," the old lady said as she and her son disappeared into the dark woods.
As soon as they were gone Hiei limped out of the woods back into the clearing with Cheie in his arms.
"Here, she will be out for a while," Hiei said placing her into Chiori's arms.
~~~~~~~You know what.I think this chapter sucked. I think that's because the second chapter is the hardest to write, at least to me. What did you guys think about it? Tell me honestly, if you think I should change something, add something, anything.come on people tell me!
"STOP IT! I'm not a little kid anymore," Chiori yelled as her body shook with anger.
"Who do you think you are talking to me like that?" Yusuke yelled back.
"Someone stronger than you ever were," Chiori yelled, "admit it, you never liked me as much as Cheie because you could sense how strong my spirit energy was and you were jealous!"
Kuwabara, Hiei, Koenma, Kurama, and Cheie watched from the side as the two fought.
"You know she does have a point. I can feel a considerable amount of energy coming from her, more energy than Yusuke ever had," Kurama said coolly.
Hearing a small outward sigh beside him Hiei looked down at the small girl that stood close beside him. Her hair and eyes were a light brown and her small body looked like it would break at any moment. She was dressed in a small white shirt that had dancing bears printed on it with matching shorts and sneakers. On her back hung a loose bag. There was almost no resemblance between her and Yusuke but more of a resemblance between a woman Hiei had meet once that he assumed was her mother. A small scowl was spread across her face as she watched her sister and father fight. Looking up Hiei focused his attention on the frenzied girl before him. She had long black hair that was tied up into a high ponytail and had dark deep-set eyes. Her resemblance towards Yusuke was unmistakable. Unlike her sister her body was built more full, even under her cloak Hiei could tell she was the essence of human beauty.
A sharp scream punctured Hiei's ears as the small girl was scooped up into the arms of a massive Youkai. 'Damn it how could I have let that fat lard skip past my senses' Hiei thought to himself.
"DADDY DADDY HELP," Cheie screamed as she swung back and forth by her leg.
"Ha ha look what I caught mommy," said the overly seized demon who was followed close by a small old lady.
"PUT HER DOWN," Yusuke screamed.
"Ha ha make me little man," the demon said smiling, showing off his crooked teeth.
"Now now my son is only having a little fun before he kills her, what is the harm in that," the little old lady said through beady eyes.
"WHAT'S THE HARM IN... GRANDMA I AM IN NO MOOD," Yusuke shouted.
"Little man should not yell at big mama," the youkai said.
"Just shut up and do what he says," Chiori said.
"Little woman with big mouth pretty," the Youkai said, as he looked Chiori up and down, liking what he saw.
"The great Zing-po make little woman his," Zing-po said as he threw Cheie into the surrounding woods and picked up Chiori by the neck.
"CHEIE," Yusuke said as he started to run but only to be stopped by a strong force holding his body.
"No no," the old woman said shaking her crooked finger in front of Yusuke's face.
"Why you old bat," Yusuke said struggling to get out of her hold.
"Hey," Kuwabara said stepping forewords but only to be stopped by the same force.
"Kuwabara," Kurama said trying to aid him.
"Hold it right there," the old lady said as she caught him as well, "I could have sworn there was two more of you.then again they are probably running for their lives."
~~~~~~~ Hiei stood in the woods over looking the problem with little Cheie unconscious in his arms. He had taken the time when no one was looking to slip away.. 'It figures that Koenma would disappear when a fight is about to start,' Hiei thought to himself. Carefully he placed the little girl on the ground making sure she was well hidden from view from any passing demons. Slowly he crept up behind the big Zing-po. Jumping on to his back Hiei unsheathed his sword and placed the tip directly between the skull and the spin.
"Let everyone go our your son dies," Hiei said.
"What." the old lady said turning around, "how dare you."
Slowly the old lady raised her hands. As she raised them Hiei was levitated into the air.
"You don't need that anymore," the old lady said as she moved a finger making Hiei's sword fly out of his grasp into the ground. With a wave of her hand Hiei was thrown across the clearing into a tree. As soon as he hit the tree the ground beneath him began to shake vigorously.
"I'd like you to meet my pet," The old lady said smiling at Hiei, "With each moment that passes it's grip around you gets tighter and as it gets tighter it sucks every bit of your spirit energy out of you and transfers it to me."
Hiei looked down at the earth slowly a plant like creature pushed its way through the earth's surface wrapping its self tightly around himself and the tree.
"And you call your self's men, you can't even take care of a granny and her over sized son who's brain is to small for its fat body to know what to do," Chiori said through gritted teeth as she swung back and forth.
"I'd like to see you do better," Yusuke said still struggling to get free of the old lady's grasp.
"Well then I guess it's up to the woman to save the day once again," Chiori said sarcastically as she reached out and grabbed the Youkai in the eye. Quickly Chiori pushed her spirit energy into her fingers and shouted, "SPIRIT FINGERS!" A blue light erupted from her fingers burning the Youkai's eye making him drop her to the ground hard.
"How dare you hurt my son," the old lady said as she pointed her finger at Chiori, catching her in the same web as the others.
"You stupid old hag," Chiori said.
The same blue light from before formed around Chiori's body as she adsorbed the old lady's attack. Smiling Chiori stood free of the old lady's grip in her hand she held a small sphere of blue energy. Quickly Chiori threw the ball at the old lady catching her with her own trick. Blue rings of energy swirled around the old lady's body prohibiting her to move.
"How did you.you're just a stupid human."the old lady said confused.
"Never underestimate the power of a human," Chiori said smiling as she pointed to the big Zing-po, "now release everyone or the other eye goes."
"Very well," the old lady said as she released her power making everyone fall to their knees. As soon as the power over the others was gone the ring around the old lady disappeared.
"Until next time," Chiori said smiling.
"Next time will be different and I'll make sure you'll know it," the old lady said as she and her son disappeared into the dark woods.
As soon as they were gone Hiei limped out of the woods back into the clearing with Cheie in his arms.
"Here, she will be out for a while," Hiei said placing her into Chiori's arms.
~~~~~~~You know what.I think this chapter sucked. I think that's because the second chapter is the hardest to write, at least to me. What did you guys think about it? Tell me honestly, if you think I should change something, add something, anything.come on people tell me!