Ok, here is a story my brother wrote when he was about nine years old. I just found it, and thought it was cute, so I decided to revise and post it. Enjoy!!
The Three Pigs (hehe)
Once upon a time, there were three pigs. Goku, Krillin, and Vegeta.
(A/N Imagine pigs with the hairstyles...and Krillin's dots...hehe)
One day, they noticed a storm coming in, and Vegeta said, "You two should come to my house because yours are only sticks and straw. The wind will blow them away."
"No it won't," Goku said.
"I agree with Goku," Krillin said. "We will be plenty safe in our own houses."
"No, you won't," Vegeta said. "The wind will..."
"No it won't," Goku interupted. "We're going home. Goodbye."
*****
"Man, I can't believe Vegeta," Krillin said. "Thinking our houses aren't strong. Well, we'll show him, right Goku?"
"Did you say something?" Goku said blankly.
"Nevermind," Krillin sighed. "Goodnight." They each went to their own houses.
*****
Later that night, Vegeta knocked on Goku's door.
"Are you sure you don't want to come over?" He asked.
"Yes, I'm sure," Goku answered, then shut the door.
Vegeta got the same answer from Krillin, then went back home.
*****
That night, the wind had picked up greatly. Krillin shuddered and decided to go to Goku's house. When he got there, he noticed some straw floating around. "Goku," He said, "Let's go back to my place."
"Okay," Goku said, but before they could get there, a bolt of lightning hit Krillin's house and burnt it to the ground.
"Um...let's go back inside," Goku suggested. But when they got inside, a big gust of wind came and blew all the straw away.
"Let's go to Vegeta's house," Krillin said.
They walked over to Vegeta's house and knocked on the door. When Vegeta answered, Goku said, "Can we please stay here until the storm is over? Both our houses have been destroyed."
Vegeta pretended to think a moment, then smirked and said, "No."
"Why not?" Krillin asked.
"Because, you both are idiots," Vegeta replied. He then shut the door in their faces. Goku and Krillin looked at each other, but before either of them could say anything, a big gust of wind came and blew them away.
Then Vegeta lived happily ever after.
*****
So, what do you think? Isn't it cute? Review? Please?
Til the next story!!
The Three Pigs (hehe)
Once upon a time, there were three pigs. Goku, Krillin, and Vegeta.
(A/N Imagine pigs with the hairstyles...and Krillin's dots...hehe)
One day, they noticed a storm coming in, and Vegeta said, "You two should come to my house because yours are only sticks and straw. The wind will blow them away."
"No it won't," Goku said.
"I agree with Goku," Krillin said. "We will be plenty safe in our own houses."
"No, you won't," Vegeta said. "The wind will..."
"No it won't," Goku interupted. "We're going home. Goodbye."
*****
"Man, I can't believe Vegeta," Krillin said. "Thinking our houses aren't strong. Well, we'll show him, right Goku?"
"Did you say something?" Goku said blankly.
"Nevermind," Krillin sighed. "Goodnight." They each went to their own houses.
*****
Later that night, Vegeta knocked on Goku's door.
"Are you sure you don't want to come over?" He asked.
"Yes, I'm sure," Goku answered, then shut the door.
Vegeta got the same answer from Krillin, then went back home.
*****
That night, the wind had picked up greatly. Krillin shuddered and decided to go to Goku's house. When he got there, he noticed some straw floating around. "Goku," He said, "Let's go back to my place."
"Okay," Goku said, but before they could get there, a bolt of lightning hit Krillin's house and burnt it to the ground.
"Um...let's go back inside," Goku suggested. But when they got inside, a big gust of wind came and blew all the straw away.
"Let's go to Vegeta's house," Krillin said.
They walked over to Vegeta's house and knocked on the door. When Vegeta answered, Goku said, "Can we please stay here until the storm is over? Both our houses have been destroyed."
Vegeta pretended to think a moment, then smirked and said, "No."
"Why not?" Krillin asked.
"Because, you both are idiots," Vegeta replied. He then shut the door in their faces. Goku and Krillin looked at each other, but before either of them could say anything, a big gust of wind came and blew them away.
Then Vegeta lived happily ever after.
*****
So, what do you think? Isn't it cute? Review? Please?
Til the next story!!