Okay, before I start the long-awaited Chappy 7, it's time I did something
that's long overdue. I don't care if it takes me all night, but I'm going
to thank each and every one of you that reviewed for Lost Souls. I know
that I love it when people do that, and I hope this inspires you to KEEP ON
REVIEWING!
fauna- not much, but that's all it takes to make me squeal out in joy. People underestimate what, excellent, keep up, can mean to someone. Thanks.
slipp- I appreciate the compliment you gave me, it made me feel mature. LOL!
Jamie- hi, thanks for reading my story. To answer your question (and if anyone else had had the same one), the [1] in chappy 1 meant that todd fan gave me the idea to write, "something doesn't smell right with half- pint."
Adie- ya, thanks. I agree, my story is interesting. LOL! I promise, I'll try to keep this story as long as possible.
cheeky-bear007- ya, poor Kitty. But don't cry for her yet, because I have a lot more bad stuff in store for her! MUA-HA-HA-HA! Don't get me wrong, I'm a huge Kitty fan, and I plan a happy ending for her (or do I?)
Yelhsa D- yes, Duncan did it. That jerk! I hate him! I* hate dumb jocks! Damn the dumb jocks! DAMN ALL THE DUMB JOCKS! No prob for your reviews, I love reviews and I always review good stories, cause I know that's what I like people to do for me.
Ambrosia- Wow, LOOOONG review! Thanx! I love reviews of all sorts. I really liked all the things you thought about my story, and since there was so much to reply, I won't post it here. But I'm sure you got the jist of it in the email I sent you.
Sly- I often write reviews like that, LOL! When I read that all someone says is wow, it means I made such a shocking story. That's a compliment to me. Thanx!
Raia Heartsblood- the person that did that horrible, horrible thing to Kitty was Duncan! (I H8 that jerk!!!!!) Thanx for reviewing!
inuficcrzy- thanx, it is very cool (LOL). I liked what you wrote about kurt/lance/Duncan. Thanx, it gives me an idea.
Rogue- thanx. again, it doesn't matter what you write. I almost went insane when no one wrote reviews for Intro of Sasha. I thought no one read it, and if they did, they didn't like it. But then I thought, maybe I should write one based around an actual char of Evo, and voila! It means a lot for me to read that people like my stories.
I know, some of you are thinking, wait, you missed me! No, I just saved the two closest ones for last! The great authors award goes to.*drumroll*!!!
todd fan- You are so great! Your stories are amazing, and trust me, I wouldn't be anywhere without you. Your reviews really help me, and you don't know how much that means to me. All of our little chats really helped me get this story straightened out. Thanx a bunch!
Nactcgleiskette- thanx a lot. I know you didn't review, but I still appreciate all of our chats. you introduced me to Exiles, and taught me a lot about the world of fanfics! Thanx again!
LOL! Please keep on reviewing. These things keep me fueled, please! And, if you continue writing them, ill continue posting ur name (unless u don't want me to) in chappies! Yay!
And now, chappy 7!
* * * * *
"C' mon! You'll feel mich better if you do it! I promise!" Scott said, shoving Kurt toward the door. He was sick of it. Kurt had been moping around all week. He was avoiding the infirmary. If he did have to pass by it, (which he did to go for their daily training sessions in the danger room) his tail hung limp, and he kept his eyes on the floor.
He refused to look into the glass window where the poor girl still lay. He couldn't admit to himself that Kitty had done this to herself. His Katzchen, teetering between life and death. And it was her own fault. 'Why would she do such a stupid thing?' he would often ask himself.
And now, Scott was forcing him to sit with her.
"You won't regret it!" Scott yelled at the elf.
"Nein!" Kurt yelled. "Please, don't make me do it. Please!" Kurt looked pleadingly to the older X-Man.
Scott sat down next to him on the bed and looked him straight in the eyes. "Kurt, man. You have to. Hank doesn't know if Kitty will ever wake up. Do you want her to die, and not to have ever said goodbye to her. To even have talked to her?!" Scott asked pleadingly.
Kurt felt sick; he hadn't even considered it. He could never imagine Kitty dying. He now realized what he had to do.
* * * * *
He was gruff. She didn't know who he was; she was just too drunk. But it did feel nice. Finally, someone wanted her. And then everything spun out of control. At first, they had just been kissing, if it was very passionate. It wasn't soft butterfly kisses anymore, it was Beer-bad-not-nice kissing.
Then IT shoved her on the bed. IT began unzipping her pants.
'No!' Kitty screamed in her head. But she couldn't find her voice. This wasn't nice; this wasn't love. This was, WRONG! But IT kept on. Greedily, and IT wouldn't stop. Wouldn't STOP! STOP!
"Mmmmph!" Kitty mumbled. She tried to push IT away, but IT was too strong. She began whimpering, not knowing what to do.
When it was over, the fog left the room. IT walked to the door to leave, and Kitty still hadn't seen its face. Then, IT turned. IT faced her, and said, smiling, "Thanks." Then it left.
Kitty was shaken. She felt, dirty. So dirty! Gasping, she went for her clothes. She was sore, sore all over. He had been too rough with her. Bruised and broken, she curled herself up in a corner and quietly began to cry.
* * * * *
"Kitty?" Kurt asked weakly. He sat down softly next to her. She seemed soft, so weak. He had never seen Katzchen in such a state before. It ripped his heart apart to do this, but he knew deep down he had to.
He ran his blue finger along her cheek, and began to cry. "Mein gott!" he yelled. "Why would you do this!?" he demanded of the sleeping girl. "Do you know how much pain you have caused?!" he screamed at her. But he couldn't be mad at her. One look, and he broke down again.
"Katzchen,I don't know what I would do if I lost you. If we lost you! You are our family, Katzchen! You hold us together! Oh, Katz." He cried freely now, not even worried if anyone would see.
"Don't you see, Katz? I love you." And the words were out. He loved. He knew for sure, and a rush of feelings overwhelmed him.
He leaned over the bed and embraced the girl. He kissed her softly on the cheek, and sat down. he didn't say anything for the rest of the night. But he didn't need to. Kitty had heard everything. And he stayed with her, for the rest of that weekend.
P.S. Wow, this was a long one!!! I really like this chappy, it let off some emotional steam and finally got around to what happened to Kitty. I really like hoe Kurt finally admitted his love. Awww! Anyhoo, enough with the self- promo, let's bring on the reviews!!
fauna- not much, but that's all it takes to make me squeal out in joy. People underestimate what, excellent, keep up, can mean to someone. Thanks.
slipp- I appreciate the compliment you gave me, it made me feel mature. LOL!
Jamie- hi, thanks for reading my story. To answer your question (and if anyone else had had the same one), the [1] in chappy 1 meant that todd fan gave me the idea to write, "something doesn't smell right with half- pint."
Adie- ya, thanks. I agree, my story is interesting. LOL! I promise, I'll try to keep this story as long as possible.
cheeky-bear007- ya, poor Kitty. But don't cry for her yet, because I have a lot more bad stuff in store for her! MUA-HA-HA-HA! Don't get me wrong, I'm a huge Kitty fan, and I plan a happy ending for her (or do I?)
Yelhsa D- yes, Duncan did it. That jerk! I hate him! I* hate dumb jocks! Damn the dumb jocks! DAMN ALL THE DUMB JOCKS! No prob for your reviews, I love reviews and I always review good stories, cause I know that's what I like people to do for me.
Ambrosia- Wow, LOOOONG review! Thanx! I love reviews of all sorts. I really liked all the things you thought about my story, and since there was so much to reply, I won't post it here. But I'm sure you got the jist of it in the email I sent you.
Sly- I often write reviews like that, LOL! When I read that all someone says is wow, it means I made such a shocking story. That's a compliment to me. Thanx!
Raia Heartsblood- the person that did that horrible, horrible thing to Kitty was Duncan! (I H8 that jerk!!!!!) Thanx for reviewing!
inuficcrzy- thanx, it is very cool (LOL). I liked what you wrote about kurt/lance/Duncan. Thanx, it gives me an idea.
Rogue- thanx. again, it doesn't matter what you write. I almost went insane when no one wrote reviews for Intro of Sasha. I thought no one read it, and if they did, they didn't like it. But then I thought, maybe I should write one based around an actual char of Evo, and voila! It means a lot for me to read that people like my stories.
I know, some of you are thinking, wait, you missed me! No, I just saved the two closest ones for last! The great authors award goes to.*drumroll*!!!
todd fan- You are so great! Your stories are amazing, and trust me, I wouldn't be anywhere without you. Your reviews really help me, and you don't know how much that means to me. All of our little chats really helped me get this story straightened out. Thanx a bunch!
Nactcgleiskette- thanx a lot. I know you didn't review, but I still appreciate all of our chats. you introduced me to Exiles, and taught me a lot about the world of fanfics! Thanx again!
LOL! Please keep on reviewing. These things keep me fueled, please! And, if you continue writing them, ill continue posting ur name (unless u don't want me to) in chappies! Yay!
And now, chappy 7!
* * * * *
"C' mon! You'll feel mich better if you do it! I promise!" Scott said, shoving Kurt toward the door. He was sick of it. Kurt had been moping around all week. He was avoiding the infirmary. If he did have to pass by it, (which he did to go for their daily training sessions in the danger room) his tail hung limp, and he kept his eyes on the floor.
He refused to look into the glass window where the poor girl still lay. He couldn't admit to himself that Kitty had done this to herself. His Katzchen, teetering between life and death. And it was her own fault. 'Why would she do such a stupid thing?' he would often ask himself.
And now, Scott was forcing him to sit with her.
"You won't regret it!" Scott yelled at the elf.
"Nein!" Kurt yelled. "Please, don't make me do it. Please!" Kurt looked pleadingly to the older X-Man.
Scott sat down next to him on the bed and looked him straight in the eyes. "Kurt, man. You have to. Hank doesn't know if Kitty will ever wake up. Do you want her to die, and not to have ever said goodbye to her. To even have talked to her?!" Scott asked pleadingly.
Kurt felt sick; he hadn't even considered it. He could never imagine Kitty dying. He now realized what he had to do.
* * * * *
He was gruff. She didn't know who he was; she was just too drunk. But it did feel nice. Finally, someone wanted her. And then everything spun out of control. At first, they had just been kissing, if it was very passionate. It wasn't soft butterfly kisses anymore, it was Beer-bad-not-nice kissing.
Then IT shoved her on the bed. IT began unzipping her pants.
'No!' Kitty screamed in her head. But she couldn't find her voice. This wasn't nice; this wasn't love. This was, WRONG! But IT kept on. Greedily, and IT wouldn't stop. Wouldn't STOP! STOP!
"Mmmmph!" Kitty mumbled. She tried to push IT away, but IT was too strong. She began whimpering, not knowing what to do.
When it was over, the fog left the room. IT walked to the door to leave, and Kitty still hadn't seen its face. Then, IT turned. IT faced her, and said, smiling, "Thanks." Then it left.
Kitty was shaken. She felt, dirty. So dirty! Gasping, she went for her clothes. She was sore, sore all over. He had been too rough with her. Bruised and broken, she curled herself up in a corner and quietly began to cry.
* * * * *
"Kitty?" Kurt asked weakly. He sat down softly next to her. She seemed soft, so weak. He had never seen Katzchen in such a state before. It ripped his heart apart to do this, but he knew deep down he had to.
He ran his blue finger along her cheek, and began to cry. "Mein gott!" he yelled. "Why would you do this!?" he demanded of the sleeping girl. "Do you know how much pain you have caused?!" he screamed at her. But he couldn't be mad at her. One look, and he broke down again.
"Katzchen,I don't know what I would do if I lost you. If we lost you! You are our family, Katzchen! You hold us together! Oh, Katz." He cried freely now, not even worried if anyone would see.
"Don't you see, Katz? I love you." And the words were out. He loved. He knew for sure, and a rush of feelings overwhelmed him.
He leaned over the bed and embraced the girl. He kissed her softly on the cheek, and sat down. he didn't say anything for the rest of the night. But he didn't need to. Kitty had heard everything. And he stayed with her, for the rest of that weekend.
P.S. Wow, this was a long one!!! I really like this chappy, it let off some emotional steam and finally got around to what happened to Kitty. I really like hoe Kurt finally admitted his love. Awww! Anyhoo, enough with the self- promo, let's bring on the reviews!!