Sorrysorrysorrysorry! I know I haven't updated in forever! I just got
sidetracked from other stories and having a writers block doesn't help
much. Anyways, I have one new character so far, Geonah. She will appear in
the next chapter which I am currently writing. Well, let the story begin!
Disclaimer: Demon_Heart1 does Not own YYH or Busch Gardens. But she does own Asakura.
Warnings: BAD grammar, hopefully better spelling, and cussing.
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Chapter 2: Sprit Detective Asakura
"Let me out!" Hiei yelled as he continued to bang on the front gates. "Hiei, they won't open so will you do us a favor and shut it?" Kurama asked. He, Yusuke, and Kuabara had been watching this scenario go on for the past hour. So far none of their attacks of weapons had been able to penetrate that damn gate! "Fine then" Hiei stated, slightly panting "I'll just jump over!" He was right above the gate when a bolt of lightning came straight up and hit him, throwing him back into the park. "Hiei!" the others yelled and rushed over to their fallen, erm, friend. "What. Was. That?" Hiei asked, twitching every few seconds. "Approximately 500 volts of electricity and Sprit engry rushing through your body. That same trick is planted all over this park and I wouldn't try that again" a voice stated behind them. "Gah!!" the four boys yelled, turning around, Sprit gun, sword, Kata, and Rose Whip at the ready, to see a girl standing there. She was about Hieis height, maybe a bit shorter, with Ice blue eyes, pale skin, and long silver hair. She was wearing baggy black jeans, a black T-shirt with a red dragon on the front and tennis shoes. Hiei glared at her before asking, "And just who the hell are you?" she looked at the four with their confused looks on their faces and let out a little laugh "So sorry. How rude of me. My name is Asakura, Ice Apparition and Sprit Detective for King Yama(A/N: I cant remember if it's Yama or Yami)" Hiei had to hold back a laugh at the expression on Yusukes face. "What are you talking about? I'm the Sprit Detective for King Yama!" Yusuke yelled in a 'What are ya nuts?' tone of voice. "No, no, no, You're Koenmas Sprit Detective" Asakura smirked, "Well, Well" was all that Yusuke could say, not even he had a comeback for that. Kurema decided to break the awkward silence that had fallen by asking "Soo. Why are you here?" Asakura looked him up and down suspialously and sighed, "I am disappointed to announced that this particular Busch Gardens has been bought by" a shiver ran down her spine "Karsu." Yusuke and Kuabara looked stunned, Hiei had an empty look on his face and Kurema looked sickened. Shivers ran down all of their spines.
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A/N: Sooooooo, how did ya like it? Sorry if it stunk and the next chapter will be up soon. STILL NEED MORE CHARACTERS!!! Pleaz review. ^___^
Disclaimer: Demon_Heart1 does Not own YYH or Busch Gardens. But she does own Asakura.
Warnings: BAD grammar, hopefully better spelling, and cussing.
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Chapter 2: Sprit Detective Asakura
"Let me out!" Hiei yelled as he continued to bang on the front gates. "Hiei, they won't open so will you do us a favor and shut it?" Kurama asked. He, Yusuke, and Kuabara had been watching this scenario go on for the past hour. So far none of their attacks of weapons had been able to penetrate that damn gate! "Fine then" Hiei stated, slightly panting "I'll just jump over!" He was right above the gate when a bolt of lightning came straight up and hit him, throwing him back into the park. "Hiei!" the others yelled and rushed over to their fallen, erm, friend. "What. Was. That?" Hiei asked, twitching every few seconds. "Approximately 500 volts of electricity and Sprit engry rushing through your body. That same trick is planted all over this park and I wouldn't try that again" a voice stated behind them. "Gah!!" the four boys yelled, turning around, Sprit gun, sword, Kata, and Rose Whip at the ready, to see a girl standing there. She was about Hieis height, maybe a bit shorter, with Ice blue eyes, pale skin, and long silver hair. She was wearing baggy black jeans, a black T-shirt with a red dragon on the front and tennis shoes. Hiei glared at her before asking, "And just who the hell are you?" she looked at the four with their confused looks on their faces and let out a little laugh "So sorry. How rude of me. My name is Asakura, Ice Apparition and Sprit Detective for King Yama(A/N: I cant remember if it's Yama or Yami)" Hiei had to hold back a laugh at the expression on Yusukes face. "What are you talking about? I'm the Sprit Detective for King Yama!" Yusuke yelled in a 'What are ya nuts?' tone of voice. "No, no, no, You're Koenmas Sprit Detective" Asakura smirked, "Well, Well" was all that Yusuke could say, not even he had a comeback for that. Kurema decided to break the awkward silence that had fallen by asking "Soo. Why are you here?" Asakura looked him up and down suspialously and sighed, "I am disappointed to announced that this particular Busch Gardens has been bought by" a shiver ran down her spine "Karsu." Yusuke and Kuabara looked stunned, Hiei had an empty look on his face and Kurema looked sickened. Shivers ran down all of their spines.
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A/N: Sooooooo, how did ya like it? Sorry if it stunk and the next chapter will be up soon. STILL NEED MORE CHARACTERS!!! Pleaz review. ^___^