Thanx for the reviews guys! They're really the only things that are keeping me going. I've got most of the story planned out already but after this really short chapter (sorry about that btw, this just seemed like the only good place for a cut off) the rest of the chapters should be much bigger. It's going to be really hard to keep up with once AP English gets going but as long as there is at least one person interested in it I'll do my best to keep it up. Thank you again! And if you have any suggestions, corrections, or anything else that u think might help the story along please let me know! Thanx!!!!! sooooooo…without further ado here is the really short chapter!
Chapter 3
Pain…
Throbbing…
Falling…
He was falling…
Slowly Heero pried his eyes open. He was still inside his Gundam for all he could tell. It was so dark. The mission was in the morning how could it be dark now? Have I been out of it all day? But before he could even attempt to answer his question he remembered something. He was still falling, albeit slowly but he was definitely falling. He reached out and grabbed the controls. Nothing responded. "Damn!"
"HAHAHAHA!"
Heero jumped completely startled by the laughter. "What the hell was that?"
"EEEEEHEHEHEHEHEEEE!"
There it was again. Heero squinted at his monitor trying to make out whatever it was that was laughing. At first it just looked like a big gray blob. But as he continued to fall the picture became clearer and clearer, until the perfectly formed face of Relena was staring back at him.
"RELENA, WHAT IN THE WORLD DO YOU THINK YOUR DOING?! GET OFF THIS COM LINK RIGHT NOW! "
"HEEE HEEE HEEE HEEEEEEEEEE!" Relena only cackled in response. It was then that Heero realized just what the girl was sitting on. A broomstick? At the exact moment Heero thought that, Relena lashed out at him taking her broomstick and swinging it with all she had. He waited…waited?… for what? He wondered. What kind of damage would a broomstick inflict on a Gundam? I always though that girl wasn't mentally stable. Heero judged by the fact that nothing had happened that she had missed. She was just sitting there, on her broomstick again staring at him and still laughing. He was about to open his mouth and saying something when, just as suddenly as she had appeared, the image was gone.
"RELENA!" Heero screamed at the top of his lungs. He had no idea what was going on and he needed someone to either help him or explain and if Relena was the only one here to do it, then so be it. He would shout her name, but there was no way in hell that he would enjoy it. Just as he was about to scream again he slammed into something solid. The Gundam had stopped. I guess I landed somewhere but I still can't see anything so there's no way to tell. I could be in enemy territory. He reached for the self-destruct button. Better hold onto this, just in case. Wait, no that won't work, I haven't got any power. Ah well, guess I don't have much of a choice now. I can't live in here. As Heero went to stand up his head started to throb again. Aw man, guess that Relena bit took my mind off the pain. I'll have to have to check it out as soon as I get some light around here. He stood up a bit slower this time so he wouldn't jar his head too much. "There we go," he sighed. Now I just have to get this door open. Oddly enough the door popped open the moment he laid his hand on it. He hadn't turned the latch. Hmmmm…well it's nothing to be worried about I guess. Compared to a deranged Relena on a stick this is nothing. Heero placed both of his hands on the door and lifted it the rest of the way up. The light was so bright outside that he was temporarily blinded. But the moment his eyes began to register what was in front of him, he could hardly believe it was real.
"Wing," he said quietly. "I have a feeling we're not in outer space anymore…"
Yeah yeah that line is so cliché I know…but it's a classic. U gotta at least have a few of them in there. REVIEW REVIEW REVIEW!!!
And for those of you who have already:
Violet Yuy-Maxwell- I do plan on keeping some seriousness in it if possible because despite the fact it's supposed to be a funny, completely random dream for Heero I also want him to get something out of it. (As Dorothy does in the original.) This at least is my intention but I have no idea how capable I am as an author so please let me know if u don't feel that coming across at times. (It might not be there a lot at first but as the dream goes on it should become more apparent.) I'm totally new at this and sometimes the ideas don't always come out like I had hoped once I get typin. Thanx for the review!
Karasu yami- haha the songs are coming up I promise!!! The next chap will have one. I only hope everyone else likes them as much as you do… luv ya babe!!!!
And to the rest of you thank you so much for your input! I hope that u enjoy reading this story as much as I'm enjoying writing it!!!
