Thanks cookies for the constructive criticism! It helped and I'll try to
explain during this chapter! But not all of it! Haha! You won't get it all
until maybe, maybe the next.
Ch.9 Elizabeth's Evil Plan- Unveiled
[Same day-Rory's room]
[In Rory's head] 'I can't believe those two! My boyfriend and my own flesh and blood-I think. Kissing! And in my living room! I can never sit on that couch again.never! It's swarming.festering with Eliza and Jess spit germs! I'm just so---'
[bum bum bum bum bum.bum bum. Knocks on the door]
Rory: "Go away!"
Lor: "It's me sweetie!"
Rory: "I don't care! I want to be alone. I mine as well get used to it. If my boyfriend makes out with my sister then I have no chance with boys anymore."
Lor: "Don't talk that way Rory. It's not your fault Elizabeth gets-well anyway! I'm going to the Cat Club! Do you want anything?"
Rory: "No!"
Lor: "Ya sure now? I can't interest you in some oven mitts?"
Rory: "Please leave me alone."
[Lorelei leaves]
[Later that day in Elizabeth's "room"]
[In her head] maybe I should go over my plan again. Don't want to mess it up.
[In her journal]: dear journal,
'Today was my first day in stars hallows. It's a quaint little town. I met my mother and sister and her boyfriend. It was really nice until later that night. Rory went to rent a movie for movie night. She invited her boyfriend and he seemed really cool. He was really cool, that is, until rory and lorelei left the room. The second they left he's all over me! It's uncontrollable! I couldn't stop him! Well he pulled me ontop of him just as rory came back...trouble! She thought I started it! And jess even said I did! Nice first impression I got of him huh? So I went off to look at the town escorted by Dean (rory's ex and definitely NOT my idea). Well as we returned from our walk he kissed me on the porch! This was getting ridiculous and of course rory and all of them saw! Again it's my entire fault! So now I'm grounded, rory and jess are in a fight and lorelei hates me! What's a girl to do? Make up for it that's what. So I g2g apologize to everyone for something I didn't even do! I'll write back later and give the update.' Elizabeth~
Ch.9 Elizabeth's Evil Plan- Unveiled
[Same day-Rory's room]
[In Rory's head] 'I can't believe those two! My boyfriend and my own flesh and blood-I think. Kissing! And in my living room! I can never sit on that couch again.never! It's swarming.festering with Eliza and Jess spit germs! I'm just so---'
[bum bum bum bum bum.bum bum. Knocks on the door]
Rory: "Go away!"
Lor: "It's me sweetie!"
Rory: "I don't care! I want to be alone. I mine as well get used to it. If my boyfriend makes out with my sister then I have no chance with boys anymore."
Lor: "Don't talk that way Rory. It's not your fault Elizabeth gets-well anyway! I'm going to the Cat Club! Do you want anything?"
Rory: "No!"
Lor: "Ya sure now? I can't interest you in some oven mitts?"
Rory: "Please leave me alone."
[Lorelei leaves]
[Later that day in Elizabeth's "room"]
[In her head] maybe I should go over my plan again. Don't want to mess it up.
[In her journal]: dear journal,
'Today was my first day in stars hallows. It's a quaint little town. I met my mother and sister and her boyfriend. It was really nice until later that night. Rory went to rent a movie for movie night. She invited her boyfriend and he seemed really cool. He was really cool, that is, until rory and lorelei left the room. The second they left he's all over me! It's uncontrollable! I couldn't stop him! Well he pulled me ontop of him just as rory came back...trouble! She thought I started it! And jess even said I did! Nice first impression I got of him huh? So I went off to look at the town escorted by Dean (rory's ex and definitely NOT my idea). Well as we returned from our walk he kissed me on the porch! This was getting ridiculous and of course rory and all of them saw! Again it's my entire fault! So now I'm grounded, rory and jess are in a fight and lorelei hates me! What's a girl to do? Make up for it that's what. So I g2g apologize to everyone for something I didn't even do! I'll write back later and give the update.' Elizabeth~