Chapter 2
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Lara's looking out the windows of her limo and down at her manor "Please go faster I have a plane to catch "she said "Yes yes" The limo driver said He did as she said and went faster "Thank you" Lara said in a satisfied voice She arrived at the airport an hour later ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
She opened the door of the limo "Lady Croft" She had remembered this man the manager He had started running out with his secretary who had piles of paper in her hand "La...La.La...Lady Croft" He stated "Hello" Lara said "I had a call from your butler as soon as I heard I reserved a plane for you" "Plane!" Lara said "Only the best for lady Croft" "Ha ha" he looked at his secretary she started to laugh when she saw his face "Um this way he said in a nervous voice" Oh by the way my name is Edward clear Owner of clear airports And my Secretary Denise" she smiled "Pleasure to meet you Lady Croft" She said as she took a couple of papers from her hand a gave it to Edward They started to walk she took her bag "Please let me" Edward said "That won't be necessary "Lara said "Oh ok" He said She was in the plane and ready to go "choi" 'Bye Edward ' Lara called out
She arrived at Egypt not knowing whats going to happen Or whats installed for her But she knows shes ready Please review my work And I will write third chapter
Lara's looking out the windows of her limo and down at her manor "Please go faster I have a plane to catch "she said "Yes yes" The limo driver said He did as she said and went faster "Thank you" Lara said in a satisfied voice She arrived at the airport an hour later ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
She opened the door of the limo "Lady Croft" She had remembered this man the manager He had started running out with his secretary who had piles of paper in her hand "La...La.La...Lady Croft" He stated "Hello" Lara said "I had a call from your butler as soon as I heard I reserved a plane for you" "Plane!" Lara said "Only the best for lady Croft" "Ha ha" he looked at his secretary she started to laugh when she saw his face "Um this way he said in a nervous voice" Oh by the way my name is Edward clear Owner of clear airports And my Secretary Denise" she smiled "Pleasure to meet you Lady Croft" She said as she took a couple of papers from her hand a gave it to Edward They started to walk she took her bag "Please let me" Edward said "That won't be necessary "Lara said "Oh ok" He said She was in the plane and ready to go "choi" 'Bye Edward ' Lara called out
She arrived at Egypt not knowing whats going to happen Or whats installed for her But she knows shes ready Please review my work And I will write third chapter
