Disclaimer: I don't own final fantasy (10). I don't even own a copy of the
game, haha.
No, I don't now much about final fantasy, but I think it's characters are
so carefully drawn and written out that, yes, I just fall in love with
them. Be nice! I hope you like the first chapter!
READ: THIS IS MY FIRST SERIOUS FANFIC. BE NICE! :) ENJOY CHAPTER 2 UP SOON
The water turned pink. She lay in the tub. Eyes closed, wrists cut. She couldn't stand the pain anymore. Funny how something as little as a phone call can change your life.
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The red lights blinked in the darkness. Lulu lay in the ambulance on a stretcher. Her wrists ached. Her body felt weak with pain. She could only hear the sounds of the ambulance's alarming ring. She felt like the whole world was around her, watching her die. She imagined Wakka above her. She imagined Wakka holding her. She died, in Wakka's arms.
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ 9 days laters . Rikku's House
"I heard there was a guy," Rikku said. Yuna and Rikku, two best friends sat beside each other on the couch watching tv.
"What are you talking about?" Yuna said, puzzled.
"You know, Lulu. There was a guy."
"...?"
"About a week and a half ago, Lulu told me a guy called her. She was taking a bath and the guy commented on how beautiful she looked in the tub."
"What? Stop trying to scare me."
"I'm not trying to scare the shit out of you! It's true. That's what she told me."
"Stop it Rikku!"
"I'm not joking. What a creep. It might of been a joke though."
"If it was true, then why didn't she call the police?"
"I don't really know. Maybe there was a threat?"
"So, it is true then? A guy really called her?"
"That's just what I heard. Do you think she really commited suicide though? Do you think the guy was part of it? Maybe he killed her, and made it look like suicide."
"Goodnight, Rikku."
"What...? I wouldn't joke about Lulu's death."
"You're scaring me. Goodnight."
"I'm scared too."
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He dressed in red. It was 3:07 in the morning. He watched her sleep from the window. He left her a red flower on her door step.
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Tidus woke up to a dreary, cloudy day. He brushed his teeth and put on old t-shirt on then went downstairs to eat his breakfast. He carefully poured himself a cup of steaming hot coffee and made himself a bowl of cereal. He sat down at the table, eating and thinking. He had been thinking of one thing all night. His head ached. He didn't get enough rest. He had fallen asleep at 5:00 last night then woke up at 10:00 this morning.
"So, should I ask her out?" Tidus asked Wakka over the phone. "She's intimidating though. She never shows much interest in me."
"Go for it man, and stop asking me. I'm not the woman magnet here."
"So, what are you saying? That she'll say yes? And, no, Wakka, I'm not a 'woman magnet'"
"For sure she'll say yes! Trust me. You'll do great. She'll love you."
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"No, sorry. I'm... uh... busy friday night. Saturday night too. I got to focus on my studies," Yuna said.
"Oh... okay then. Maybe another time," Tidus said. His cheeks were burning red with embarassment. Luckily, he had asked over the phone.
After he hung up he slammed his fist onto the table. How could he have trusted someone like Wakka? He should of asked someone else. Someone with a brain. But why didn't she like him? Everyone liked him.
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"I just can't go out with a guy like him," Yuna said to Rikku over lunch. "I like him and all, but, I don't know if I can trust him."
"If you don't want him, that's fine with me. I'll take him anytime," Rikku said with a laugh. "Stop thinking about relationships and commitment. You're young, have fun!"
"I don't know. He just doesn't seem to be able to be tied down,"
"Well, what kind of guy do you want then? Don't be so picky," Rikku said paying the bill.
"What are you doing Rikku? Here take this," Yuna said. She stuffed a twenty dollar bill into Rikku's hands. "You can't pay for the whole thing."
"Yeesh! Let me pay. You can pay for the ice cream," Rikku laughed.
Yuna and Rikku walked down the sidewalk looking at the stores they passed. Rikku spotted a beautiful red dress with shining sequins. Rikku's eyes grew wide. "Oh my gosh! Yuna, look at that dress. It's gorgeous... you have to try it on. Save it for that winter dance next month."
"Oh Rikku! Don't be silly, you try it on. Red isn't my color anyways," Yuna said, but deep inside, she knew that the dress would look beautiful on her.
Rikku pulled Yuna into the store and jammed the dress into Yuna's hands. "Try it on. Trust me."
Yuna stared into the mirror. The dress fit snuggly on her petite, delicate body. She untied her hair, letting it fall over her shoulders. 'This is the dress...' She told herself.
"Hellooo...? Are you dead in there? Come out! I have to see this,"
Yuna walked out looking perfect. "I'm going to buy it," Yuna said.
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Rikku got out of her car. It was almost 7:00 and the sky was getting darker by the second. The November wind blew the dead branches on crooked trees making spooky shadows. As she walked up to her front door, she noticed a red rose on her door step. How long was it there? Why didn't she notice it this morning? She picked it up, hoping maybe a secret admirer had made a trip to her house. But, she didn't know.
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So, that's the end of Chapter one... It takes me a bit of time to write another chapter so Chapter 2 will be up maybe in a week or 2. I hoped you liked his story. Remember: This is the first "serious" fanfiction i've written, so, yes, I'm a newbie at this!
READ: THIS IS MY FIRST SERIOUS FANFIC. BE NICE! :) ENJOY CHAPTER 2 UP SOON
The water turned pink. She lay in the tub. Eyes closed, wrists cut. She couldn't stand the pain anymore. Funny how something as little as a phone call can change your life.
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
The red lights blinked in the darkness. Lulu lay in the ambulance on a stretcher. Her wrists ached. Her body felt weak with pain. She could only hear the sounds of the ambulance's alarming ring. She felt like the whole world was around her, watching her die. She imagined Wakka above her. She imagined Wakka holding her. She died, in Wakka's arms.
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ 9 days laters . Rikku's House
"I heard there was a guy," Rikku said. Yuna and Rikku, two best friends sat beside each other on the couch watching tv.
"What are you talking about?" Yuna said, puzzled.
"You know, Lulu. There was a guy."
"...?"
"About a week and a half ago, Lulu told me a guy called her. She was taking a bath and the guy commented on how beautiful she looked in the tub."
"What? Stop trying to scare me."
"I'm not trying to scare the shit out of you! It's true. That's what she told me."
"Stop it Rikku!"
"I'm not joking. What a creep. It might of been a joke though."
"If it was true, then why didn't she call the police?"
"I don't really know. Maybe there was a threat?"
"So, it is true then? A guy really called her?"
"That's just what I heard. Do you think she really commited suicide though? Do you think the guy was part of it? Maybe he killed her, and made it look like suicide."
"Goodnight, Rikku."
"What...? I wouldn't joke about Lulu's death."
"You're scaring me. Goodnight."
"I'm scared too."
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
He dressed in red. It was 3:07 in the morning. He watched her sleep from the window. He left her a red flower on her door step.
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Tidus woke up to a dreary, cloudy day. He brushed his teeth and put on old t-shirt on then went downstairs to eat his breakfast. He carefully poured himself a cup of steaming hot coffee and made himself a bowl of cereal. He sat down at the table, eating and thinking. He had been thinking of one thing all night. His head ached. He didn't get enough rest. He had fallen asleep at 5:00 last night then woke up at 10:00 this morning.
"So, should I ask her out?" Tidus asked Wakka over the phone. "She's intimidating though. She never shows much interest in me."
"Go for it man, and stop asking me. I'm not the woman magnet here."
"So, what are you saying? That she'll say yes? And, no, Wakka, I'm not a 'woman magnet'"
"For sure she'll say yes! Trust me. You'll do great. She'll love you."
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
"No, sorry. I'm... uh... busy friday night. Saturday night too. I got to focus on my studies," Yuna said.
"Oh... okay then. Maybe another time," Tidus said. His cheeks were burning red with embarassment. Luckily, he had asked over the phone.
After he hung up he slammed his fist onto the table. How could he have trusted someone like Wakka? He should of asked someone else. Someone with a brain. But why didn't she like him? Everyone liked him.
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
"I just can't go out with a guy like him," Yuna said to Rikku over lunch. "I like him and all, but, I don't know if I can trust him."
"If you don't want him, that's fine with me. I'll take him anytime," Rikku said with a laugh. "Stop thinking about relationships and commitment. You're young, have fun!"
"I don't know. He just doesn't seem to be able to be tied down,"
"Well, what kind of guy do you want then? Don't be so picky," Rikku said paying the bill.
"What are you doing Rikku? Here take this," Yuna said. She stuffed a twenty dollar bill into Rikku's hands. "You can't pay for the whole thing."
"Yeesh! Let me pay. You can pay for the ice cream," Rikku laughed.
Yuna and Rikku walked down the sidewalk looking at the stores they passed. Rikku spotted a beautiful red dress with shining sequins. Rikku's eyes grew wide. "Oh my gosh! Yuna, look at that dress. It's gorgeous... you have to try it on. Save it for that winter dance next month."
"Oh Rikku! Don't be silly, you try it on. Red isn't my color anyways," Yuna said, but deep inside, she knew that the dress would look beautiful on her.
Rikku pulled Yuna into the store and jammed the dress into Yuna's hands. "Try it on. Trust me."
Yuna stared into the mirror. The dress fit snuggly on her petite, delicate body. She untied her hair, letting it fall over her shoulders. 'This is the dress...' She told herself.
"Hellooo...? Are you dead in there? Come out! I have to see this,"
Yuna walked out looking perfect. "I'm going to buy it," Yuna said.
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Rikku got out of her car. It was almost 7:00 and the sky was getting darker by the second. The November wind blew the dead branches on crooked trees making spooky shadows. As she walked up to her front door, she noticed a red rose on her door step. How long was it there? Why didn't she notice it this morning? She picked it up, hoping maybe a secret admirer had made a trip to her house. But, she didn't know.
***************
So, that's the end of Chapter one... It takes me a bit of time to write another chapter so Chapter 2 will be up maybe in a week or 2. I hoped you liked his story. Remember: This is the first "serious" fanfiction i've written, so, yes, I'm a newbie at this!