Ok I'm back to writing more chapters. I haven't been able to write as much
as usual but it is still progress so.... I'd like to acknowledge those who
responded to my writing.
Kiya1821-Shippo never learns lol! Chapter 4
Miss. Charlet- Good Chapter. Chapter 3
Miss Charlet- Sounds interesting, update soon. Chapter 2
The Fallen Angel of Death- Nice story though the style is hard to follow. You should continue, but I'd advise that you look into other forms of writing. I guess it doesn't matter though; after all I am a nearly soulless angel of death reincarnated into a human/dog... I guess my opinion doesn't count... T_T... Chapter 1
WindMageRina- Good. Maybe a little more description to it, but other than that, it was cool.
Kagome-Sama0560- OMG poor Miroku! You had me laughing so hard... SANGO is a Hentai! Major coolies... really loved ya story. Good job
AnimeGrl08- Good job. I hope you continue it soon. Please do. Next time make the lemons longer please.
Thanks for the reviews. I'll try to do this every 5 reviews I get so you guys know I appreciate what you are all doing for me.
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LAST CHAPTER:
Miroku entered the hut, face still livid with pain. He stared down at the floor unable to meet anyone's gaze
Kag-So the lech finally returns.
THIS CHAPTER:
Shi- So where have you been?
Miroku just stared at the floor too embarrassed to say anything.
Kag- Shippo be nice. Leave poor Miroku alone. He needs some time to think.
Kagome had glared at Miroku when she said the word 'think'. Miroku opened his mouth as if to say something in response, but his words were lost in the commotion that Shippo had unknowingly created.
Inu- He was laying unconscious.
He was suppressing his tremendous urge to laugh at the lecherous monk's earlier situation.
Shi- Why was he unconscious
Inu- Ask Miroku. I'm sure he'll gladly tell you.
Inuyasha was unable to suppress his laughter any longer. Miroku glared at his lack of tact and Shippo looked at him questioningly.
Shi- What's so funny? What happened to Miroku that has you laughing so much?
(No one answers)
Shi- Come on just tell me.
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The sun was finally rising over the distant hillside making the dew on the trees glisten like diamonds. All was silent in the small village, At least until Shippo landed on Miroku.
Mir- Ahhhhhhhhhh!!!!
Inu- What? What happened?
(looks over at Miroku)
Inu- Oh manhood still a little sensitive eh? Heh heh heh.
Mir- Stop mocking and just grab me something for the pain.
Kag- What's all the noise about? Can't a girl get any sleep!
Inu- Good morning to you too. Yeah Shippo just landed on Miroku. He's still in pain from last night.
Kag- That will teach him to keep his nose out of other people's personal affairs. Now, what are we having for breakfast?
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After breakfast Inuyasha and Kagome left is search of shard rumors, taking Shippo along too, of course; leaving Sango and Miroku alone for the afternoon.
San-Felling any better?
Sango raised her eyebrows hopefully. Miroku was silent for a moment and finally nodded his head 'yes'.
San- We finally have some time alone. Inuyasha and Kagome left looking for shards and they took Shippo with them. We can finally be together without any interruptions.
She walked over and sat down next to him. She laid her head on his shoulder and started to caress his leg. Miroku wrapped his arm around her waist and pulled her closer to him.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~to be continued~~~~~~~~~~~~~
muahahahaha I had to do it. But don't worry ill continue it in the next chapter. I just wanted to post my progress so here it is.
Kiya1821-Shippo never learns lol! Chapter 4
Miss. Charlet- Good Chapter. Chapter 3
Miss Charlet- Sounds interesting, update soon. Chapter 2
The Fallen Angel of Death- Nice story though the style is hard to follow. You should continue, but I'd advise that you look into other forms of writing. I guess it doesn't matter though; after all I am a nearly soulless angel of death reincarnated into a human/dog... I guess my opinion doesn't count... T_T... Chapter 1
WindMageRina- Good. Maybe a little more description to it, but other than that, it was cool.
Kagome-Sama0560- OMG poor Miroku! You had me laughing so hard... SANGO is a Hentai! Major coolies... really loved ya story. Good job
AnimeGrl08- Good job. I hope you continue it soon. Please do. Next time make the lemons longer please.
Thanks for the reviews. I'll try to do this every 5 reviews I get so you guys know I appreciate what you are all doing for me.
__________________________________________________
LAST CHAPTER:
Miroku entered the hut, face still livid with pain. He stared down at the floor unable to meet anyone's gaze
Kag-So the lech finally returns.
THIS CHAPTER:
Shi- So where have you been?
Miroku just stared at the floor too embarrassed to say anything.
Kag- Shippo be nice. Leave poor Miroku alone. He needs some time to think.
Kagome had glared at Miroku when she said the word 'think'. Miroku opened his mouth as if to say something in response, but his words were lost in the commotion that Shippo had unknowingly created.
Inu- He was laying unconscious.
He was suppressing his tremendous urge to laugh at the lecherous monk's earlier situation.
Shi- Why was he unconscious
Inu- Ask Miroku. I'm sure he'll gladly tell you.
Inuyasha was unable to suppress his laughter any longer. Miroku glared at his lack of tact and Shippo looked at him questioningly.
Shi- What's so funny? What happened to Miroku that has you laughing so much?
(No one answers)
Shi- Come on just tell me.
_____________________________________________________________________
The sun was finally rising over the distant hillside making the dew on the trees glisten like diamonds. All was silent in the small village, At least until Shippo landed on Miroku.
Mir- Ahhhhhhhhhh!!!!
Inu- What? What happened?
(looks over at Miroku)
Inu- Oh manhood still a little sensitive eh? Heh heh heh.
Mir- Stop mocking and just grab me something for the pain.
Kag- What's all the noise about? Can't a girl get any sleep!
Inu- Good morning to you too. Yeah Shippo just landed on Miroku. He's still in pain from last night.
Kag- That will teach him to keep his nose out of other people's personal affairs. Now, what are we having for breakfast?
_____________________________________________________________________
After breakfast Inuyasha and Kagome left is search of shard rumors, taking Shippo along too, of course; leaving Sango and Miroku alone for the afternoon.
San-Felling any better?
Sango raised her eyebrows hopefully. Miroku was silent for a moment and finally nodded his head 'yes'.
San- We finally have some time alone. Inuyasha and Kagome left looking for shards and they took Shippo with them. We can finally be together without any interruptions.
She walked over and sat down next to him. She laid her head on his shoulder and started to caress his leg. Miroku wrapped his arm around her waist and pulled her closer to him.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~to be continued~~~~~~~~~~~~~
muahahahaha I had to do it. But don't worry ill continue it in the next chapter. I just wanted to post my progress so here it is.