Again, thanks to the fellow reviewers: Mindy / Mimato-chicky-chick /
AznSweetZ / Jen / LiL-AnImE-LuVeR / lazygirl / Flesh-N-Bone / and last but
not least, Aoi Tenshi ;)
I sent most of you an e-mail to notify you of newly added chapters, and I also attached a Mimato image I drew - ESPECIALLY for you reviewers, don't you feel special? Haha, hope you guys like
(FROM THE LAST CHAPTER)
Matt saw her bland expression and quickly raised his right arm and pushed Jun on her shoulder to throw her on to the carpet. His friends were all sitting there in shock, not knowing whether they should even speak at the moment.
"Mimi.. that.. that.. that can be explained!" Matt blurted out, panicking inside. Mimi just leaned against the wall, locking her blank gaze his while tears began squeezing their way out of her eyes.
By Heart; Chapter five
(MIMI'S POINT OF VIEW)
I glared at Matt, searching in his crystal sapphire eyes for an explanation. But he only stuttered and remained speechless. Too giddy after making out with Jun, I guess. The hurt that was striking throughout my entire body was unbearable. Even the uncomfortable silence was ear piercing. If I weren't against the wall right now, I'd probably fall right on the spot. I can almost feel myself dying - it was strange. I want to break away from here. And away from here, NOW.
(NORMAL POINT OF VIEW)
Mimi, eyes fogging up with tears, jerked her body around and began walking towards the door. Her entire body was shaking uncontrollably that forced her to fall forwards. Matt reacted quickly to wrap his arms around her and prevent her from the fall, only to have his arms pushed aside by Mimi who screamed, "LET GO!" Matt just stood there dumfounded as she bolted towards the door and out in the street.
Sora, Tai, Davis, Kari and TK immediately stood up and ran towards the door after glaring sternly at Jun who sat with her arms across her chest, huffing. "Well? Don't just stand there! Let's go find Mimi" Tai yelled at Matt as he and the rest of the crew ran outside the door. Matt, snapping out of his trance raced behind them.
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'Where am I running to?' Mimi thought.
"Mimi! Wait! Where are you going?" Sora yelled. Mimi turned to see her friends running behind her. 'Matt's there.. why isn't he back inside to accompany Jun?' she thought bitterly as she continued to run. The dark clouds hung over the streets of Odaiba and rain began bursting out over the city. Mimi did not intend to stop, even though her navy tee and khakis shorts were both dripping wet with rainwater. Her vision was a blur and her hair clip become loose with her running and soon snapped off, leaving her pink hair clinging to her neck - still, her legs continued to run, step after step. "Mimi! Stop! Please stop!" TK called out from behind.
Mimi ran and turned at the sidewalk, facing the street. The pouring rain was blinding her along with the tears that were formed within her eyes. She ran out to cross the street, swiping her hand across her face to try to wipe the water away from her eyes. "MIMI, WAIT! DON'T GO ACROSS THES STREET YET! THE LIGHT'S NOT GRE-"
Mimi did not manage to hear the rest of Tai's screaming. Her skin burned as she was roughly thrown across the cement ground. As her head throbbed with the harsh impact, she realized that she's been hit. By a car? A truck? She was uncertain. Her ears struggled to hear to figure out all that was going around her -
.. "OH MY GOD" .. "MIMI" .. "SHE'S HIT!" .. "YOU JERK! YOU FUCKING HIT MIMI!" .. "MATT, CALM DOWN!" .. "STOP ARGUING, PLEASE!" .. "WE NEED TO GET MIMI TO THE HOSPITAL" .. "CALL THE DAMN AMBULENCE NOW!" .. "
She heard the repetitive sound of the ambulance sirens wailing as she began to black out. The last thing that rang through her brain was the faded constant crying of "MIMI! MIMI! MIMI! MIMI!" . .. .. .. ..
asdfasdfasdfasdf that was BY FAR the shortest chapter that existed :(
Sorry if this *cough*SHORT*cough* chapter disappointed you in anyway, I just about have NO more ideas to add to this scene - therefore making it short (dies)
DON'T WORRY - Mimi will NOT die, haha. I can't bear to write tear jerkers, so bite me :)
I promise to get the chapter six up SOON - as an apology for such a lame chapter you just read there (fallsover) Don't throw vegetables at me! Lol, keep reviews coming though, they're such nice things to read and be inspired from 3333
3 femique
I sent most of you an e-mail to notify you of newly added chapters, and I also attached a Mimato image I drew - ESPECIALLY for you reviewers, don't you feel special? Haha, hope you guys like
(FROM THE LAST CHAPTER)
Matt saw her bland expression and quickly raised his right arm and pushed Jun on her shoulder to throw her on to the carpet. His friends were all sitting there in shock, not knowing whether they should even speak at the moment.
"Mimi.. that.. that.. that can be explained!" Matt blurted out, panicking inside. Mimi just leaned against the wall, locking her blank gaze his while tears began squeezing their way out of her eyes.
By Heart; Chapter five
(MIMI'S POINT OF VIEW)
I glared at Matt, searching in his crystal sapphire eyes for an explanation. But he only stuttered and remained speechless. Too giddy after making out with Jun, I guess. The hurt that was striking throughout my entire body was unbearable. Even the uncomfortable silence was ear piercing. If I weren't against the wall right now, I'd probably fall right on the spot. I can almost feel myself dying - it was strange. I want to break away from here. And away from here, NOW.
(NORMAL POINT OF VIEW)
Mimi, eyes fogging up with tears, jerked her body around and began walking towards the door. Her entire body was shaking uncontrollably that forced her to fall forwards. Matt reacted quickly to wrap his arms around her and prevent her from the fall, only to have his arms pushed aside by Mimi who screamed, "LET GO!" Matt just stood there dumfounded as she bolted towards the door and out in the street.
Sora, Tai, Davis, Kari and TK immediately stood up and ran towards the door after glaring sternly at Jun who sat with her arms across her chest, huffing. "Well? Don't just stand there! Let's go find Mimi" Tai yelled at Matt as he and the rest of the crew ran outside the door. Matt, snapping out of his trance raced behind them.
---
'Where am I running to?' Mimi thought.
"Mimi! Wait! Where are you going?" Sora yelled. Mimi turned to see her friends running behind her. 'Matt's there.. why isn't he back inside to accompany Jun?' she thought bitterly as she continued to run. The dark clouds hung over the streets of Odaiba and rain began bursting out over the city. Mimi did not intend to stop, even though her navy tee and khakis shorts were both dripping wet with rainwater. Her vision was a blur and her hair clip become loose with her running and soon snapped off, leaving her pink hair clinging to her neck - still, her legs continued to run, step after step. "Mimi! Stop! Please stop!" TK called out from behind.
Mimi ran and turned at the sidewalk, facing the street. The pouring rain was blinding her along with the tears that were formed within her eyes. She ran out to cross the street, swiping her hand across her face to try to wipe the water away from her eyes. "MIMI, WAIT! DON'T GO ACROSS THES STREET YET! THE LIGHT'S NOT GRE-"
Mimi did not manage to hear the rest of Tai's screaming. Her skin burned as she was roughly thrown across the cement ground. As her head throbbed with the harsh impact, she realized that she's been hit. By a car? A truck? She was uncertain. Her ears struggled to hear to figure out all that was going around her -
.. "OH MY GOD" .. "MIMI" .. "SHE'S HIT!" .. "YOU JERK! YOU FUCKING HIT MIMI!" .. "MATT, CALM DOWN!" .. "STOP ARGUING, PLEASE!" .. "WE NEED TO GET MIMI TO THE HOSPITAL" .. "CALL THE DAMN AMBULENCE NOW!" .. "
She heard the repetitive sound of the ambulance sirens wailing as she began to black out. The last thing that rang through her brain was the faded constant crying of "MIMI! MIMI! MIMI! MIMI!" . .. .. .. ..
asdfasdfasdfasdf that was BY FAR the shortest chapter that existed :(
Sorry if this *cough*SHORT*cough* chapter disappointed you in anyway, I just about have NO more ideas to add to this scene - therefore making it short (dies)
DON'T WORRY - Mimi will NOT die, haha. I can't bear to write tear jerkers, so bite me :)
I promise to get the chapter six up SOON - as an apology for such a lame chapter you just read there (fallsover) Don't throw vegetables at me! Lol, keep reviews coming though, they're such nice things to read and be inspired from 3333
3 femique